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Redemption
~Act One~
I mumbled a bunch of non sense when I woke up...I looked to my side were my girlfriend would be sleeping...I only seen my arm...Then i seen a note on the pillow. It read:
John,
I had to get to work early this morning, i tried waking you up; But you wouldnt wake up...So i let you sleep.
Love,
Tamitha
Ugh....Were to start with Tamitha...She is the most beautiful woman i've ever seen...But me...Oh god, i dont understand how she could love me...I have a scar going down the side of my face...Im an ugly man...I dont know how she loves me...Shes never said shes loved me tho...Shes wrote it...But never said it. We have been together for 7 months now...I decided to wake up and get ready for the day...I looked at the alarm clock...It was 7:23 In the morning...I jumped in the shower, dryed off my hair, got dressed, ran downstairs, grabed my wallet from the table, and got my coat on. I looked at the clock again, 7:57. I started walking to the 7 - 11 next door to me. I thought...Eh im not doing anything important today...Im gonna go see Tamitha.I was halfway to her store, then a muscular black man had came up to me and showed me a knife... I knew he was threatining me, asking me for money...I showed him no fear and just looked deeply into his brown eyes, he had said something dumb and ran off. I finaly got to Tamithas store; i wish i never walked a foot in the store...I seen her with her best friend, kissing him...He was holding her...She seen me after she kissed him, she walked up to me slowly...She had a sad face on...She tried to give me a hug...I pushed her away... She started to cry, but i did'nt care... I walked home, and she walked in...She had seen me packing my stuff into a backpack i had. She tryed to explain herself, but i told her "Everything you ever said to me, was a lie, All the months i've kept you safe, you made me happy, then destroyed me...Fuck you; your a lieing bitch...I'll be dead by tommorow..." I instantly got mad and fliped a table and started throwing things. i swore at myself when i got a piece of glass stuck in my hand. I then told her " Are you happy bitch? " and walked out the door. I started walking when i swore to myself, that her, and her friend will not get out of this area alive...Neither will anyone else i see...I had went to my friend's house, and asked if I could crash at his house...His name was Tim, he was an Army Vetran...He said i couldnt stay that night...I got mad at him deep down, and walked across the street to the hotel. I got Room 14A. I took a pen out of my backpack and a Notebook, and wrote:
My name is John Fuller, I was cheated on, betrayed, and hated...I am only 23 years of age, but im done caring about my life, im filled with hate, rage, and sadness, im starting my spree at 7AM tommorow...
I looked at the gash on my hand that was put there from a piece of glass...I noticed that it was only 9:31PM...I left the note on the bed and went to sleep on the floor...I woke up the next morning, made sure the note was on my bed, and walked out the door...Ready to start my spree.
~Act ||~
I started walking to the gunshop across the street, I had brought my knife, and stabed the owner in the chest... I grabed a Shotgun, .45 Colt, Regular Pistol, and left. As soon as i left, i seen a cop get out of his car, i shot him in the chest, I seen a chunk of his back fly out when i shot him, then i walked up to him, i seen that he was still alive. He was gushing large amounts of blood, so i just steped on his neck, breaking it instantly.
I went back to Tamithas house and she answerd the door. I hit her as hard as i could when she turned around. I took her to the basement, taped her mouth, and hung her by her arms. She woke up about 45 Minutes later. I showed her my knife i was carrying around with me, and she gasped. "If i cant have you, no one will..." I told her as she was crying. I sat down and said "Tamitha...You fed my head, lies...You said you loved me...You said you wouldnt leave me...You said you wouldnt cheat on me...But you lied..." I took the tape off and she screamed then said sorry, alot. "All i wanted in life was love, then you came in my life and you walked in my life, makeing me feel like i was someone and not no one. " I said. I took out the knife and rammed it in her stomache. I took the knife out then dug my thumb in her wound and twisted it around. I left her there as she died slowly, and walked outside with my guns...I seen a cop with sirens on heading my way...I rushed to Tims house, and knocked on his door, he didnt see me so i slit his throat, and watched the ammounts of blood just gush out of his neck...I took his car keys and got in his car, the cops wernt to far away, so i started the car up, and started shooting at the cop when he got out of his car... I relized there was no turning back now...
~Act |||~
I was off to the park to kill innocent people. I grabed my Pistol, and snuck up on an old man, and then shot him in the back of his head when he didnt see me, people started freaking out. I felt a sharp pain in my head and fell over, i seen images of the name Scott and a man with short brown hair...He said "let me do this..." I heard sirens then got up and ran off... I was in detroit, and remebered, this is were Tamithas friend lived there. I went to his appartment, and knocked on his door, I knocked him to the ground, i took out a pistol and started laughing...He was begging for mercy, that he would not get. I grabed his jaw and riped it down, untill i heard a crack, i then stuck my pistol down his throat and shot him. I had to find somewere to hide for awhile... I made my way south into the woods... I seen a cabin...Knocked on the door and a kid around 6 or 7 answerd the door. I asked him if his mom and dad are home...He replyed "Upstairs" in a childish voice that would make you wanna go Aww...But i looked around and seen nothing but trees and darkness...This must be a private cabin. I stabed the kid in the neck, and left the knife. I walked up the cabins stairs and heard moaning noises...I knew what they were doing, i just went in there and shot them both...I knew i was safe here for awhile...I finaly laid down and ignored the smell of Death.
~3 Months Later~
Its been three full months since the last incident. Ive lost around 20 pounds...I think people forgot what i did, and i walked outside. I looked down and seen a note...Folded with my name on it...I opend it and read it;
Its been a couple months now John. Many forgot about you, but i didnt. You can call me Scott...John, meet me in the alley of Giovannies restraunt...Unless you want to die...Real soon. meet me up there 7:30 TODAY
I didnt know weither or not i could trust this...Scott...But the name sounded familiar. I got to the alley at 7:31PM. Scott came out of a shadow and said " Mr. Fuller, so nice to finaly meet you, Get in my car, were going to kill your father." He was smiling. He wanted to kill my father because he was a scientest...Who knew alot...I know that was the reason. I got in the car, and he handed me a Crowbar...And a video camera, he said "Video Tape It"...I drove off to my fathers house.
When we got there is was midnight. I opened the door with a lockpick, and the lights were on...I seen my father watching Football, i said "Hi" and he looked around, he told me to sit down and watch the game with him...He didnt even turn around. I put my stuff down...Sat down and drank a beer with my dad. I was getting tierd...My father came up to my face and whispered "Your not killing me son...Your drink is druged...Youll be awake later..." and everything went Black
~Act 5~
I woke up in a chair...I was straped in the chair...I was in a white room...I looked forward and seen a old woman with white hair in a Lab Coat. She started asking me questions... "Why did you do this John?" I replyed "Scott told me to...Let me go please..." She looked frightened when i said Scott... "J-John...You cant be talking to scott...You made him when you were in a Psyco Ward...Dont talk to Scott...Hes a bad man John...Please stop talking to him." I was overcome with anger... "Scott is real! I seen him in person!" i yelled at her. She looked calm again and told me "Hes a figment of your imagination, John, i need to go in your brain, and imagine your killing him for me...Do it for the sake of Tamithas Life..." I got even madder, and got out of that chair, i grabed her by her neck and started choking her, untill she died...I seen a camera in the room and heard an alarm..I ran out the door and got out of there...I decided im going to get out of this town...I kept running...
~~Ending~~
I made it half way out of town then i was surrounded by Cops, Soldiers, FBI, and Bounty Hunters...I knew this was the end...I had no were to go...I yelled " Go ahead, kill me, end it all!"
One of the FBI men shot something at me...I seen a needle in my side...I fell down and everything went black...I woke up faintly in a dark room...One of the men said "You will not remeber anything." Everything went black again.
I woke up in the middle of a street for a private houseing area...There was a note on my chest...I opend it up and read it...;
Your name is Tom Kaken, You work at a mall as a security guard, you have a bank account with $12,000 in it. You have a wife named Joana, your adress is 20394 in this area, house to the left. Your phone number is 1-586--329-8537. Have a good life Tom.
People please relize this is only the story in a nutshell, if i ever finish it, it will be much longer... I hope you enjoyed it. Leave comments and Kudos to meh now...
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