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Becky Olsen-Finken


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Gender: Female
Status: Married
Age: 29
Sign: Virgo

City: Buies Creek
State: NORTH CAROLINA
Country: US
Signup Date: 5/23/2005

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Friday, February 02, 2007 

Current mood:  moody
Category: Writing and Poetry

Cacophony

The bitch has set up a camp for whores
inside my peaceful village
She clamps down and chews up
every slut for miles
Her infestation has even fucked the exterminator--
I don't know how she slips her syphillis-slicked existence
beyond my gates,
But she does it every time,
even when the moon is full.
Maybe if I finally just call her a cunt
She'll stop cumming on my wedding dress.
I'll burn her fucking camp down if I have to,
And when I blow away the charred remains
It will reveal the white bone
that is finally all mine.

Currently listening:
Tidal
By Fiona Apple
Release date: 23 July, 1996
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Trista

 
I like it. I think Im most attracted to the language, tone and mood. yowsah.
 
Posted by Trista on Friday, February 02, 2007 - 9:27 PM
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Becky
Becky Olsen-Finken

 
heh. thanks.
 
Posted by Becky on Friday, February 02, 2007 - 9:41 PM
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Katie

 
I read your poem outloud to three other people on Superbowl sunday. You know the general consensus?
 
"That is THE SHIT."

I love that you finally found a way to fit those lines in. I love how honest this is. I am in love with you Becky! If you weren't married and bitter I'd marry you again.

You are fucking awesome babe. I miss you.

 
Posted by Katie on Monday, February 05, 2007 - 1:52 AM
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