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AJ Lewis


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April 16, 2008 - Wednesday 

Category: Writing and Poetry

you stupid, arrogant people
who come to me
to convert me
to save my soul.

you tell me that the world will end soon
and that God will send me to hell
where I will burn and burn and burn.

you say that I have been deceived by Satan
and that my vices will keep me from an afterlife of pleasure
in a wonderful, holy kingdom.

you find a way to prove your faith
with facts of your making,
and all of your spiritual insight
is from a book that you deem as "true."

your religion is like every other religion;
you mock those who don't believe what you do
and damn to hell those who follow a different path than yours.

you are guilty of your own conceit
in your twisted desire to save the world by your own fashion.

now let me tell you something:

I have heard words that could hold the mind captive for a lifetime -
words that confuse and impress guilt,
that cause a man or a woman much emotional pain internally.
all of these words are desperate
and come from the selfish desire of wanting to be saved.
so,
when your end comes and you face that terrible darkness
we shall see who is right and who is wrong,
and we shall see
how far off from the truth we really all are.

Mythville
Douglas McDaniel

 
Ah, a scathing indictment of Christian religion. Lately I've been noticing that religion is the basis for every messed up news story I've been reading lately.

 
Posted by Mythville on April 16, 2008 - Wednesday - 3:29 PM
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Laura. [...yeah.]
Laura Goben

 
Wow. That's really amazing. Great work.
:)


If you're interested, my most recent blog is a piece that's pretty related.

Just a thought.

 
Posted by Laura. [...yeah.] on April 17, 2008 - Thursday - 1:16 AM
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The Playboy Bunny

 
this was very good... It makes me think of the people who are always saying things to me.
BRAVO!!!
 
Posted by The Playboy Bunny on April 17, 2008 - Thursday - 1:16 AM
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Joyce
Joyce Rapier

 
Very good poem! Too bad the world (converts) can't see or chooses not to hear what other people want to believe. They need to walk in another person's shoes to see how pinched a soul can get. Unfortunately, until the end comes no one knows for certain except by the faith you travel.

 
Posted by Joyce on April 17, 2008 - Thursday - 1:17 AM
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Ramona

 
Unfortunately, religion, gives God a bad name.

 
Posted by Ramona on April 17, 2008 - Thursday - 1:18 AM
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Poetry4us
Poetry Us

 
so true.
rock on!
 
Posted by Poetry4us on April 22, 2008 - Tuesday - 1:28 AM
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Alanna

 
I must agree completely! I've not seen such a good write on the subject!
 
Posted by Alanna on August 25, 2008 - Monday - 4:10 AM
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Avril Rain

 
Wow if I didn't know better I would think you had been talking to someone I know. He acts very much like this and at times it just pisses me off. He is so off base!! Love the fight in this poem.
Love, Avril
 
Posted by Avril Rain on September 24, 2008 - Wednesday - 6:53 AM
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