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AJ Lewis


Last Updated: 10/1/2009

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Gender: Male
Sign: Pisces

City: the desert
State: Arizona
Country: US

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August 25, 2008 - Monday 

Category: Writing and Poetry

it shouldn't take much to tell you how I have been;
just a quick "hello" or a quick
"I love you"
before I get off the phone.
it shouldn't have to take 15 minutes to say goodbye as
you search for a reason
to keep me on the
phone.

this is too much,
and when you sit there breathing on the other end
I am forced to ask
"HELLO, ARE YOU THERE?"

why must you attack me for wanting to go?

what am I doing that is so wrong?

this cell phone has become a burden;
it has become a chain to your whims.

and even now
as I am trying to write
you are calling me,
wanting to know what I am doing
or who I am with.

tonight I am with myself,
and as mysterious as this must sound
I enjoy being without all of this technology.
this typewriter is silent to the touch:
no mechanical hum or electricity.
this room is open to the desert
with no TV or computer.

I like sitting here sometimes,
without the drone of the new world.

and btw, if I were with another girl,
my phone would have surely been
off.

My Guardian Angel~ (blessed beyond belief)

 
I love this....and I can truly understand your need for solitude at times. When I am with people, I enjoy them but it is because at that moment I want to be with them, but when I need my time alone I simply need it and that is a difficult thing for people to understand when they know the other side of me that can be so outgoing. People can be needy and the irony of it is that they don't realize that by being needy of our time, they are not being respectful of our own need for time alone and away from the world and all its noise.


Great poem...I particularly like the last stanza....wonderful ending.


MGA~
 
Posted by My Guardian Angel~ (blessed beyond belief) on August 24, 2008 - Sunday - 6:27 PM
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Lil Shug ~Word Mechanic

 
"GOT STALKED?"...All kiddin aside, she is like that not because she doesn't trust you and what you are up to, it is because of her own insecurities... she doesn't believe she deserves you, so all of that low self esteem comes out...in insecurity and a smothering manner. It's how us chics "get" sometimes...then it festers and simmers and we turn into these stalkin psycho hose beasts'...
 
Posted by Lil Shug ~Word Mechanic on August 24, 2008 - Sunday - 6:45 PM
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debby

 
really like the simplicity and reality of this one... and, great ending...
 
Posted by debby on August 24, 2008 - Sunday - 7:46 PM
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Gina
Regina Hill

 
Cell phones do seem to have brought about a whole new world in some ways. Interesting poem.

 
Posted by Gina on August 24, 2008 - Sunday - 7:46 PM
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Monique
Monique Ponte

 
i love the candure (? spelling) in this write...it's fresh open very nice.btw thanks for the invite...i will read on
 
Posted by Monique on August 24, 2008 - Sunday - 10:48 PM
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Empty Souls

 
Good piece

Nick
 
Posted by Empty Souls on August 25, 2008 - Monday - 12:12 AM
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Phantom Flyer

 
I realate really well to this.

It think you can be fully into someone without being constantly in contact with them.

To me it seems like I am not being trusted by the person I am with if they do this.

...and trust is everything when it comes to a relationship.

So what do you have really with this person if this is the case? Just my opinion.


I really like this in that it captures a scenario that frustrates me as well.

Very well expressed!
 
Posted by Phantom Flyer on August 25, 2008 - Monday - 1:12 AM
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Green T (drinks COFFEE, actually)

 
Hello, new friend, are you there? (jus' kidding... *chuckle*)
Great write,
Looking forward to reading more and becoming friends here in " 'space "...
Thanks for friend requesting me,
~terry
:-D
 
Posted by Green T (drinks COFFEE, actually) on August 25, 2008 - Monday - 4:08 AM
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bert
bert russell

 
Tricks knows how it feels.

 
Posted by bert on August 25, 2008 - Monday - 4:11 AM
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...Eul...

 
hahaha. Your candor here is a reminder why I like having male friendships.

 
Posted by ...Eul... on August 25, 2008 - Monday - 4:12 AM
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Halkios

 
I love the typewriter sound; takes the writer's block away...
Internet may have brought together some; but took away others who were closer...
cellphones did the same; myspace as well
Computer's sound in the night like a soft breeze
and we all try to cope...
Life will never be as before
but as poets we can still hear the sound of our own heart... that will never change.

 
Posted by Halkios on August 25, 2008 - Monday - 7:39 PM
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Handlebar Hammer
steve barham

 
cool write...
has me thinking (I like when that happens).


I remember being within a full house thinking how sweet
it would to be alone....
now being alone and without I think how sweet it would be
in a full house.

 
Posted by Handlebar Hammer on August 26, 2008 - Tuesday - 6:15 AM
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*La Alma Profunda*
Valerie Clark

 
Even when someone has nothing else to say, they'll keep you on the phone anyway and don't even really know why. I'm familiar with it, unfortunately. Thanks for the insight.


** Valerie **
 
Posted by *La Alma Profunda* on August 27, 2008 - Wednesday - 10:20 AM
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Ki

 
Funny this sounds like few of the guys I dated would who call me only to sit silently after the beginning small talk. Or incredulous when I didn't pick up the phone the first time around. Sigh...confidence is much sexier.

 
Posted by Ki on September 19, 2008 - Friday - 11:10 AM
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Avril Rain

 
The two main things in my life are my pc and cell without them I would go nuts. lol I love the way you ended this poem.
Isn't nice you can shut that thing off when you need too? Love, Avril
 
Posted by Avril Rain on September 24, 2008 - Wednesday - 6:54 AM
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Liz

 
I love this one. I think we have all been here at one time or another. People that are insecure with themselves have a hard time dealing with and understanding people that are secure enough to be alone. Also, I have come to find that people will accuse you of the very same thing that they are guilty of. Very cool.

 
Posted by Liz on February 25, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:09 AM
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