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Saturday, July 14, 2007 

Current mood:  thoughtful

So. . .I haven't really been writing poems, lately, I've been writing scripts and making movies. . .this is the first new poem I've put out for public consumption since 2004 (all the other ones on here were written between 1998-2004), so whether it's any good, I don't know.


 

Open Mic at the Bar

.

"Remember?"

He asked, and I did.

.

We didn't care if it was Sunday.

We didn't have day jobs.

No traffic

No alarm clocks

No 401k

No five year plans

.

Just poetry

And drinking at noon on weekdays

Looking down at the people in suits scurrying by

And thinking

"Poor fuckers."

.

Just crashing on the couches of friends of friends

Sitting all night in the coffee shop

Writing about

. . .the pain. . .

(it's still there, if I run my pinky fingernail up my arm

hard enough

I can see it through my skin)

.

Just my friend's excitement

About all the things you can do with menstrual blood

Baking cupcakes is the best,

she told us,

But don't paint with it,

because it fades and looks like crap.

.

Just losing track of time

Spinning crazy in the middle of drum circles

Writing poetry on bathroom walls in seedy bars

feeling like a God

.

Just cutting myself where no one would see

Watching crazy light patterns in front of my eyelids

Forgetting to take baths or pay bills

.

Just pushing the envelope

Grabbing my crotch on stage

Daring them to take offence--

but folding without a fight

when they did

.

I had to be more alive

I couldn't have been more alive

I wished I was dead.

.

Now I'm one of the poor fuckers

In business casual

Who can't drink at noon on Monday—

who won't drink at all.

.

"Remember?"  he asked,

And I missed those days.

Until

I remembered all I wished I had

With my whole screaming mind

How

I wished I could finish what I started

I wished I could fight for my right to speak

I wished I could have more than a two-week relationship

And I remembered

how I hated myself

For every drunken one night stand

.

And how, now,

even though there's alarm clocks and traffic,

I finish what I start

I fight when it's important

And I am so very, very deeply in love.

.

It's a good trade.

 

sdf

 
QUITE nice!! I can connect with it and see myself in many of the words here, though I know it is not actually about me. Like it alot!
 
Posted by sdf on Saturday, July 14, 2007 - 12:22 PM
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SILVER SURFER

 
a very truthful poem it flows real well a great way to get back into poetry
 
Posted by SILVER SURFER on Saturday, July 14, 2007 - 12:28 PM
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Jacquie
Jacquie Floyd

 
Wow.
See I read poems like this and think back to the teen angst crap I wrote in high school and college and know that this is REAL. This isn't imagery just for imagery. Its truly painting a past with words. We see the past in true colors, even though the words are black and white. WELL DONE! I am inspired!
 
Posted by Jacquie on Monday, July 16, 2007 - 1:40 AM
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