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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 61
Sign: Pisces

City: ATLANTA
State: Georgia
Country: US
Signup Date: 8/19/2006
Saturday, October 24, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
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i said she was pretty
she said that was witty

i said her beauty was like a rose
she said i was blind to her thorns

i said i'd like to be between her long stems
she said she's had enough lovers and friends

i said i could warm her cold feet
she said she had socks and gas heat

i said i would love her forever
she said that would depend on the weather

i said i could wait a little longer
she said longer was much better

i said i was giving up and going for a walk
she said come back to bed and let's talk




let's talk...
(c)  jim cole  10242009
1:03 PM
 
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~M~ Legacy Writer
Cheryl Darr

 
Oh this is wonderful! Sounds about right too! xox

 
Posted by ~M~ Legacy Writer on Saturday, October 24, 2009 - 3:46 PM
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*~Sister Redfeather~*

 
very Cute.
 
Posted by *~Sister Redfeather~* on Saturday, October 24, 2009 - 4:33 PM
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Paula

 
brilliant
 
Posted by Paula on Saturday, October 24, 2009 - 5:39 PM
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Kristaline
Kristaline shanon

 
Oh morning snuggles are very cool!
 
Posted by Kristaline on Saturday, October 24, 2009 - 5:39 PM
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Sara the SilverFae

 
aww this one is darling!!

 
Posted by Sara the SilverFae on Saturday, October 24, 2009 - 9:35 PM
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No-mad Living

 
This one is not only good but a little funny - nice! It made me chuckle.
 
Posted by No-mad Living on Sunday, October 25, 2009 - 12:44 PM
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~*~

 
THIS IS JUST SO WITTY AND WISE! SO ENJOYABLE AND ALMOST UNFORGETTABLE!
THANK YOU MY FRIEND!
CHARLENE*

 
Posted by ~*~ on Sunday, October 25, 2009 - 12:48 PM
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אהבה
Love OneAnother

 


 
Posted by אהבה on Tuesday, October 27, 2009 - 12:10 PM
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