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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 19
Sign: Leo

City: London
State: London and South East
Country: UK
Signup Date: 12/23/2006

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Friday, February 16, 2007 

Current mood:  curious
Category: Writing and Poetry

A Lil Poem
I Think Every1 Should Read That Came To Me After Reading In the National Press That a 15 year old Boy Had Been Shot Dead.

Childhood innocence taken
by the streets
by thoughts controlled by insecurities that posses the mind
unable to find a way out
locked and doomed in darkness
no one to understand their plight.
A piece of Steel that makes you think your 10 feet taller
but when used can leave some one 6 feet under
brehs growing up 2day not even reaching 18
what's going on
parents not even able to see der youths pass their GCSE's
who would ever believe
that we the young ones
the ones that demand so much
but give so little
Think they can take Gods place and take lives
A piece of Steel that makes you think your 10 feet taller
but when used can leave some one 6 feet under
Killing
Shooting
Stabbings
cover the news
tears of pain
hurt
and
sorrow
as darkness shadows over families that grieve
over why their poor soul has been taken
Children teenagers that could of done great things
youths trying to escape from previous pains
But left for bredrins to look over there graves
Is this really the way.

By Jefferson C

I have shed tears for mine
Time for you to do the same
lets be real time to open our eyes
to the pain and suffering this is causing
in speaking this even though it has not happened to me yet
but to my bredrins and others it something that occurs too often if you feel you want to
Forward this to your own friends

 

hghjg

 
THIS IS SO TRUE....I LOVED IT....!
 
Posted by hghjg on Friday, February 16, 2007 - 3:40 PM
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Yasmin Nya

 
OMD alieeeeee jeez daz a reli sad poem b
 
Posted by ;♥ on Saturday, February 17, 2007 - 1:12 AM
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Phii - twitter.com/PhoebeChi <3

 
****serious poem**** 

so true, youth need to fix up

 
Posted by Phii - twitter.com/PhoebeChi <3 on Saturday, February 17, 2007 - 10:39 AM
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DELETED!Catch Me On Facebook..

 

awww dis is soo gdd!!...mkes me feel baree sadd lyk btt itzz truu coz dats lyf dese dayz init! xxx


 
Posted by DELETED!Catch Me On Facebook.. on Saturday, February 17, 2007 - 3:56 PM
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***♥RéNeë♥***

 
Wow! dat poem is really really gud, i kno i dnt kno u or anything but im really felling your writting style,keep it up, youths need to learn...
 
Posted by ***♥RéNeë♥*** on Saturday, March 03, 2007 - 12:20 PM
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rYz ||
ryan brookes

 
u got talent b, i like ur poems mayn!
well dun J x
 
Posted by rYz || on Monday, April 02, 2007 - 6:17 PM
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♥WATCH ME ON BBC2 NEXT SATURDAY SINGING @5.30pm

 
u have no clue who i am i know lol but i like your poem man, it pisses me off how people wanna choose to waste thier lives away while other kids thier age might be in some hospital bed dying of cancer, its jus winds me up how ppl take thier life for granted takin stupid uneccasary chances with it that might lock dem up in a cell 4 most of thier life or take it away from them completely.
 
Posted by ♥WATCH ME ON BBC2 NEXT SATURDAY SINGING @5.30pm on Saturday, April 21, 2007 - 9:14 PM
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♥..*B.s+3?z*..♥

 
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Posted by ♥..*B.s+3?z*..♥ on Saturday, April 28, 2007 - 8:30 PM
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MissBajanDelight turns 15 in 4days yay!!

 
do is deep and telling da truth boi
 
Posted by MissBajanDelight turns 15 in 4days yay!! on Sunday, May 13, 2007 - 2:43 AM
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MissBajanDelight turns 15 in 4days yay!!

 
<P>i mean dis poem is deep and tellin the truth... </P><P>keep doin ur ting </P><P>xx BajanDelight xx</P>
 
Posted by MissBajanDelight turns 15 in 4days yay!! on Sunday, May 13, 2007 - 2:44 AM
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fairy.

 
wow
 
Posted by fairy. on Monday, May 28, 2007 - 11:52 AM
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