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	The Poetic Genius-The Michelangelo Of Poetry Poetic Genius Lyrical Assassin	damn this is a good write, niice. and I thought you were breaking up very cleverly (desiring you more for that)   Posted by The Poetic Genius-The Michelangelo Of Poetry on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 05:12 AM [Reply to this]

	Amanda Amanda Joy	thanks you muchly..   Posted by Amanda on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 05:15 AM [Reply to this]

	(Will)-o'-the-Wisp	I got a number 3! (the significance of which in this performance escapes me) Brilliant briefness :)   Posted by (Will)-o'-the-Wisp on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 06:17 AM [Reply to this]

	Amanda Amanda Joy	Haha! Three is a fascinating number Will.   Posted by Amanda on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 09:20 AM [Reply to this]

	lana Lana Deym campbell	Forgiveness is always good...particularly in enclosed places. Yet you go further, you even applaud his manner of breaking up, you recognized its "Time" - there is no show heavy anger, despair or any emotion here...only cold numbers at the end...you give him grades. This unexpected calculated reaction is disturbing... with huge power. The way you end with  "and 5" as an isolated line is somehow a dart in the heart...so moving Excellent write. xo Lana   Posted by lana on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 06:27 AM [Reply to this]

	Amanda Amanda Joy	I love your readings Lana! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! A.Joy xox   Posted by Amanda on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 09:23 AM [Reply to this]

	arrowseye (æ)	this is different....like a spilling fountain.....intriguing and soothing. ae.   Posted by arrowseye (æ) on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 06:58 AM [Reply to this]

	Amanda Amanda Joy	Spilling is a beautiful word isn't it? I've been thinking about echoes lately.. and doing a course in Projective geometry.. not anything I have written above is particularly relevant to the poem.. Not as relevant as your first comment about it being different anywhoos.. :) Nice to 'see' you AE! xo   Posted by Amanda on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 09:28 AM [Reply to this]

	Surendra Surendra Tapuriah	Beautiful!   Posted by Surendra on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 08:53 AM [Reply to this]

	Amanda Amanda Joy	:) x   Posted by Amanda on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 09:29 AM [Reply to this]

	jonnypravda	oh the wry mathematic of the heart.  breaking up makes for fine poetry if done a-right.   Posted by jonnypravda on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 10:00 AM [Reply to this]

	Barbara Barbara Kausteklis	A brilliant expression.   Posted by Barbara on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 01:22 PM [Reply to this]

	Gary	Well done, my friend.  If you get the chance, please drop by my blog as well!   Posted by Gary on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 04:43 PM [Reply to this]

	April April Michelle Bratten	Well placed, well worded...   Posted by April on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 07:25 PM [Reply to this]

	Poeteaser	god it's good to see you back around here...this is very personal...yet it resonates... love, ken   Posted by Poeteaser on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 09:26 PM [Reply to this]

	Sigerson D Sigerson	and who's being the clever one? and the number you gave is a vector quantity, not just scalar, having both magnitude and direction. .   Posted by Sigerson on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 10:44 PM [Reply to this]

	John(Coyote) John castellenas	The poem was so good. I needed to read it again. Thank you.                   Coyote   Posted by John(Coyote) on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 11:09 PM [Reply to this]

	Angelheart	please call in next friday at 9pm EST and read this piece for my top ten at ten.. what you accomplish in so few words with imagry never fails to amaze me. www.blogtalkradio.com/truth-project-network   Posted by Angelheart on Saturday, September 05, 2009 - 11:23 PM [Reply to this]

	Seb	enclosed spaces lead to high entropy systems.   Posted by Seb on Sunday, September 06, 2009 - 12:04 AM [Reply to this]

	Lightness	Loved it ... and still thinking about it ... ;) Kate x   Posted by Lightness on Sunday, September 06, 2009 - 12:11 AM [Reply to this]

	Larry Kuechlin Larry Kuechlin	I adore your work, my friend....and this is no exception. Lx   Posted by Larry Kuechlin on Sunday, September 06, 2009 - 06:18 PM [Reply to this]

	Chuck's Poetic Existence Chuck Steffen	such a superb write, Amanda, great to see a post from you, breaking hearts by numbers one poem at a time   Posted by Chuck's Poetic Existence on Sunday, September 06, 2009 - 09:16 PM [Reply to this]

	Frank Axworthy	I adore the simple power of this, clever yes, and thoroughly enjoyed   Posted by Frank Axworthy on Sunday, September 06, 2009 - 11:55 PM [Reply to this]

	Not for You, but Thanks for Asking	Mathematical cleverness always makes me smile :)   Posted by Not for You, but Thanks for Asking on Monday, September 07, 2009 - 12:28 AM [Reply to this]

	In light and love Lynda Filler	subtle....   Posted by In light and love on Saturday, September 12, 2009 - 04:28 PM [Reply to this]

	~Musing Silence~	well wrought... poignant... sharp too   Posted by ~Musing Silence~ on Saturday, September 12, 2009 - 05:00 PM [Reply to this]

	Mike Carson Mike Carson	A true Joy to see your words here again...   Posted by Mike Carson on Sunday, September 13, 2009 - 03:18 PM [Reply to this]

	~Kristine~	Again, fantastic! I really appreciated this read :)   Posted by ~Kristine~ on Monday, September 14, 2009 - 05:49 AM [Reply to this]

	~Poetic Fluffer~ Butch Decatoria	Breaking up is harder to do--when there is a certain person it is being performed for/to, and a mental script usally does not read through, and becomes a re-write (again only in one's mind--things turned out...) Leaving the end open - gives it that sense of something left behind, maybe an unfinished relationship or needing closure... (What was the number he gave you back?) ~~PFluffer   Posted by ~Poetic Fluffer~ on Thursday, October 01, 2009 - 07:15 PM [Reply to this]