Who Gives Kudos: אהבה (1) The Poetris.. (1) John(Coyote) (1) Terry (1) *Mom of Fou.. (1)

	Patti *Maternal Superhero; Diva Girl*	Life is a waiting game....   Posted by Patti *Maternal Superhero; Diva Girl* on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 3:27 PM [Reply to this]

	GUADAMOUR	So true.  Thank you Patricia.   Posted by GUADAMOUR on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 3:42 PM [Reply to this]

	Smith Steven B. Smith	"fleeting cloudless bloodless sorrow lapse critical entrails careless lazy crazy snakes spider" - not the most upbeat message to start the day.   Posted by Smith on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 3:54 PM [Reply to this]

	GUADAMOUR	Even in heaven they don't sing all the time.  Thanks Steve.   Posted by GUADAMOUR on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 5:59 PM [Reply to this]

	אהבה Love OneAnother	*swats a mosquito   Posted by אהבה on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 4:02 PM [Reply to this]

	GUADAMOUR	Splat.  Thank you.   Posted by GUADAMOUR on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 5:59 PM [Reply to this]

	The Poetrist Phenom™ (A True Poet)	Life itself can be an up and down roller coaster...great write...The Poetrist Phenom   Posted by The Poetrist Phenom™ (A True Poet) on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 4:16 PM [Reply to this]

	GUADAMOUR	Thank you.   Posted by GUADAMOUR on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 6:00 PM [Reply to this]

	John(Coyote) John castellenas	A excellent poem. Ending was very good.                Coyote   Posted by John(Coyote) on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 4:25 PM [Reply to this]

	GUADAMOUR	Thank you Senor.   Posted by GUADAMOUR on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 6:00 PM [Reply to this]

	Terry	A powerful and wonderfully chilling unveiling.... the poem is so aptly named...  the energy builds and builds until the last stanza  Wow!   Chaos and order and the mad play of life death and the patience that hangs between. Funny and so painfully true how tiny things are SO critical...............   S  a really good write... BTW my first response was marred by not fully understanding some of your words as you read... sorry about that...    Posted by Terry on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 6:24 PM [Reply to this]

	GUADAMOUR	Thank you Terry.  it's generally more difficult to critique a poem from hearig than reading.  Not exactly a cheerful scribble.   Posted by GUADAMOUR on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 7:10 PM [Reply to this]