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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 48
Sign: Virgo

City: MINNEAPOLIS
State: Minnesota
Country: US
Signup Date: 7/31/2006

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Tuesday, April 24, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry
the poetry of spanking
-staccatto slaps
with rifle shot impact
through anticipated silence
on the raised pads of bare
skin, under the rhythm
of a trembling, excited heart.
the prose of enforced eloquence,
palmed stylus writing forced
cursive in scarlet hues
-burning passages of
discourse and rhetoric's
reactive rising ..
my flesh is the papyrus of time
and devotion as i am draped
over Your lap, for the pens
of Your pleasure to verse me.
make me Your book
as You make me chap,
Your hand reciting the rhyme
of Your control over me.
Your words sink through my
glowing cheeks, again and
again and again and again.
i am Your greatest work
gasping, moaning, growling,
panting until i am finally
writing the odes of my submission
with the ink from my eyes.

Vicki

 
Fantastic dear one...She stirs again...
 
Posted by Vicki on Tuesday, April 24, 2007 - 6:55 PM
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CatDragon

 
Hahaha, interesting
 
Posted by CatDragon on Tuesday, April 24, 2007 - 7:40 PM
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The Beautiful J
J Weber

 
How wonderfully exciting...love the play on words!!
Great work my dear, as usual :)
xoxo

 
Posted by The Beautiful J on Tuesday, April 24, 2007 - 8:53 PM
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Rayne
Rayne Rayne

 
Never before have I read such a purrrfect illustration of submission. Well done, my friend.
 
Posted by Rayne on Tuesday, April 24, 2007 - 9:25 PM
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Mother May I

 
 no comment from me on this one-
 
Posted by Mother May I on Wednesday, April 25, 2007 - 1:39 AM
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Megan

 

palmed stylus writing forced
cursive in scarlet hues

Excellent word play....tantalizing handwriting ;-)


 
Posted by Megan on Wednesday, April 25, 2007 - 2:52 AM
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Rajean
Rajean Gallagher

 

you make me chap :)

nicely done! watching for those inging rhymes I see..(dont throw pans at me dammit)

 


 
Posted by Rajean on Wednesday, April 25, 2007 - 3:16 PM
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Kafkabug

 

Now THAT'S how you beat the drums of passion.


 
Posted by Kafkabug on Wednesday, April 25, 2007 - 4:25 PM
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Blackbird

 

my flesh is the papyrus of time
and devotion as i am draped
over Your lap, for the pens
of Your pleasure to verse me.

Perfect lines!  This is a very well crated erotic write.. excellent work!


 
Posted by Blackbird on Wednesday, April 25, 2007 - 11:52 PM
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Annette

 
Equating poetry with both dom and sub..brilliant..true. This is and excellent write.
 
Posted by Annette on Thursday, April 26, 2007 - 12:26 AM
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Mistress of Lust

 
I love it! Delightful dear Bard, simply delightful!
 
Posted by Mistress of Lust on Monday, May 07, 2007 - 4:14 AM
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