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Age: 20
Sign: Sagittarius

City: Midland
State: Michigan
Country: US
Signup Date: 9/8/2006

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Thursday, December 28, 2006 

Category: Writing and Poetry

Hey, be courteous, don't take this story as your own. Enjoy it.

A Day

A short story by Kadged and Krazi

I opened my eyes. Everything was in a faint purple blur. I blinked quickly trying to clear my eyes.

"Glad to see you're back." Said that annoying voice. It was just like an imp. So mischiveous, so cruel, so annoying. It loved to see me in pain, but I knew what it wanted me to do, it wanted me to find out what it had done, just like every other time. I sighed.

"Back from what?" I asked slowly. It snickered impishly.

"Go ahead and look around." There was a pause in my mind as it waited for my response. I sghed, everytime it told me to do something, it was normally something bad. My vision was still blurred in a purple haze, I knew it was doing it, so I waited. I heard a small snicker, as the blur quickly dissappeared. I thought the purple would too, I thought that was a prank too, but it wasn't. It stayed. I looked up the stark white wall with a purple aura, to a small, circular window high on the wall, only about a foot lower than the ceilling, it was just as white as the walls, yet still with the purple aura. The purple light flooded in through the window, it made the entire room glow with a nice purple aura. I smiled, it was a nice, warm color. It always invited me, always calmed me. The snicker broke me from the trance.

"You're not looking around. There's a big suprise for you." The voice taunted. I sighed again, I was positive I wouldn't like this. I cocked my head downwards from the window, my smile faded as I did so.

"Go on." The voice tortured me.

"Shut-up" I mumbled. My head lowered further, stopping on the bed I sat upon. Just as white as the rest of the room, but still wtih that faint purple aura. I watched as I ran my hand over the sheet. It was silky, and soft. I smiled again, it had been a while since I had been comfortable like this.

"It's a nice bed isn't it?"

"Shut-up"

"We had fun last night." It taunted further.

"Shut-up, we are the same." I responded. It snickered in response.

"Even if I considered us one, I'd still say we." That comment, got my attention.

"What?" I asked without thinking, I was confused about this whole mess, more than what I had been before. That damned snicker sounded again as I said the word.

"Behind you" It said, nudging me forth, driving my curiosity. I hadn't worried until now. This thing had tortured me for so long, I stopped caring about where I was, and what happened to me, but another person, was something else, and it knew that. I heard ait breath joyfully as it waited for me to look. I hated it. Slowly I turned my head around further, and further. I arched my back, still looking further. I caught a glimpse of a lump of sheets behind me, but could twist no further to see more. I couldn't made anything out for sure.I repositioned myself, still feeling dizzy. With a better position, I looked again. My eyes feasted on a woman. She lay on her stomach, her head turned from me. The purple-tainted sheet proturded from just under her armpits. Her lushous brown hair sprawled across the pillow and parts of teh sheet. I smiled, it was a beautiful sight. Yet my smiled faded as my thoughts began. Who is she? What is wrong with her? What had i done? I t knew everything I thought.

"We had fun." It responded, almost giggling like a schoolgirl as it said so.

"What happened?"

"Fun" It gigled out.

"Give me a real answer you bastard." There was a pause, then a laugh was the response it gave me. I breathed hard.

"I did." It finally sounded.

"Tell me."

"I did."

"Tell me."

"I did." It chuckled heartily, it was in good spirits. I paused, and growled.

"Tell me right now." I said. The little giggling bastards sighed.

"I wish you could remember, so often I wish you could."

"Shut-up," I interrupted, "just tell me, like you always enjoy doing." I grumbled. I heard it gigle again, stop, sigh, then breathe deeply.

" I don't know if I enjoy this right now." It said in a serious voice, the type of tone I had never heard from it before. It was confusing me, and I couldn't tell if it was purposely this time or not. It was always reading my thought, but that might habve been because it was me.

"I mean it, that woman, she's beautiful, she showed love, for someone I thought could never be shown love," it paused, then continued after a deep breath, "and that's you." It ended. I didn't know what ot think.

It continued on, "Well us really, I mean, we are one aren't we?" I didn't respond, I didn't know what to say anymore. Was it serious? Was I serious? I tried to speak, but a hoarse cry came out, even in my mind. It breathed heavily.

"Well," another deep breath, "I guess this is goodbye, I understand if you don't say anything." A small breath escaped from my mouth as it said the last words. I didn't know what was going on anymore. What was happening? The purple started to fade away, it was seeming to be sucked away by something, somewhere. It was gone, the room was white, starchy, it was pure.

"Are you there?" I said aloud.

"Mmm... yep." Came a voice. It sounded familiar, it warmed me, but it had an almost impish quality to it. I knew I had heard it before, but where from? I didn't know. I heard shuffling beside me. The woman! I had forgotten about her. I turned quickly, and met her gaze. She was sitting up now, the sheet wrapped around her breasts. She smiled at me, it was beautiful. My eyes were settled on hers. They were a slight purple. I didn't know what ot say, what to think, I simply smiled in return. Her smile grew, she leaned in and placed a soft kiss on my lips, then blushed lightly. I was speechless, I didn't know what to say. I didn't know what to do, but my smile grew wider. It looks like she had gotten rid of whatever was inside me. But what was it inside me? Was it her? With an impish voice, and those purple eyes. Or was it that opposite? Had she saved me? I didn't know, and the more I looked at her, the less I started to care. I thought this would have been a regular day, yet, I found this, and it made my smile grow as I thought about it, and as I looked at her, into those beautiful, purple eyes.

The End.

Miss Daisy ♥
Desiree Hollenbeck

 
I didn't know you wrote so well. <3 I liked it.
 
Posted by Miss Daisy ♥ on Saturday, January 06, 2007 - 4:01 AM
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♫Loch Ness Monster♥♪
Heather Tabor

 
Wow that was really wow. I didn't know you could write. It's really good. Really it's amazing. I wish I could write like that. You should write an actual book & publish it. Super gr8. :)
 
Posted by ♫Loch Ness Monster♥♪ on Tuesday, January 30, 2007 - 2:34 AM
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