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James Howell


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Sexe : Male
Statut : Marié(e)
Age : 30
Zodiaque: Cancer

Ville : CINCINNATI
Région : Ohio
Pays: US
Date d’inscription :: 27/04/2006

Compliments de :


mercredi, janvier 09, 2008 

Humeur actuelle :  artistique

27. INT. NEUTRALIZER- TRAINING ROOM

Extreme close-up on those same eyes, then dolly-back to reveal Palpatine/ Darth Sidious, thirty five years later. He is strapped to a chair.

28. CLOSE-UP ON PALPATINE'S RIGHT ARM

Two large worm-like creatures slither down his arm. Simultaneously, they bite into his skin and slide underneath it. Two large bumps in his skin can be seen sliding toward his elbow.

29. CLOSE-UP ON PALPATINE'S FACE

His face is contorted into a grimace of pain.

30. CLOSE-UP ON PALPATINE'S LEFT ARM

Two more worms follow suit.

31. WIDER ANGLES

Palpatine violently thrashes the chair around, screaming in agony. Moments later, the door opens, and Plagueis enters.

Plagueis

Enough training for now.

Plagueis makes one sweeping motion with his hand.

32. CLOSE-UP OF FLOOR, PALPATINE'S FEET IN BACKGROUND

Four blood-covered worms fall to the floor with a sickening "splat" sound.

33. CLOSE-UP ON PALPATINE'S WRISTS

The restraints that bind him snap open, as if by magic.

34. WIDER ANGLES

Plagueis

(Cont'd)

We have arrived.

35. NEUTRALIZER- COCKPIT

The Protocol droid, T-101, is seated in the right side of the cockpit, piloting the Neutralzer. A brown, mucky planet fills up the viewscreen in the front. Plagueis and Palpatine enter from behind.

Palpatine

We're at Korriban?

Plagueis

You are very observant, Lord Sidious. Yes, we are at Korriban.

Palpatine

Is this another training mission, then?

Plagueis

No. We are here to recover something lost... long ago.

36. EXT. KORRIBAN, BURIAL GROUNDS -DAY

Korriban is a desolated world. It is covered in a reddish dust, like Mars. Decrepit pyramids dedicated to the Sith Lords of the past litter the landscape, but the single living entity in the area is Tam Whiting. Tam is a medium tall, scrawny-looking alien. As the Neutralizer approaches, he begins to shake nervously.

Tam

There's no need to panic, Tam. No need at all.

The Neutralizer lands. The entrance ramp opens up. Plagueis and Palpatine step onto land. They are cloaked in black Sith robes, hoods up.

Tam

(Gulps)

I'm not gonna live through this.

The Sith Lords approach Tam. He throws himself onto his knees and takes Plagueis's hands into his own.

Tam

Gracious, wonderful masters! What an honor it is to finally meet you!

He kisses Plagueis's hands. Plagueis jerks them away in disgust.

Plagueis

(Coldly)

Get up.

He grabs Tam by the collar and tosses him to his feet.

Tam

Right. You're absolutely right. You are busy men, I can see that. Let's get down to business, then.

Plagueis

You have something to show us?

Tam

Yes. It is right this way. Follow me.

Tam turns and walk. Plagueis and Palpatine follow. As they walk, they pass many of the ancient pyramids.

Tam

You see these old pyramids? Some people believe that these are resting places of Sith Lords. Sith Lords? Can you believe that? Anybody who believes in that old fairy tale is a complete dumb-

Plagueis

Shut up.

Tam

Yes, of course.

They arrive at a newly excavated site. A large stone seal with ancient symbols rests on the ground, covering the only entrance to the vast area below it.

Tam

I discovered this myself. It's the entrance to whatever lies beyond. Unfortunately, it is sealed. I've tried everything to open it, but-

Plagueis makes a large sweeping motion with his hand. The seal rips out of the ground and soars into the air. It crashes down fifty feet away.

Tam

I'll remember to try that next time.

Large stone stairs lead down into the tomb below. The three of them peer in the stairwell. It is completely dark.

Tam

That is really dark. I can't see a thing.

(Backs off)

Well, it was really nice meeting you two. Good luck.

(turns to run away)

Palpatine grabs him by his neck and pushes him down the stairs and into the tomb.

37. INT. TOMB

The room is pitch black.

Tam

(V.O.)

It is awfully da- Ow! Can we get some sort of lights in here please!

Palpatine lights a torch hanging by the entrance. The room is filled with light.

Tam

Wow.

The room is magnificent. Four statues of old Sith Lords stand guard in the corners. The walls are lined with shelves, each loaded with jewels and various other artifacts. In the center of the room is the sarcophagus Tam tripped over. It is rectangular, with alien letters sculpted on the lid. The living Sith Lords walk over to the sarcophagus, pushing Tam out of the way. Plagueis traces a finger over the epitaph.

Palpatine

Is this it? Is this the tomb you've been looking for?

 

Plagueis

Yes. This is the tomb of Darth Trepid, the Everliving. One who has discovered the secrets of eternal life. His only mistake was trusting his apprentice, but such is the way of the Sith.

(To Tam)

Tam, you have done us a great service. Now for your reward.

(To Palpatine)

Sidious, kill him.

Tam

Wait! You just said-

Plagueis extends his right arm, his fingers arranged in the recognizable "force-choke" position. Tam turns purple and makes gurgling sounds. He grabs at his throat, to no avail.

Plagueis thrusts the lid of the sarcophagus off. Inside are the skeletal remains of Darth Trepid, his lightsaber at his side, and nothing else. An ominous breeze blasts out of the coffin.

Plagueis

It's not here! Where is it!

Darth Trepid

(V.O.)

Who has disturbed my resting place!!!

Plagueis looks up, trying to pinpoint the source of the voice. Palpatine releases his grip on Tam. Tam falls to his knees, and rises quickly, gasping.

Plagueis

I am Darth Plagueis, the dark lord of the Sith. With me is my apprentice, Darth Sidious.

A ghostly figure apparates from a far corner of the room.

Darth Trepid

Sith Lords, ha! I am the true Sith Lord!

Tam has seen enough. He turns to flee, pausing long enough to spy a marvelous-looking artifact. It is an octagonal, crystal-like sphere. He grabs it, stuffs it into his pocket, and sprints up the stairs.

Darth Trepid

(Cont'd)

You've come to rob me of my secrets, haven't you? Of course you have. Well, they're mine! And now I will add your corpses to my collection!

The entire tomb begins to quake violently. Darth Trepid's lightsaber levitates out of his sarcophagus, pausing in midair to activate, and attacks Plagueis and Palpatine.

38. EXT. KORRIBAN

Tam runs behind one of the pyramids, where a small spaceship is parked. Tam jumps inside it.

39. INT. TOMB

Darth Trepid increases his efforts. Plagueis and Palpatine are assaulted by waves of flying debris. Palpatine battles his way through scores of artifacts and rushes Trepid. He plunges his lightsaber into Trepid's chest, but it passes through him like a knife through fog.

Darth Trepid

And to what purpose did you think stabbing a ghost would do, O ingenious Sith Lord?

Trepid force pushes Palpatine, slamming him roughly against the wall where his lightsaber has cornered Plagueis.

Plagueis

Brainless oaf! We are not dealing with a living entity. He cannot be killed by traditional means.

Palpatine

What do we do then?

Plagueis

It appears that his spirit cannot leave this tomb. There must be something here that tethers him to the world of the flesh.

Palpatine realizes the answer. His eyes dart over to the sarcophagus.

Plagueis

Of course.

40. INT. TAM'S SHIP

Tam starts his engines, but they sputter and stall out.

Tam

You have got to be kidding me!

41. INT. TOMB

Palpatine charges toward the sarcophagus, ducking and diving and jumping the various items thrown at him. He stretches a hand over the coffin, and Trepid's body levitates out of it.

Darth Trepid

(Horror- Stricken)

What are you doing? Don't touch that!

Palpatine

Darth Trepid, too long have you been chained to this prison of the living. I hereby release you from your incarceration, and wish you a speedy journey home.

Palpatine hurls his body against the wall, where it shatters into a billion pieces.

Darth Trepid

No!!!

The spirit of Darth Trepid trembles violently, and explodes. A giant shockwave blasts the entire tomb. The ground quakes, and large chunks of earth fall from the ceiling. Trepid's lightsaber drops. Plagueis immediately starts searching the shelves.

Palpatine

This entire tomb is collapsing. We have to leave now!

Plagueis

Not until I have what I came here for!

He pauses at the shelf nearest the entrance. His eyes rest upon a spot that is dust free. Something has been removed from the tomb. Plagueis knows what has been taken, and who did the taking.

Plagueis

It's time to go.

The both run up the stairs as the ceiling collapses, and the room fills with dirt.

42. INT. TAM'S SHIP

Tam is frantically trying to start his ship.

 

Tam

Come on…come on…

43. EXT. ENTRANCE TO TOMB

Plagueis and Palpatine emerge from the entrance. They spot Tam in his ship.

44. INT. TAM'S SHIP

Tam sees the Sith Lords. Simultaneously, his engines spring to life. His ship propels upward, into the sky.

45. EXT. KORRIBAN

Plagueis and Palpatine watch as Tam's ship flies into the atmosphere.

Plagueis

Aaaaarrrrggghhhh!!!!

Plagueis turns, and storms off into the desert.

FADE.

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Another great entry. Definitely want to come back and read some more!!
Keep up the good work.
 
Publié par Elunella of the Silver Rose le mercredi, janvier 09, 2008 - 3:19
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Lucas should hire you...
 
Publié par Diana :) Super Fencer le mercredi, janvier 09, 2008 - 6:46
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I wish!
 
Publié par Yoda's House of Pancakes ™ le mercredi, janvier 09, 2008 - 6:51
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DJ Maul aka Deej

 
excellent! kinda "Indiana Jones Meets Star Wars" LOL....Onwards to the next chapter...
 
Publié par DJ Maul aka Deej le vendredi, janvier 11, 2008 - 1:19
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