Who Gives Kudos: Stephen (2) Lady Ann (2) The First W.. (2) Michael (2) Tim aka State (2) Jen (2) Everyday An.. (2) Ms S Galey (2) Becky Wisse.. (2) carrie (2) Claudia (2) ~SciFiGuy~ (2) (2) Silleh Kelseh (2) Tim (1) Oli (2) HOPLITE (2) (2) Annie (2)

	Stephen	Yes! Thank God, yes it's about time you wrote again! I love this short story. Especially the cell phone / break up part! Loved it!   Posted by Stephen on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 3:43 AM [Reply to this]

	Lady Ann	I think I have a few friends that talk that way!  lol....I have one I dated in high school that ended up to be gay, no I didn't make him that way, lol....but I still love him and he still loves me.  That kinda sounds like our relationship now.  (Or kinda like Will and Grace)  I liked it.  Keep writing!! Love and blessings, Audra   Posted by Lady Ann on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 4:41 AM [Reply to this]

	Beth Beth Johnson	I like it.  There were a lot of emotions that I felt reading this story.  That is one of the main reasons that I like your work so much, the emotion that I feel when I read it.  Thanks BJ   Posted by Beth on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 12:36 PM [Reply to this]

	The First Wife	I approve Steve. I thought it was excellent. :)   Posted by The First Wife on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 2:55 PM [Reply to this]

	Michael Mike Barker	This was fantastic!  The dialogue was so real, I felt like I was watching the two characters in their conversation.  The conflict was real.  The characters were real.  The dialogue was real.  A+++++   and kudos...of course.   Posted by Michael on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 3:43 PM [Reply to this]

	Tim aka State	your short stories ALWAYS leave me wanting more! good job!   Posted by Tim aka State on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 3:44 PM [Reply to this]

	Jen	I have been chomping at the bit. I am so thrilled that you have written again. Well written and the context was related greatly. Thank you!   Posted by Jen on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 4:31 PM [Reply to this]

	Everyday Angel Justin Phillips	Wow.  That is a beautiful piece, nearly made me cry at the end.  Thanks for writing, and thanks for sharing.   Posted by Everyday Angel on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 5:15 PM [Reply to this]

	Ms S Galey Shelli Galey	Okay 2 stories now have made me cry :-)  I lost my father to cancer..he hid it well.  Maybe I need a puppy.... Thanks Great story.   Posted by Ms S Galey on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 5:37 PM [Reply to this]

	Becky Wissel Cohn	I liked your dialogue... you write it well.  It was just like being privvy to a phone conversation.  Keep it up!  Experimentation is good!    Posted by Becky Wissel Cohn on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 6:21 PM [Reply to this]

	The Rotating Mobile! Brian McDowell	yes, very good. *steeples fingers. in wispery voice, says* excellent. . .     Posted by The Rotating Mobile! on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 6:50 PM [Reply to this]

	carrie	Wow. I'm really impressed. Though it's almost disturbingly like my current relationship...    Posted by carrie on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 7:54 PM [Reply to this]

	Aubs Aubrey Colvin	it was great i think. it was very sad too at some parts. anyway, ttyl.   Posted by Aubs on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 8:11 PM [Reply to this]

	Claudia	Oh! Ya moved me to tears at the end. A woman grieving over her illness and struggling to cope with her meaning of life on this earth.  She has unfinished business and unresolved issues and not ready to die yet. Claudia     Posted by Claudia on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 8:11 PM [Reply to this]

	~SciFiGuy~ Bryan Beck	wow!! that was great! i like to write stories, and for some reason, i've always had a hard time writing short stories, but after reading a lot of your stories, you may have inspired me to continue with my writing. This are great stories, and i especially like this one, even though it's a different style than most, it deffinitly throughs you into the characters shoes, and in this sequence, you don't need all the background, 'noise'. Deffinitly like it, good job!   Posted by ~SciFiGuy~ on Monday, March 05, 2007 - 8:46 PM [Reply to this]

		The writing is great. Typically in writing workshops I recommend that people don't write stories consisting solely of dialog, because it doesn't capture the reader's imagination. I like stories that make you visualize action and scenes. However, I don't think description would have worked very well with this story. Good job.    Posted by on Tuesday, March 06, 2007 - 7:04 PM [Reply to this]

	Silleh Kelseh	You're such a fantastic writer. I love dialogue driven stories, and this is one of the best I've ever read! Congratulations!   Posted by Silleh Kelseh on Tuesday, March 06, 2007 - 10:34 PM [Reply to this]

	Tim	I thought this was a very enjoyable read.  Though I would not call it a short story.  Love your work.  Thanx   Posted by Tim on Thursday, March 08, 2007 - 2:20 PM [Reply to this]

	Oli Tom Oliverez	Very impressive dialoge steve! Gives you the feeling your actually eaves dropping on someone. I was able to form my own picture of thier life story easily to make a personal attachment to this short. It's perfect how you make full use of a readers powerful imagination.  Keeps them thinking about it after they read it.   Posted by Oli on Friday, March 09, 2007 - 8:20 PM [Reply to this]

	HOPLITE Michael Pritsos	Interestingly written.  Very well done.   Posted by HOPLITE on Saturday, March 31, 2007 - 5:29 PM [Reply to this]

		How sad and very real. well done.   Posted by on Saturday, April 07, 2007 - 2:11 AM [Reply to this]

	Annie	Hi, Word Weavers came up with a neat/cool concept: author trading cards! You should check it out. We are thinking of displaying one authors trading card on our website in the books section for a week then passing-the-card to the next author. That way the authors get a lot more exposure. http://www.myspace.com/weaversofwords Have a fantastic day and if you have any great advice for me or need yummy and simple recipes - please blog me. Cheers, Annie -------- My cookbook, Where People Feast, An Indigenous People's Cookbook, is now available. Visit www.wherepeoplefeast.com   Posted by Annie on Tuesday, June 19, 2007 - 10:07 PM [Reply to this]