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Rachel Fox



Last Updated: 11/17/2009

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Gender: Female
Status: In a Relationship
Age: 42
Sign: Aquarius

City: Montrose
State: Scotland
Country: UK
Signup Date: 4/2/2007

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Thursday, April 17, 2008 
Just a short one this week. You may still be recovering from the singing last time...

This poem is lots (and lots) of years or raving, dancing, not sleeping, not eating, talking too much, loud music, smoking (and I don't really smoke!), more dancing, less sleeping....and so on...all condensed into 8 little lines. It was the best of times but the worst of times too. And it seems like such a long time ago now!

The biggest love affair

We loved everybody
Even ourselves

We hugged everybody
Even the bouncers

We understood everything
But couldn't explain it

We went way, way too far in
It seemed a good idea at the time



RF 2005
2:50 PM
 
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Rachel Fox

 
Well, yes it started and ended with drink. Got a bit crazier in the middle there though...
 
Posted by Rachel Fox on Thursday, April 17, 2008 - 3:28 PM
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Ken - Folk Page

 
Well Rachel, another gem.

There is a saying; A picture is worth a thousand words.

I'm sure that your few words have painted a thousand pictures in the minds of its readers.

Mind you, I don't remember hugging any bouncers!!!!

Keep them coming, Ken.
 
Posted by Ken - Folk Page on Thursday, April 17, 2008 - 3:43 PM
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norris necante

 
i like this poem Rachel....rings a bell ...or two....

forever trapped by
those ibiza ways
endless parties missing days
chatting the chat
for the one night stand
young and handsome
with cash in hand
always looking out
for that big time high
OVER HERE MATE GIVE THIS A TRY.......ok
never a thought
for what the future
might be
just living life
wild and free
forever haunted
by those ibiza ways
the mindless parties
missing days
feelings hurt
for the one night stand
the shallow nothingness
of the cash in hand
no longer chasing
that old time high
gotta face it pal
your times passed by
bastard
hey kids
strive to swim
with the dolphins
sleep with the mermaids
or at least hang with
the unholy
but
kids
know when to
say no
for when real kicks in
holy banjo
it aint
gonna groove your chicken
man
do you know what i mean......no....oh....you..lazy fuckers



nice one rachel.......its good to know im not alone
lifes easy now...ive not taken any drugs for 3 years
honestly...i dont even drink...need to go for some
walks..have to write some poems......ive done enough
misery....happy poems...eggs ..bacon and beans.....
 
Posted by norris necante on Thursday, April 17, 2008 - 3:54 PM
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Rachel Fox

 
Missing days...ah yes, I remember them well....well, I don't but you know what I mean...
Yes enough misery! How low can you go...pretty low...And back up again...
 
Posted by Rachel Fox on Thursday, April 17, 2008 - 4:12 PM
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Janie

 
very cool condensation.
 
Posted by Janie on Thursday, April 17, 2008 - 10:11 PM
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Rachel Fox

 
Yes, I had that feeling about you!
 
Posted by Rachel Fox on Friday, April 18, 2008 - 7:20 AM
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