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Status: In a Relationship
Age: 36
Sign: Taurus

Country: UK
Signup Date: 9/4/2006
Thursday, September 03, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
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You can tell when I should be doing something by the time I spend not doing it.

I was looking up a word in the OED, Ostricious[1],when I came across 'Verdantly'Which does not sound like a word.  Verdant? yes, clearly a word but that 'ly' really annoyed me.  So I thought I would try and use it.  Maybe I have elwhyophobia and using those words is therapy or maybe I just liked the shape of Verdantly, though not the sound.

And I've been reading a book on Celtic Mythology.  Which accounts for the title. 






Maponas Falling.



At the age of twelve
Climbing a tree.
Young boughs
Verdantly stretch for the sun. (over a quarry.
5
0
0
f
t
d
r
o
p
Below.)

Unconcerned by mortality
Concerned only with tree.

At fifteen a relative dies and you cry.
(Abstractedly:
They were old.)

Years later.
In patterns of branches.
A splintered limb shudders out memories.
Flashing back to what what might, may, could have been.
Autumn leaves fall, crisp around your feet.




And this is the first verse which I removed as it didn't fit with the sombranity[2] of the rest of it. 

When you were ten
(indestructible at ten)
You jumped your
Two. Wheel. Bike.
Over a
#BOX#BOX#BOX
Land with a crash
On the grown-up crossbar
The adult males wince.
When you were ten.

You don't do that one again.



Unless you're a stuntman, clearly.  But I figure that's quite a specialist grouping.


Toodle pip.



[1] Which doesn't exist.
[2]If they can have Verdently...  And clearly, sombranity means to be sombre or have an attack of sombreciosness.  Although I sort of prefer it could be the name of Crazy Paco's prices-lower-than-you'd-ever-believe mexican hat sale.