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Age: 101

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Thursday, November 05, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
Wonder

Back in the waterways and canals of himself he stands godless
A fantastic desert sunset blooms and sponges away consciousness
An incredible artist applying layer after layer of color
One can prove anything from such a display
The existence of a higher intelligence directing the universe
The mathematical precision of the various physics
Or simply the random haphazard ordered chaos of nature
He chooses not to believe in himself and rubs the thoughts away

GUADAMOUR

 
Thank you Nancy.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 2:39 PM
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John
John Lindermuth

 
Yes. Like the 'random haphazard ordered chaos' aspect.
 
Posted by John on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 2:42 PM
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GUADAMOUR

 
I'm with you on that one, John.   I seem to funtion much better in a state of total Chaos.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 3:01 PM
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Terry

 
You realize of course that putting together words like random haphazard ordered chaos is
 wonderfully horribly perfectly contradictory.... lol..... though I myself believe that chaos is organized
 
i like this a lot but wonder WHY after such a great thought the poet rubs it away.???Aaww shucks!

 
Posted by Terry on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 4:41 PM
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GUADAMOUR

 
Perhaps we're only viewing such a small part of the universe that we can't see the organization behind "random chaos."  He rubs his eyes to get out of the situation, because I don't know enough about physics to write about it intelligently, and I need to end the scribble before I make a bigger fool of myself.   Thank you for reading and commenting.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 4:54 PM
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Terry

 
but you said something very insighful.. ..that I think makes lots of sense... that we are so small we cannot see the order behind the chaos....
 u  need not worry about making a fool of yourself... there are no scientists here.. are there?


 
Posted by Terry on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 5:04 PM
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GUADAMOUR

 
I don't worry about making a fool of myself.  I was trying to sound  semi-intelligent.  See what happened.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 5:53 PM
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Margaret

 
I thought you did very well..I don't think I am intelligent enough to know if it were not intelligent...hehe

 
Posted by Margaret on Friday, November 06, 2009 - 3:25 AM
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GUADAMOUR

 
Thank you Margaret.  You're plety intelligent.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Friday, November 06, 2009 - 12:43 PM
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אהבה
Love OneAnother

 
BEAUTIFUL! :-)

I love the wonders of nature to...

very picturesque, dear Poet!....love the questions this brings to mind
 
Posted by אהבה on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 6:04 PM
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GUADAMOUR

 
Thank you.  You are most kind to my scribbles.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 6:12 PM
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אהבה
Love OneAnother

 
too, even

 
Posted by אהבה on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 6:04 PM
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אהבה
Love OneAnother

 
p.s. I liked the title of this better as ONder...or even ONEder ;-)

it's onederful....no, twoderful...or even tenderful!  yes, that's it :-)  I love the little accidents that make art art......just my silly little opinion
 
Posted by אהבה on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 6:06 PM
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GUADAMOUR

 
I thought I fixed my typo, but there might be some truth to your happenstance  theory.  Thank you again.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 6:14 PM
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flame in the snow

 
wonder -- the most precious part of being conscious --

 
Posted by flame in the snow on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 7:47 PM
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GUADAMOUR

 
I'll buy that.  Thank you Jillian.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Thursday, November 05, 2009 - 8:25 PM
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Smith
Steven B. Smith

 
it's all true. it's all lies. all of the above and more below.
 
Posted by Smith on Friday, November 06, 2009 - 1:04 AM
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GUADAMOUR

 
Eliptical & cynical today.  Thanks Steve your commets are always isnightful.   I don't know what happened to my comment on your blog today.   I went back to check and it wasn't there.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Friday, November 06, 2009 - 1:08 AM
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Smith
Steven B. Smith

 
who knows - myspace constantly has little glitches, ever changing. it's a massive zen lesson in patiience.
 
Posted by Smith on Friday, November 06, 2009 - 2:39 AM
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GUADAMOUR

 
I like to think of it as perpetual  dumbfuckedness.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Friday, November 06, 2009 - 2:47 AM
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Margaret

 
Very good..I love the aloneness and the self exploration...good write!

 
Posted by Margaret on Friday, November 06, 2009 - 3:23 AM
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GUADAMOUR

 
Thank you Margaret.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Friday, November 06, 2009 - 12:44 PM
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Metanoia

 
powerful closing line...

 
Posted by Metanoia on Friday, November 06, 2009 - 5:20 AM
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GUADAMOUR

 
Thank you.  Now I have to go back and read the closing line.

 
Posted by GUADAMOUR on Friday, November 06, 2009 - 12:45 PM
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