Well This is The beginging of a story that I am Writing. I'm Going to post the story section by section, and I would love it if you would read what I have writen and if you would comment on it.

The Broken Souls

Am I Dreaming?

            "Dame!! What the hell Is going on!" I scream this at the top of my lungs. Gun fire rings in my ears. Everything is black except for the one street light on the corner of apple and the drive. With all of the madness going on around me all I can focus on is that light that one solitary dim light alone in the darkness. I can't help, but feel absolutely alone in this darkness just like that one light. Why am I here? Now I feel sharpness in my chest. I fall against my car and slide to the ground. The madness slowly fades away as do the sounds. All I can see is that one light,  but that too disappears in the distance. Absolute darkness. Now I can see. I see my car with a man lying in the street against it. Who is this man? I look closer and I see the face of a 16 year old boy, and I know him. I recognize those sun glasses, blue blockers with a dark frame. The right lens is shattered in pieces laying on the ground. I know him, I am him. I see myself crying but I feel no tears down my face, I hear no whimper, no moan, but the boy is me. How can I be crying and not feel it. How can I be looking at myself laying on the street and not feel the cold fender against my head or the hard ground beneath me? Now everything starts to shrink, smaller and smaller till finally it's all gone. I cry out for help but there is no sound. How did this happen to me? Why did this happen to me? I feel nothing now. Not a breath in my lungs, or the thump of my own beating heart. It's all gone.

*****

            I wake up, rub my eyes. Straight out of bed. The first thing that I do is check my cell. A smile comes to my face as I see a text from the girl. 'Hey there good morning,' she writes, 'I hope u had fun last night I know I did' I just close my eyes and I picture her face.

I answer her, 'Helz ya I had fun. We need to hang out again girl.' Sending that fast my hands are shaking. "I'm so happy!" I silently yell to myself. I take my shower and get dressed. Walking to the kitchen I see my mother, "Good morning kido." She gives me a strange look, "It's good to see you so happy again. I guess some thing at that party did you some good." She says with a smile on her face. As I'm making something to eat I feel A buzz on my hip. One new text message. It's the girl again!

 'I know I loved being with u."

Answering back I get a sickness in my stomach as I write, 'I luved being with u to. Look I was wandering, u wanna be my girl?' The sickness stays for just a moment till I get a text right back saying.

 'I'm so happy u asked, yes yes I do.' I was suddenly filled with such a joy that I've never felt before. This girl is amazing. We keep talking about the party and how we are so happy to have met each other. Then finally I had to put my attention on something else, but first we agreed to meet at the movies the next day.

I get up and grab my sunglasses, the blue blockers with a dark frame. As I put them on to go out side I laugh. I would always ware these because… no one could see me cry. I would ware these because behind them where the eyes of a boy with a broken soul. I was afraid to let people see that boy. But today is different. Today that boys soul is not broken. Something at that party last night changed him. At first I thought it was the girl, but no. Something inexplicable changed in him to make him who he was that night. I was happy when I woke up this morning, and for once it was just because I was plain happy. For once I was happy with who I was, maybe I was finally moving on.