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Status: Single
City: Virginia Beach
State: Virginia
Country: US
Signup Date: 11/23/2006
Thursday, April 30, 2009 

Current mood:  accomplished
Category: Writing and Poetry

Poem Dedicated To:

The Independent Woman


You contain more than an extra rib,

Were created for more than to just be his,

You possess a treasure beneath the skin,

A soul pure regardless of the expectation,

Your value doesn’t lie from between the thighs,

But  more along the lines from the price of your mind,

The cost for equality in societies eyes,

Expensed to be less because ignorance is blind,

Dreams tend to fade because the odds have been stacked,

But your head help up- shouldn’t be viewed from your back,

Let go of your defense- and learn to attack,

Obstacles are only facades, unless your passion is lacked,

Value only descends when the items been used,

Don’t shelf yourself for purchase; you’re more than a tool,

Be the hand of creation, not the object he choose

Don’t become the blueprint- instead let the creator be you,

Don’t let vices of the media, determine your worth,

Or a magazine cover, saying your body needs work,

Only workout you need, is your problems in church,

If you’re a diamond in the ground, just brush off the dirt,

Educate yourself on the items you need,

Not the wants from deception by desires from greed,

Let prayer be the only occupation that you have on your knees,

That’s a mans position, but only when there’s a ring,

So the life you live, make more than just dreams,

Understand relationships aren’t solo- but are built on a team,

Yeah the most important just might be the king,


But life is like chess- true power- it lies with the QUEEN


By: Ellis Keyz

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Angie

 
Wow...funny how when you need to hear the words, someone comes along and gives them to you. Thank you for the inspiration...you are incredible.
 
 
Posted by Angie on Thursday, April 30, 2009 - 6:11 PM
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MAJESTIC ESSENCE

 
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL. . .SUCH POWER. . .SUCH GRACE. . .YOU ARE BLESSED BEYOND MEASURE TO BE GIFTED WITH SUCH ELOQUENCE. . .YOU MY FRIEND ARE A TREASURE. . .BOUNTIFUL BLESSINGS AND ABUNDANT LOVE. . .MAJESTIC ESSENCE
 
Posted by MAJESTIC ESSENCE on Thursday, April 30, 2009 - 6:15 PM
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♥MoNcHeRRe AmoRRe♥ Facebook me! >Myshielle<

 
Hey that's reallii good!
 
Posted by ♥MoNcHeRRe AmoRRe♥ Facebook me! >Myshielle< on Thursday, April 30, 2009 - 6:30 PM
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GOD'S♥CHiiLD

 
ii LOVE iiT
 
 
Posted by GOD'S♥CHiiLD on Thursday, April 30, 2009 - 9:38 PM
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•HyS*aNgEl•

 
WOW THOSE R SOME SPOKEN WORDS A TRUE MAN CAN WRITE THAT AN MEAN EVRY WORD!!!go luck to u an watevr ur tryna pursue
 
Posted by •HyS*aNgEl• on Thursday, April 30, 2009 - 10:08 PM
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Ms. Wonderful
Tanisha Miles

 
I really like this poem its lovely.. Your are a great writer
 
Posted by Ms. Wonderful on Friday, May 01, 2009 - 12:02 AM
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*/wicked pink/*(better recognize a strong woman!)
Xx Oo

 
that was breath taking hun
 
Posted by */wicked pink/*(better recognize a strong woman!) on Friday, May 01, 2009 - 12:29 AM
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ashley
ashley Myers

 
wow.....
 
 
Posted by ashley on Friday, May 01, 2009 - 12:40 AM
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Zbella Nicole™
Zbella Nicole

 
That poem should be 4 me. u ever need someone im hear...ps. this poem is mine cus i clame it....and it discribes me
 
Posted by Zbella Nicole™ on Friday, May 01, 2009 - 1:41 AM
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vanessa
vanessa garcia

 
Needed to hear that!!!
 
Posted by vanessa on Friday, May 01, 2009 - 3:51 AM
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vanessa
vanessa garcia

 
U read my mind... Needed to hear that!!
 
Posted by vanessa on Friday, May 01, 2009 - 4:01 AM
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QU33N ARIANNA

 
Marvelous! Thank you for the uplifting words! I know that there are still real gentlemen out there...and you are one of them! Women are so exploited, underrated and quick to demean themselves too (just look at some of the profiles/pics etc.), but when you (a man) put words out there like that it shows that all men are not dogz...some are capable of understanding women for their true worth! Thanks Ellis!
 
 
Posted by QU33N ARIANNA on Friday, May 01, 2009 - 6:21 AM
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~*2 Wr0Ng$ N3v@ M@k3$ @ RiGhT*~
Kandi Gurl Williams

 
OMG THIS IS JUST WAT I NEEDED 2 HEAR. IM SOOO GLAD 2 NO U CARE 4 N IZ ALL ABOUT DA LADIES. DIS IS SOOO TOUCHIN IT MAKES ME WANNA CRY. KEEP UP DA GUD WRK.
 
Posted by ~*2 Wr0Ng$ N3v@ M@k3$ @ RiGhT*~ on Friday, May 01, 2009 - 7:07 AM
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*~pretty&slim~*
KIa BRooke

 
OMG!!! i really love dis!!
 
Posted by *~pretty&slim~* on Friday, May 01, 2009 - 8:32 AM
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ﮛŐ Ì B3's wh() I b3 €h@tS m3\*BR!*

 
Nicely done. I really needed that.
 
Posted by ﮛŐ Ì B3's wh() I b3 €h@tS m3\*BR!* on Friday, May 01, 2009 - 10:07 PM
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*SMILEZ*
Darika Ward

 
I'm taken aback! that is beautiful, powerful and inspiring. i knw a few women who could read this and get something out of it, myself included! Thank you so much for sharing!!!
 
Posted by *SMILEZ* on Saturday, May 02, 2009 - 4:30 PM
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*Sabby (D.G.A.F!!)*

 
Very nice =)
 
Posted by *Sabby (D.G.A.F!!)* on Saturday, May 02, 2009 - 5:23 PM
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MZ.DESIREELYNEICE! R.I.P. JUBA!

 
Very good!!! Love it!!!
 
 
Posted by MZ.DESIREELYNEICE! R.I.P. JUBA! on Saturday, May 02, 2009 - 5:24 PM
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Lady T
Tiffany Williams

 
awwww justin this is soo nice :-) keep up the good work! im proud of you!!! ♥
 
Posted by Lady T on Saturday, May 02, 2009 - 5:25 PM
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·::.Ληδřιαηα.::·

 
beautiful, i love it!!
 
Posted by ·::.Ληδřιαηα.::· on Saturday, May 02, 2009 - 5:38 PM
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Miss Pεяƒεct.
Ƒℓyεя Than u

 
that was great. it was really deep and inspirational
 
 
Posted by Miss Pεяƒεct. on Saturday, May 02, 2009 - 7:55 PM
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M! L0V3 !S 3V3RL@ST!NG
Katerra Gabrielle Holmes

 
that waz incredible n 2 be honest if u got this published sumwhere evry female could read this n understand it, it would help a lot of gurls/women in da world 2day. keep it up!
 
 
Posted by M! L0V3 !S 3V3RL@ST!NG on Tuesday, May 05, 2009 - 12:23 AM
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~$The Mental Seductress$~
Inessha M.

 
Some definitely to be shared for pure words of wisdom, good work..
 
 
Posted by ~$The Mental Seductress$~ on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 1:09 AM
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*tReS biEn*<3

 
good poem<3
 
 
Posted by *tReS biEn*<3 on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 1:30 AM
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♥[[E]]pitome oF Fre$h♥ {{Mz.KP}}

 
So powerful and just what women need to hear. Thank you =]
 
 
Posted by ♥[[E]]pitome oF Fre$h♥ {{Mz.KP}} on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 3:08 AM
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Fearless
Jasmine Henderson

 
I like ur poetry. Its very deep. I am a girl. Dont let that picture fool u lol. Its my man. U got some real talent dude. Keep up the good work.
 
Posted by Fearless on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 5:27 AM
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%Momm!! Sex!!%
Mommy Sexii

 
wooow that was niice...that was somethiin that touches the heart.ur poetry iis iincrediible. somethiing we hv iin commiin ii love to wriite as well. ur iincrediible those wrds u wrote mean the wrld to my heart thnx a miilliion
 
Posted by %Momm!! Sex!!% on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 9:34 AM
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*~MZ TINKERBELL~*

 
awwww i loved ur poem u have sum serious talent.
 
Posted by *~MZ TINKERBELL~* on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 10:56 AM
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~Alexis~

 
This was really one of the best poems i have ever read. I like a man that respect women and let it be known. ur a great poet and please keep up the good work!! ----Miss TNC
 
Posted by ~Alexis~ on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 4:27 PM
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Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!!

 
Thank You So Much I am honestley flattered... :)
 
Posted by Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!! on Saturday, May 09, 2009 - 6:15 PM
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Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!!

 
I just want to thank every and any one who has written a comment towards my work here. My words in which you deem inspiring is only motivated by the words in which you have given to me in which have inspired myself. I want to share the fact with you that I left my house when I was 14 years old, to pursue something greater than I had at the present. However, for those first 11 years of that 14 I use to watch my Mother be a victim to domestic abuse, as well as drug addiction. On top of these things my Mother was trapped in the system of prostitution, a job she only did for the financial betterment of the situation financially we were incapable of escaping. I write these words to all women inspired by the eye witness accounts from the adolescent growth from a child to a man that was received from the life spent with my Mother. I just want to let any woman know, that you are a Queen. No matter what your situation is, no matter what your past is, no matter the mistakes you feel you will never escape from. You don’t need a man women, you don’t. The only person you ever guaranteed to be with every single day for the rest of your life, is the one you look at in the mirror every morning. You’ll never escape your own skin. I love and respect every single woman I encounter, each of you has a strength no man will ever in his life dream to obtain. One last thing women to the women who still have your virginity and your true form of youth and innocence. Let no one just take that from you, or tell you when it needs to be given. Next time someone attempts to pressure you, or persuade you into doing something you want to wait or are not ready for. Think of my words and look that person in the eyes and say this. “I COULD BE LIKE YOU IN FIVE MINUTES, BUT YOU CAN NEVER BE LIKE ME AGAIN.” I love all of you, and GOD BLESS……


Your Boy,
The Poet, The Songwriter, & The Imperfect Man
Ellis Keyz
 
 
Posted by Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!! on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 10:07 PM
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Baby™

 
i love this this! Why didnt you add me before :)
 
Posted by Baby™ on Thursday, May 07, 2009 - 2:14 AM
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Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!!

 
Definitley have you added now babygirl and happy birthday once again congrats..
 
Posted by Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!! on Saturday, May 09, 2009 - 6:14 PM
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~*% NaTuRaL bEaUtY%*~
Quinisha Williams

 
I WANNA THANK U FOR SAYN DAT BECAUSE ALLLL OF WAT U SAID I BELIEVE IS TRUE...I GIVE U MAD PROPS FA STANDIN UP 4 WOMEN LIK DAT...KEEP IT UP
 
 
Posted by ~*% NaTuRaL bEaUtY%*~ on Thursday, May 07, 2009 - 2:53 AM
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Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!!

 
I will always hold you down because y'all stand beside a man so strong... It took you to create me.. Thank You...
 
Posted by Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!! on Saturday, May 09, 2009 - 6:14 PM
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**tryna let u go... bt dis new life wont let me **
Angela Jackson

 
I am truly speechless. That was a wonderful poem... ima poet ma self and i can honestly say you have a wonderful talent... i give big ups to what you want to pursue. and once again... BEAUTIFUL
 
 
Posted by **tryna let u go... bt dis new life wont let me ** on Thursday, May 07, 2009 - 4:25 AM
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Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!!

 
Thank You so much... Just know that every time I see a woman raise a child on her own that leaves me speechless...
 
Posted by Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!! on Saturday, May 09, 2009 - 6:13 PM
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Isis J. ~follow me~ www.twitter.com/THEONLYIsisJo
Isis J.

 
~Kudos for this one homie~
 
Posted by Isis J. ~follow me~ www.twitter.com/THEONLYIsisJo on Thursday, May 07, 2009 - 7:18 AM
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Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!!

 
Definitley got to give you love and appreciate for them kudos... Keep them coming lol...
 
Posted by Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!! on Saturday, May 09, 2009 - 6:13 PM
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Taina Laurent

 
nice!
 
Posted by [custom mini] on Thursday, May 07, 2009 - 8:54 PM
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Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!!

 
I try to be and try to make sure my words flow the same as my mind..
 
Posted by Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!! on Saturday, May 09, 2009 - 6:12 PM
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www.twitter.com/2uImNotAllThat
Katina Searcy

 
NICE!
 
Posted by www.twitter.com/2uImNotAllThat on Thursday, May 07, 2009 - 9:06 PM
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Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!!

 
Thanky You Warmly
 
Posted by Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!! on Saturday, May 09, 2009 - 6:12 PM
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wísdóm wít ágé ís dá béáüty óf lífé
Lády Párrís Trüé lóvé báby

 
Aww dat is so sweet n cute nt alt of men cnt view women as treasure cuz dey dnt take da tim 2 undastnd us cuz dey 2 busy thinkn wit watz btwn dare legz bt u my frien hav done it i jus wish otha men c it da way u do
 
Posted by wísdóm wít ágé ís dá béáüty óf lífé on Thursday, May 07, 2009 - 10:46 PM
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Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!!

 
I wish they could if they could I wouldn't of had to see my mother treated the way she was... God Bless U and thank you for your love..
 
Posted by Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!! on Saturday, May 09, 2009 - 6:12 PM
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Kaleen Nicole*aka* Ms. Leen(Twitter Kaleen_Nicole)
Kaleen Nicole

 
This was right on time hun...I really love this very inspiring..I just went through a bad break up yesterday. Thank God for souls like you.
 
Posted by Kaleen Nicole*aka* Ms. Leen(Twitter Kaleen_Nicole) on Thursday, May 07, 2009 - 10:57 PM
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Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!!

 
So sorry to hear that babygurl... You know I always got that shoulder and ear to comfort you... Just let me know whenever you need someone to talk too...
 
Posted by Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!! on Saturday, May 09, 2009 - 6:11 PM
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ClaRk KizZY

 
pretty good but say but I think your last line should have said life is like chess because we all have 2 protect are queen. or maybe life is lke one big movie because no matter what it has 2 end. but good stuff though man.
 
Posted by ClaRk KizZY on Thursday, May 07, 2009 - 11:41 PM
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Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!!

 
Hey I am always open for constructive criticism always happy to have someone critique in areas that I can improve in...
 
Posted by Ellis Keyz *Twitter.com/EllisKeyz* The Preppy !!! on Saturday, May 09, 2009 - 6:11 PM
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HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!

 
VERY NICELY WRITTEN!! VERY INSPIRING AND UPLIFTING! THANKS KEEP MORE COMING!!
 
Posted by HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!! on Friday, May 08, 2009 - 2:16 AM
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