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Susan Morganlafey Bosler

Susan Bosler


Last Updated: 11/24/2009

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Thursday, July 16, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry






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State of Affairs


Just like the song
there were clouds in my coffee
I watched them change shapes
from wild hares to silly smiles

Took another sip
it was hot
it was sweet

Twirling my slippers
around my toes
cushions of ease
another indication of
the drowsiness of my current existence

I have to ask,
when did our love change?
When did it go from
wild, open orange flames
licking at our “souls”
to steadily glowing grey rocks
all snug in a dirt based pit
needing constant stirring to keep them warm
against the cooling breeze of indifference?

Last time we made love
last time we had sex
different things, these two

Our ambitious frolics
passed away without an obituary
what remains is comfortable
but not clever

In the bowels of your stomach
you feel it, too
but we say nothing
devious but not noxious

We do not mean to evade
what needs to be said
that will never be spoken aloud.

Nice of you to bring me coffee
you’re always nice to me
is nice enough, for the rest of my life?

©Susan Morgan Bosler
 2009




Currently listening:
Clouds in My Coffee 1965-1995
By Carly Simon
Release date: 1995-12-08
Inky (aka Heidi)

 
BEAUTIFUL SENTIMENT AND MENTAL VISUAL.. SOMETIMES ITS JUST A SIP OF SWEETNESS THAT MAKES THE WHOLE DAY AND NOT AN ENTIRE CUP, THAT MIGHT BE BITTER AT THE END.. SIP A DAY, MAKES LIFE A LITTLE SWEETER.. GREAT POEM LOVE AND HUGS INKY
 
Posted by Inky (aka Heidi) on Thursday, July 16, 2009 - 1:44 AM
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Susan Morganlafey Bosler
Susan Bosler

 
Inky my dear, this is exactly what I was trying to convey - this is usually what love come down to - comfort!  Thank you so much for coming by my lovely friend!!

 
Posted by Susan Morganlafey Bosler on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 1:05 AM
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ww E

 
Very nice flow to this capture of both soft and sweet but also foreboding sentiment ... I was struck by how it sounds like both may be feeling the same thing, as opposed to one staying hot and the other cooling down ... I wonder how often people are lucky enough to have it happen that way ... Is nice enough? I doubt it, but I guess it depends ...
 
Posted by ww E on Thursday, July 16, 2009 - 2:19 AM
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Susan Morganlafey Bosler
Susan Bosler

 
Your points are well thought of - I would think that the comfort would have to be equal between the two or else there would be great sadness and longing.  Thank you so much!!!

 
Posted by Susan Morganlafey Bosler on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 1:07 AM
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flame in the snow

 
Excellent writing as always.
xo

 
Posted by flame in the snow on Thursday, July 16, 2009 - 2:31 AM
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Susan Morganlafey Bosler
Susan Bosler

 
Thank you dear lady!!!

 
Posted by Susan Morganlafey Bosler on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 1:07 AM
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Kelvin

 
poignant write, Susan.... "is nice enough, for the rest of life?" a tough thing to ever have to  ask that question...


Kelvin  
 
Posted by Kelvin on Thursday, July 16, 2009 - 3:24 AM
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Susan Morganlafey Bosler
Susan Bosler

 
Hi Kelvin, yes it is a hard question.  Maybe the answer will be "yes!"  Although it might be "no" in which case this lady has a whole lot of thinking to do!!!  Thank you for commenting!!

 
Posted by Susan Morganlafey Bosler on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 1:08 AM
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John(Coyote)
John castellenas

 
Poem caught me by surprise. A excellent poem.
                  Coyote

 
Posted by John(Coyote) on Thursday, July 16, 2009 - 3:34 AM
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Susan Morganlafey Bosler
Susan Bosler

 
Thank you Coyote - it's good to know there are still surprises in me!!

 
Posted by Susan Morganlafey Bosler on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 1:09 AM
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Belfast David
David Agnew

 
"Last time we made love
last time we had sex
different things, these two"

A fine line maybe between these two. Yet all the difference in the world.

David

 
Posted by Belfast David on Thursday, July 16, 2009 - 10:22 AM
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Susan Morganlafey Bosler
Susan Bosler

 
I totally agree - totally different!  Thanks David for commenting, I appreciate it so!

 
Posted by Susan Morganlafey Bosler on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 1:09 AM
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sean reddan

 
Fantastic first stanza, but the whole poem is really really great!!

 
Posted by sean reddan on Thursday, July 16, 2009 - 12:47 PM
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Susan Morganlafey Bosler
Susan Bosler

 
Hi Sean, thank you very much!!!

 
Posted by Susan Morganlafey Bosler on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 1:10 AM
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Susan Morganlafey Bosler
Susan Bosler

 
Hi Lola, wow thank you!!  It is nice to be comfortable with someone but having a couple of fireworks now and then adds a very good spice!  Thank you for the extra hearts, my dear friend!!

 
Posted by Susan Morganlafey Bosler on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 1:11 AM
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Seeker of Truth
Sandra Glodrey

 
I so feel these words!! very poignant, Hon, and beautifully written!!

 
Posted by Seeker of Truth on Thursday, July 16, 2009 - 11:50 PM
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Susan Morganlafey Bosler
Susan Bosler

 
Thank you Sandy!!

 
Posted by Susan Morganlafey Bosler on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 1:11 AM
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lana
Lana Deym campbell

 
Very honest, direct confrontation...it happens in every relationship and marriage...when the hot becomes comfortable, the relationship becomes family.  Is it enough? lol you ask tough questions...this person at least brings you coffee and is described as nice. That is, they care.

The thing is, a bond is cemented with time and it may not feel like it did initially, but having become comfortable does not mean there is less love.  As family, the tendency is take each other for granted

Powerful write on a subject often squirreled away into the drawers. Well done!

All the couples I know hardly ever have sex :).

xo

 
Posted by lana on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 12:48 AM
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Susan Morganlafey Bosler
Susan Bosler

 
Lana my dear, your comment is so full!  Thank you!!  I agree with you that a sense of family is so very important.  I think that is what I miss the most being a widow - just that sense of connection.  Rather selfish perhaps and I agree with you about the couples, after many years - sex doesn't seem as important as it once did (although keep in mind I am a scorpio - so we are never happy without it!!) :)

 
Posted by Susan Morganlafey Bosler on Friday, July 17, 2009 - 1:14 AM
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Tracy

 
yeah,i like your approach and delivery
 
Posted by Tracy on Saturday, July 18, 2009 - 4:24 AM
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Susan Morganlafey Bosler
Susan Bosler

 
Thank you Tracy!!

 
Posted by Susan Morganlafey Bosler on Saturday, July 18, 2009 - 11:31 PM
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