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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 29
Sign: Virgo

City: Plumstead Common
State: London and South East
Country: UK
Signup Date: 8/27/2004

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Friday, March 16, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry
thinking back to the ones that made me smile
yeah it ended and was shit every little while
ones i ended cause she wouldn't suck my dick
vacation i took cause she wouldn't fuck a chick
times have changed i guess i grow up quick
and every now and then think back feel sick
oh yeah it's back to who made me grin
laying on the bed, "you better never fuck him"
now you've deleted me and i guess you better fuck him
and break a heart just to make me grin
you broke my heart so you're breaking theirs
reducing everyone since me to tears
you were the best at least back then
wonder if i'll ever see you again
could i have got you to fuck a chick
it's only one that wouldn't suck dick
every pay day on the train
"i'm about to see you again"
wake up your mother, wake your sis
i got faith in your brother, he'd sleep through this
the first time in your mothers bed
was that the first time you gave head?
the first time in your brand new flat
there was two of them so it goes far back
one this country one the next
and neither one will i forget
i left both them flats and both them girls
both them dreams and both them worlds
both them smiles and both them lies
will i ever get back between them thighs
but as i said things have changed with time
i've grown a bit and know my own mind
i walked this path and know my own climb
can say no to the wrong thing, grown a spine
so when i see her it'll just smiles
full of dreams even walk down isles
maybe two kids or maybe just us
we'll built it naturally with little fuss.




yup, still battling with writers block but thought i'd see if i'm coming out, kinda sucks though i think.
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"you broke my heart so you're breaking theirs"..wait...she broke ur heart cos she didnt want to suck ur dick or to have sex with another chick??? Did I get that right?And u ask urself if u will ever get back between them thighs? Paul,if this poem is autobiographical, you sound like a man to me who seriously needs help, lmao!
 
Posted by on Saturday, March 17, 2007 - 2:10 PM
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the poem refers to four different women and the lines "ones i ended cause she wouldn't suck my dick. vacation i took cause she wouldn't fuck a chick" refers to sexual imcompatability, the poem works on incredibly apt metaphors to envisiage my feelings on the past and my hopes for the future. it's supposed to take you on a journey through my growth through to adulthood. for example; "times have changed i guess i grow up quick, and every now and then think back feel sick" that's me talking about how i feel looking back at myself in that situation. i entered into something and was commited but didn't have what it took to get out of the situation and go and find what would make me happy because i felt that to the world it looked petty, and so it couldn't have been legitimate. i've grown to understand that my feelings are my own and don't need ok'ing by the masses.
 
Posted by sabe on Saturday, March 17, 2007 - 2:43 PM
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Um.aha.Thank you for the lesson oh great sabé lol.
 
Posted by on Saturday, March 17, 2007 - 3:03 PM
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Lemme try again...thank u for explaining it to me, really apprecciated it! Interesting! 
 
Posted by on Saturday, March 17, 2007 - 3:35 PM
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