new song, tell me what you think.

fuck this world
and fuck my life
my fate's unfurled
so i end this strife

my daggers my death
my death my release
i take my last breath
my life has now ceased

my death is near i cant escape
i am to become a daggers rape
my fate is drawning near
but in all this i do not fear

fear is for the weak
but pain for the strong
my flesh does now shreik
end my life ive done no wrong

fuck this world
and fuck my life
my fate's unfurled
so i end this strife

my daggers my death
my death my release
i take my last breath
my life has now ceased

take this to the grave
for this is what i say
death is for the brave
so i end this day

kill me now
kill me fast
my final bow
i will not last

fuck this world
and fuck my life
my fate's unfurled
so i end this strife

my daggers my death
my death my release
i take my last breath
my life has now ceased

 

i like this

the silence enters as your heart stops on the fleeting note of your song.
and as that silence enters you think
you life, reduced down to a senseless thirst of your own blood
this girl, who you cannot stop thinking about
continuously controlling your every move
keeping you from death
but maybe death comes from the same place that keeps it away
what has your life become?
why do you sit and think about this girl in your dreams?
is it intrigue?
or maybe, just maybe
its love

I have to say i think this is the one thing i have experienced that im not sure if i should be happy or sad about. Love is defined as a tender feeling of atraction between two people arising from attractive qualities. but in that case how do you tell love from lust? is love sexual? or is it something completely diferent? then what is the true definition of love, and how do you tell if your really in love or just have a sexual attraction to them? how do people fall in love. is it instant, do you just autoaticly know? or is it something built up overtime through friendship? im not even going to get into friendship. i swear life in general is fucked up.

haha im jus chillin at school, gotta love canadian issues. prety bored actually.

yea this is a song i wrote a little while ago. i need some feedback. i dont care if it sucks or not id just like to know.

Stiff pain running through my back
dont know if i can turn back
i think ive gone to far
way as well hit it to the bar

wheels are turning
rubber is burning
dont know if im going
to heaven or hell

i dont know where im going
i guess knolege isnt knowing
why do i go on?
i bet ill die before dawn

i dont know why i did this
i guess it was that unfaithfull kiss
now i am on the run
running into the sun

wheels are turning
rubber is burning
dont know if im going
to heaven or hell

i dont know hwre im going
i guess knolege isnt knowing
why do i go on?
i bet ill die before dawn

i dont know hwere i am
i think im on a dam
i guess im gonna die
im gonna drive into the sky

i dont know why i did this
i guess it was that unfaithfull kiss
now i am on the run
running into the sun

wheels are turning
rubber is burning
i dont know if im in heaven or hell
i think i really died
i drove into the sky

People tell me to get a life.I asked one of these people to define life. She told me that life is something you work towards. If this is true then wouldnt life in its simplest form be death? Death is something all poeple work towards. It is inevitible, people cannot avoid death. If this is the case then wouldnt it be better to die now? Why live any longer when the only thing to work towards is death? This is just my theory on life. Comment me on it please.