Who Gives Kudos: Evan (1) Michelle (1) Kimberly (2) MIZZ SECRET (2) (1) ~*~just mys.. (2) ash (2) Sandra (2) Ariel (2) Shannon (2) (2) Bill Ectric (1) (2) (2) DREAMWEAVER (2) *~Heather~* (2) (2)

	Evan	Good story. Keep turning them out!   Posted by Evan on Wednesday, April 19, 2006 - 3:31 PM [Reply to this]

	~**Kristen**~ Kristen Lawson	i thought it was good....but it kinda let ya hangin in the end....but it kept my interest...   very good....   Posted by ~**Kristen**~ on Wednesday, April 19, 2006 - 3:32 PM [Reply to this]

	Kimberly	Definitely kept my interest - would be interested in reading more!  Kudos to you!! I eagerly await the rest of the story!! Kimberly   Posted by Kimberly on Wednesday, April 19, 2006 - 6:51 PM [Reply to this]

	Michelle	Thought it was a good short, loved your style of writing. Ive always done a little writing on the side, and would love to have a book published one day, but we'll see. Look me up sometime if ya wanna chat ;)   Posted by Michelle on Wednesday, April 19, 2006 - 6:52 PM [Reply to this]

	MIZZ SECRET	THIS IS REALLY NICE....   Posted by MIZZ SECRET on Wednesday, April 19, 2006 - 8:36 PM [Reply to this]

		Yeap....excellent...but I want more!!!   Posted by on Thursday, April 20, 2006 - 2:48 AM [Reply to this]

	~*~just myself~*~	okay i'm hooked. what happens next???   Posted by ~*~just myself~*~ on Thursday, April 20, 2006 - 3:53 PM [Reply to this]

	ash	Pretty good!   Posted by ash on Friday, April 21, 2006 - 2:10 AM [Reply to this]

	Sandra Sandra Rogers Gulick	love the story but where is the middle and the ending? it is very catching and it makes me want to keep reading but it just seems to go no where. this is just me but i would love to hear the rest of the story. i really love the way in such a short time you made it to feel like i really knew this man and his life. you are extreamly talented!! and this really would make a great opening to a longer story. however, it does stand on it's own. great work keep it up! ~sandra   Posted by Sandra on Friday, April 21, 2006 - 1:22 PM [Reply to this]

	Shannon	I loved the opening paragraph. That's exactly how I feel about my hometown when I manage to find time to go back...lived there for 28 years, no every back road like the back of my hand, and yet, I feel like I'm a stranger now. You portrayed the sentiment perfectly :)  Can't wait to read more!   Posted by Shannon on Saturday, April 29, 2006 - 9:35 PM [Reply to this]

		Interesting.   Posted by on Monday, May 01, 2006 - 2:37 PM [Reply to this]

	Aelese	I liked your story. I think you could have gone further with it, but for a short story it was interesting. Keep it up.   Posted by Aelese on Monday, May 08, 2006 - 2:12 PM [Reply to this]

		So, this story is very interesting.  What I find very intresting is that all the charcters are connected by the cats.  The roomates are so distant from eachothat that all communication happens through observation of the previous occupant in each room of the house...and the outsiders provide the only actual physical contact.  However, they all have some interraction with the cats.  Interesting.   Posted by on Monday, May 08, 2006 - 7:00 PM [Reply to this]

	Jenny Jennifer Branch	Great story. Keep up the great work.   Posted by Jenny on Monday, May 22, 2006 - 4:49 PM [Reply to this]

	DORI...aka...Dorayme...R.I.P. Dori Carder	I thought it was good until the end! The end left me hanging but I guess that is a good thing. Maybe you can let me know what happened after that..lol!   Posted by DORI...aka...Dorayme...R.I.P. on Monday, May 22, 2006 - 11:50 PM [Reply to this]

	Bill Ectric Bill Ectric	I know that exact feeling of entering an apartment where you once lived - it's strange to see the changes. I enjoyed the story. I sort of wanted something more to happen, but I know a lot of short stories are like interesting slices of life, and don't necessarily need some big finish. Overall, I like the way you write and I enjoyed the story.   Posted by Bill Ectric on Tuesday, June 06, 2006 - 12:36 AM [Reply to this]

	DREAMWEAVER	I loved your story. Was it from a personal experience?     Posted by DREAMWEAVER on Tuesday, June 13, 2006 - 8:08 PM [Reply to this]

	*~Heather~*	great story. thanks for sharing   Posted by *~Heather~* on Wednesday, June 21, 2006 - 4:14 PM [Reply to this]

	Elizabeth Elizabeth Stockton	Great story... Sounds almost like my parent's house though they are there all the time and the cats stay outside.   Posted by Elizabeth on Thursday, June 22, 2006 - 7:42 PM [Reply to this]

		I've been slowly making my way through your stories since stumbling across your myspace and must admit that I am thoroughly attracted to your style. It is descriptive enough to bring you into a situation or a moment but not so much so that it turns you away from the emotion and the characters involved in them as well. How refreshing that it is and also probably strange from someone like me who is addicted to the literary classics, which to a modern reader is nothing but description and symbolism. Laugh. This story leaves you feeling reminiscent and wanting, just as the characer himself seems to feel by the end of it. Very well written. Lots of smiles.   Regina   Posted by on Monday, August 07, 2006 - 4:56 AM [Reply to this]