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Rob Atkinson


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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 31
Sign: Aquarius

City: FALL RIVER
State: MASSACHUSETTS
Country: US
Signup Date: 11/5/2006
Friday, July 31, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
I must come alive,
feeling your beautiful skin gives me pleasure,
someone to hold and treasure.
It's all about desire,
from her head to her feet such sweetness to touch upon.
Her beauty inspires me,
just what I needed for my poems to be written and read.
I'm coming back from the dead.
The blood flows recharged in a rhythmic pulse of life.
Her lovely face glows like an angel in sight.
May the night unveil her to my dreams.
With a tear in my eye and fear inside may it be whispered in your ear.
Hurtful pride of being cast aside.
Embracing pain for it is something to feel.
Peel it away ever so slowly,
fly where you wish to be.
Dance with me as I sleep,
awake the senses to a melodic vibration of sound.
Awakened from the coma state.
The Kingdom shines down on me once again.
Take my hunger and feed it this is my need.
I'm grateful for your good deed.
Passion is my survival.
Revive me, give me back life, sing your angelic song.

(C) Copyright Registered 2009.
Featured In Prayers, Poetry &  Invocation.
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Cove Mistress

 
Now your heart is open!  Rejoice!  It takes time for it to be open after closing it.  She must make your heart sing!  Brightest Blessings!


 
Posted by Cove Mistress on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 9:10 AM
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Rob
Rob Atkinson

 
I wanted to write my own version of 'Bring Me To Life' by Evanescence. It's a song I strongly relate to.
The lines written read like a powerful invocation, "Wake me up inside. Call my name and save me from the dark. Bid my blood to run before I come undone. Save me from the nothing I've become."....
I may go back and touch upon it again. I welcome all comments.

 
Posted by Rob on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 9:12 AM
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Welela-Morgaine

 
Lovely..I like it.:-))

 
Posted by Welela-Morgaine on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 9:52 AM
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Pixie

 
That is very beautiful!

 
Posted by Pixie on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 10:24 AM
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GABRIELA ROMARIA
Gabriela Romaria

 
SO BEAUTIFUL dear RON!!!! You are so talented my friend and you have such a beautiful heart!
Very beautiful poem!!!

 
Posted by GABRIELA ROMARIA on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 10:44 AM
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irene

 
You must really love her...
 
Posted by irene on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 11:07 AM
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Mary Ann Blinkhorn

 
Excellent write.

 
Posted by Mary Ann Blinkhorn on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 11:09 AM
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☆☽O☾☆ Hera ☆☽O☾☆

 
Sincere thanks that your share your feelings with us, dear Rob.
Your poems enchant and touch deeply.

Never give up, gentle soul!

May the Goddess guide your ways and protect you forever.

blessed be )O(

Hera

 
Posted by ☆☽O☾☆ Hera ☆☽O☾☆ on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 12:54 PM
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Williams and Williams

 
Now you have captured it.  BRAVO boyfriend!!!!

Pax in D Minor
 
Posted by Williams and Williams on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 2:57 PM
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La Strega )o( Moon Baby
Jacqui Brann

 
So passionate you are.
As I read it I could see it in my mind.
So very touching.
You are an amazing soul!

 
Posted by La Strega )o( Moon Baby on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 3:29 PM
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FIRE SAUSS

 
HEYY ROB,
Very beautiful and poetic. I feel myself in the midst of your light while reading your words. Your words most certainly captured me and took me into your world. I LOVE IT........
~SAUSS, XOXOXOXO~

 
Posted by FIRE SAUSS on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 3:52 PM
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Susanne: Poet
susanne owens

 
Your happiness in this one is wonderful. And I love the way you express it.
 
Posted by Susanne: Poet on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 4:05 PM
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Darnell
Darnell Darnell

 
Lovely, I like it.
People like you are truly a rare find, and I'm so glad you are a friend of mine! 

 
Posted by Darnell on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 4:06 PM
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Secretly Famous

 
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetic world with us!
Every word you write carries the most enchanting of universes
- brilliant!

Blessings and love always,
Mona

 
Posted by Secretly Famous on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 5:58 PM
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Blue’s Twilight
Lisa-Noelle Nason-Swartz

 

"Passion is my survival" I feel I understand this from a poet's view, well, my interpretation...that's not to say it's right...but "I must come alive"...this seems all about a muse, how a muse can seem to wake your spirit from the dead...it like it was about more than say, physical attraction, but your whole spirit being inspired to write. Sometimes a muse has been my "survival" and people always say how I have so much "passion"...I have often felt so dead without a muse, that's how the poem spoke to me, how I related to your expression here...felt like a description about that wonderful time when you find that special spirit and you become alive again, she is your muse and your have to write:

 

"Her beauty inspires me,

just what I needed for my poems to be written and read" 

 

Blessed be, lisa~noelle


 
Posted by Blue’s Twilight on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 6:02 PM
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Maureen C. Model & Actress, Supporter.
Maureen Catherineann

 
Rob wow great it's so moving and well written.





MCL

 
Posted by Maureen C. Model & Actress, Supporter. on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 6:23 PM
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~Romantic Moments~

 
Indeed, you captured a beautiful romantic expression here...
Deeply touching my friend!

 
Posted by ~Romantic Moments~ on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 7:38 PM
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Leo
Leo Welch

 
The king of mystical romantic rhyme is back. Great stuff Rob

 
Posted by Leo on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 8:22 PM
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Brookie
Brookie Lea

 
Beautiful and tragic....as always my friend I remain impressed.
 
Posted by Brookie on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 8:43 PM
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krista «Sanguine Divine»

 
Beautiful... Funny though, I would have never thought of EV being a source of inspiration for it....
 
Posted by krista «Sanguine Divine» on Monday, July 20, 2009 - 9:40 PM
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SeXy WiTcH

 
Wow!! This is amazing!! Whoever this is about she must be something:) Keep up the beautiful work it is a delight to read!!

Blessed Be~ SW
 
Posted by SeXy WiTcH on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 12:55 AM
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Lady Rayne

 
GREAT poem.  I love it.  She must be a wonderful person.

 
Posted by Lady Rayne on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 2:30 AM
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Mystic_Moon_Dancer
Mystic MoonDancer

 
Hi Rob, this is a beautiful poem, thank you so much for sharing it with your friends....
in love and light,
Mystic
 
Posted by Mystic_Moon_Dancer on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 2:41 AM
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~ ANGELIQUE~

 
~Cried so beautiful and so so true~
 
Posted by ~ ANGELIQUE~ on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 2:59 AM
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Dragon Spirit

 
Beautiful enchanting poetry...
I love Evanescence...
Embrace your heart Rob..



 
Posted by Dragon Spirit on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 3:11 AM
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Dfsggddfhhdh Asasasa

 
Now this I like! Your very passionate :D


<3


 
Posted by Deleted! on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 6:11 AM
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Christine Von Lossberg Fantasy Artist
Christine Fantasy Artist

 
It is wonderful honey...I love it!

 
Posted by Christine Von Lossberg Fantasy Artist on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 6:24 AM
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Moondragon
Cyndi Shazzette Moondragon Mata

 
merry meet,i just dont know what to say again im in awe u can write like this i try i cant seem to remember how to lol..ur words are deep  brightest blessings and meery part cyndi moondragon
 
Posted by Moondragon on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 6:39 AM
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Trice

 
 "a Muse"....Passion is my Survival....writing from ones Soul is the Way. AWAKE :)
 
Posted by Trice on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 7:42 AM
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Darnell
Darnell Darnell

 
Your poetry is very beautiful.
Big thanks.

 
Posted by Darnell on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 11:55 AM
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poppy fields

 
i really like the way you write.
 
Posted by poppy fields on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 11:59 AM
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Jennifer
Jennifer Wilson

 
now thats what i call a sensuous poem. it holds together because its clearly about one subject. a lot of idiots get lost if you introduce an adjacent subject even when its intertwined and what a a subject! it never fails to inspire, right? i just have found from painful experience th..at if you stray from one subject in a poem the blockheads get lost. terrific effort.
 
Posted by Jennifer on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 2:38 PM
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Julia

 
I think that is poem where the buauty of your soul.....
I feel this poetry my mind is deep.
you are lovely and amazing one
Thank you so much for sharing....
 
Posted by Julia on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 3:36 PM
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Kimber
Kimberly Mulivrana

 
I loved this you are truly a passionate writer thank you dear Rob
 
Posted by Kimber on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 6:53 PM
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Ivy Emeraldhorse

 
beautiful are you and your expressions

 
Posted by Ivy Emeraldhorse on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 8:28 PM
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Solitarywitch

 
very nice_I see you are on a journey from pain and walking again into sunshine.
Love Deep
~SW~

 
Posted by Solitarywitch on Tuesday, July 21, 2009 - 9:55 PM
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†• м λ ℓ є ғ ί ç є η ť •†

 
Very wonderful poem!!.
I like it

 
Posted by †• м λ ℓ є ғ ί ç є η ť •† on Wednesday, July 22, 2009 - 6:23 AM
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DIE JULIE(Opera gothic singer)

 
Very poetic,sentimental feeling and full of beauty

 
Posted by DIE JULIE(Opera gothic singer) on Wednesday, July 22, 2009 - 9:00 PM
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★Lacey in Wonderland★

 
I can almost feel your heart simply bursting for this lucky person...  :)

 
Posted by ★Lacey in Wonderland★ on Thursday, July 23, 2009 - 10:22 PM
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† KIM-s-tre †

 
Elegance perfected; passion infused. A wonderous muse.
Thank you for sharing.
^§^
 
Posted by † KIM-s-tre † on Friday, July 24, 2009 - 7:14 AM
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Eva
Eva Marie

 
Breath of Eros.


 
Posted by Eva on Friday, July 24, 2009 - 8:10 AM
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Karen

 
Just  fabulous,you are just an incredible artist!!
 
Posted by Karen on Friday, July 24, 2009 - 7:57 PM
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♥Mona Me♥

 
If the words to your poem had legs they would be dancing, beautiful in placement. I love it.
 
Posted by ♥Mona Me♥ on Saturday, July 25, 2009 - 9:21 PM
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Owen and Sharon

 
Hey..I don't recall this one from your book. So like..either my mind is beginning to slip..or this is a new piece? Whatever the case..I could almost swear that you created this one for us. If not..bullseye man!  I absoultely love it

Peace out,
O

 
Posted by ~O&S~ MAGNIFICENT on Sunday, July 26, 2009 - 3:21 AM
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witchyalice-666+EGM+
Alice Phillips

 
WOW AWESOME..LUV IT
 
Posted by witchyalice-666+EGM+ on Monday, July 27, 2009 - 1:12 PM
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Myѕtí¢ ♥ SpíяíŤ
Mårïlyñ Mystïqµê Valentine Baby

 
THIS POEM IS MY FAVORITE!GOODNIGHTMYLOVEFFFFFFF.jpg picture by marilynvalentina_2009

 
Posted by Myѕtí¢ ♥ SpíяíŤ on Friday, July 31, 2009 - 8:38 AM
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~Darksiren~ *Dark Poetry*

 
Rob this is beautiful!!! Excellent and passionate write!
 
Posted by ~Darksiren~ *Dark Poetry* on Sunday, August 02, 2009 - 10:57 PM
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Brookie
Brookie Lea

 
smiles
 
Posted by Brookie on Monday, August 03, 2009 - 2:31 AM
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Kim

 
 They say the fastest way to a Mans heart is thru his stomach.  Womans beauty is a POWERFUL weapon. He sharpens her with his Love. He's been stabbed thru his heart by her beauty before, but the pain is softened thru her eloquent lips... Thx Rob, you make me want to spend my days writing of such splendor. Thru the doldrums of society, this is an ecsape I simply can't resist
 
Posted by Kim on Monday, August 03, 2009 - 4:16 PM
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NEPHILIM CHRIST
NEphIlIm Christ

 
This poem must be about someone very special to you.
 
Posted by NEPHILIM CHRIST on Sunday, August 09, 2009 - 10:34 AM
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