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Gender: Male
Status: In a Relationship
Age: 35
State: Massachusetts
Country: US
Signup Date: 3/19/2007
October 20, 2009 - Tuesday 

Current mood:  cooky/wacky
Category: Writing and Poetry

Hush now Dahlia


Hush now Dahlia, don’t challenge me
I am on the run always writing free.

It started Bach with the etheree
you threw the gauntlet down like Luchesi.

With those words a fire bloomed inside
and from my muse I had nowhere to hide.

Writing words down from deep within
I took poetry to a land of sin.

Then you returned with a wicked smile
Sestina challenge, it took me a while.

Next came the ever present Villanelle
writing it, I thought I had gone to hell.

Why is it me you always challenge
waking feelings inside me of revenge.

Hush now Dahlia, please be quiet
and say that all challenges have been met.

©October 20, 2009 CRF




This was written for Blogophilia.  If you enjoyed, please check out all the other fine writers. I also wrote this in response to Dahlia's latest blog in which she challenged me to write a Pantoum. I have still been able to withstand the challenge to this point. This should be sung in the same lilting way that the Lullabye "Hush Little Baby" is sung.The classical Composers that I mentioned are Andrea Luchesi and Johann Christian Bach (though Bach might be read as a Typo). 


Secret bonus guess: Hanging by a thread.




Blogophilia 34.2 Topic:  "Always on the Run"
 
  
bonus points:
(hard, 2 pts): use a Lullabye
(easy, 1 pt): mention a classical composer
 
 
 
 
Final date to post Oct 27th, 2009 midnight GMT
 
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Tyler Myrth

 
Excellent answer. I have notice Dahlia likes to throw a glove in your direction every now and then. (Usually with wonderful results) Is there a story behind that? Does she ever challenge anyone else??
 
Posted by Tyler Myrth on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:00 PM
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Lori Kyrielle Sonnet Diva

 
Yes Chuck she challenged me to write a Royal chant the hardest format I ever did.
 
Posted by Lori Kyrielle Sonnet Diva on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 11:53 PM
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The Falcon

 
I made sure to keep my mouth shut on that one. :D


 
Posted by The Falcon on October 22, 2009 - Thursday - 1:12 AM
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Aaron

 
I avoided that one like the Plague!  :D

 
Posted by Aaron on November 17, 2009 - Tuesday - 5:56 AM
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The Falcon

 
Oh, and before I forget. :D

The Black-haired beauty Pictures, Images and Photos

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:07 PM
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Tyler Myrth

 
Stunning - a true black haired beauty
 
Posted by Tyler Myrth on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:29 PM
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The Falcon

 
Thanks Chuck. I'm almost positive that is Tarja Turunen, former lead singer for Nightwish. I just wish it had her name attached to the picture.

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:37 PM
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Zac-Da-Nor, LORD OF THE DRAGON RIDERS

 
SOPHIA, IS BETTER LOOKING. LOL
 
Posted by Zac-Da-Nor, LORD OF THE DRAGON RIDERS on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:11 AM
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The Falcon

 
I'm still partial to the dark haired beauties DR. Sophia is a stunning woman though. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:13 AM
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The Falcon

 
Hey there Chuck. Dahlia has a habit of challenging me cause she knows I will cave in and try and do the challenge (except for the Pantoum). I think she has challenged others before, it's just that we have a habit of challenging each other so much that it is almost second nature now. :D

I hope she likes this response better than a Pantoum.

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:03 PM
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Lori Kyrielle Sonnet Diva

 
She'll like the response but will still expect a Pantoum Craig LOL
 
Posted by Lori Kyrielle Sonnet Diva on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 11:54 PM
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Boo

 
This is SO good my winged Friend.... I love it!

xoxox
boo
 
Posted by Boo on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:03 PM
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The Falcon

 
Thanks Boo. I didn't think I would come up with something until Dahlia threw that "Prada" gauntlet at me. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:08 PM
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niKi Rok$
RoKit QuEen'

 
NO NO NO!!!!! ONE MORE HUNNY BUNNY!!!!! ROFLMFAO

I LOVE DAHLIA........NOW GET TO IT BIRD!!!!! Don't dissapoint me!!! HAHAHA

 
Posted by niKi Rok$ on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:17 PM
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The Falcon

 
I am standing strong Niki. No pantoums for me. LOL

I do believe I double kitty dared you to write a pantoum and a sonnet. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:20 PM
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niKi Rok$
RoKit QuEen'

 
ALRIGHT!!!!! If I write a sonnet, will you write a pantoum?

 
Posted by niKi Rok$ on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:22 PM
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The Falcon

 
I'll consider writing one *whispering under my breath "when pigs fly through a frozen hell*



 
Posted by The Falcon on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:24 PM
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niKi Rok$
RoKit QuEen'

 
GET TO IT BOY!!!!!






 
Posted by niKi Rok$ on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:45 PM
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The Falcon

 
Noooo!!!!! I meant real pigs through a real hell. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:46 PM
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niKi Rok$
RoKit QuEen'

 
WIMPY BIRD!!!!

PFSHHHHHH............

 
Posted by niKi Rok$ on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:50 PM
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The Falcon

 
That's me!!!

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:07 AM
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~вампирa Μελισσα~

 


 
Posted by ~вампирa Μελισσα~ on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:43 PM
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The Falcon

 
Thanks My dear. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:47 PM
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~вампирa Μελισσα~

 
Well met dear!
 
Posted by ~вампирa Μελισσα~ on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:52 PM
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The Falcon

 
*squishy huggs* I'm glad to see you. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:08 AM
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~вампирa Μελισσα~

 
*pounces* I'm glad to see you too luv oxoxooox

 
Posted by ~вампирa Μελισσα~ on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:18 AM
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The Falcon

 


 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:26 AM
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Sherry Baby

 
Provocative answer I say!!! It goes beautifully with Hush little baby!!!! Great job Master Falcon!!
 
Posted by Sherry Baby on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:53 PM
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The Falcon

 
Thank you Sherry. I had to read the lullabye first, just to make sure I had the pace down. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:09 AM
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Blogophilia
Marvin Martian

 

8 points, Earthling!!



 
Posted by Blogophilia on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 11:58 PM
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The Falcon

 
Thanks Marvin!!!

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:09 AM
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Debra
Debra, Northcross

 
Well good writting
 
Posted by Debra on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 12:26 AM
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The Falcon

 
Thank you Debra. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:10 AM
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(¯'·._.·Irene·._.·'¯)

 
LOL

Love it! 
 
Posted by (¯'·._.·Irene·._.·'¯) on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 12:28 AM
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The Falcon

 
Thanks Irene. I'm glad you enjoyed this. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:10 AM
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Ostara Moon )O(

 
challenges you always meet with astonishing skill, I might add.  Great job.

 
Posted by Ostara Moon )O( on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 12:49 AM
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The Falcon

 
Thanks Dissy. I still think I have sidestepped this challenge though. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:11 AM
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Brit Blaise, Author
Brit Blaise

 
You're talented! But I'm sure you've heard it before.

 
Posted by Brit Blaise, Author on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 1:00 AM
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The Falcon

 
Thank you Brit. I have heard it, but it still means a lot to me whenever someone says it. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:11 AM
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Colleen B
Colleen Breuning

 
Wow.... awesome job on your poem, Craig!!! Very witty and creative. I love it! ;)

 
Posted by Colleen B on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 1:07 AM
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The Falcon

 
Thanks Colleen. It just came to me as I was reading Dahlia's little taunting blog. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:12 AM
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~Bobbie~ The Musical

 
I am applauding right now , this was so great!

 
Posted by ~Bobbie~ The Musical on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 1:31 AM
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The Falcon

 
Thanks Bobbie. I was really happy with how this one came out. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:12 AM
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Cliff

 
Cool!!!
 
Posted by Cliff on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:28 AM
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The Falcon

 
Thanks Cliff. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:29 AM
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Zac-Da-Nor, LORD OF THE DRAGON RIDERS

 
YOU DO  TEND TO RISE TO THE MOMENT, ALWAYS MET THE CHALLENAGES HEAD ON AND KICK BUTT.
 
Posted by Zac-Da-Nor, LORD OF THE DRAGON RIDERS on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:12 AM
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The Falcon

 
Thanks DR, though I still believe I have yet to meet this challenge. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:13 AM
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Zac-Da-Nor, LORD OF THE DRAGON RIDERS

 

 
Posted by Zac-Da-Nor, LORD OF THE DRAGON RIDERS on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:17 AM
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~вампирa Μελισσα~

 


 
Posted by ~вампирa Μελισσα~ on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:45 AM
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The Falcon

 
ROFLMAO.  Oh my DR. This is absolutely hysterical. :D

 
Posted by The Falcon on October 21, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:23 AM
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