Who Gives Kudos: Rainwitnher.. (2) Erika (2) Das Bear Ju.. (2) Mr Velvet S.. (2) Holly (2) Rose (2) Esaep Ynot... (2) TØXIC☥VANITY (2) (2) CHEF Niko S.. (2) Poison Ivy (2) Bones (2) (2) Child of Ni.. (2) ♦Melinda♦ (2) BigB (2) (2) (2) den NISI of.. (2) Bree Bree (2) churro+darla (2) (2) (2) NEW MYSPACE.. (2) Peachy (2) Jim (2) (2) Kerri (2) Illusionize.. (2)

	Rainwitnherhands	Killer lyrics..I can't even pick a fave out of this selection. They are all just so amazing. Can't wait to hear them. Smooches ~ Nikki ~   Posted by Rainwitnherhands on Sunday, August 20, 2006 - 10:31 AM [Reply to this]

	Erika Erika Jitea	In My Room All alone even though there is you       We unite, but we'll never be two My Lost soul cries out in madness In My Room...Whaooo....it's exactly my life...:(   Posted by Erika on Sunday, August 20, 2006 - 11:42 AM [Reply to this]

	Das Bear Juden Alice R.	I don't think I can pick a favorite, they're all excellent, but psychlone and vicious stand out in my opinion. Great lyrics!!!  =)   Posted by Das Bear Juden on Sunday, August 20, 2006 - 2:05 PM [Reply to this]

	Mr Velvet Skies Gabriel Bernal	All of these are great! I'm great! I'm glad you guys are recording these soon! Vicious is my favorite. Heh. Right up my alley.   Posted by Mr Velvet Skies on Sunday, August 20, 2006 - 5:07 PM [Reply to this]

	Holly	It's really hard to choose a favorite out of these amazing lyrics! However, I like 'In My Room' and 'Soldier of Misfortune' is sadly tragic. *smile* Keep writing great songs! Y'all are fabulous!   Posted by Holly on Sunday, August 20, 2006 - 10:31 PM [Reply to this]

	Rose Rosemarie Fullerton	My goodness, Soldier of Fortune is very very powerful.  thank you so much for sharing these with your friends and fans. Much love to you all   Posted by Rose on Monday, August 21, 2006 - 3:20 AM [Reply to this]

	☆Crazy Gracie☆	OMG GOD I LUV THE LYRICS...WOW THERES LIKE NO WORDS TOO DESCRIBE ....THERE JUST LIKE WHOA!!!I LUV THEM ALL...*GOD I FEEL SO SPEECHLES...LOL*CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR'EM! LUVS~GRACE   Posted by ☆Crazy Gracie☆ on Monday, August 21, 2006 - 7:30 AM [Reply to this]

	Esaep Ynot...	the good story telling is all there...just need the sound to bring it around. it will be great. peace. St. Anthony's Fire    Posted by Esaep Ynot... on Monday, August 21, 2006 - 7:44 PM [Reply to this]

	TØXIC☥VANITY Toxic Vanity	Wonderful, they are all wonderful. I am very infatuated with "Breaking Me Down"....I can't wait to hear it. Keep Rockin'!   Posted by TØXIC☥VANITY on Monday, August 21, 2006 - 11:41 PM [Reply to this]

	Rainwitnherhands	Hey guys, The new lyics are awesome, I really can't wait to see what comes after you guys go in to the studio. GL and have fun. Smooches ~ Nikki ~   Posted by Rainwitnherhands on Tuesday, August 22, 2006 - 12:43 PM [Reply to this]

	The Bastard	I love them all. It's really hard to pick a favorite, but  think I Human Defect hit's me best.   Posted by The Bastard on Tuesday, August 22, 2006 - 1:13 PM [Reply to this]

	Escribas en la Noche Music Manager	Your lyrics are very interesting, I like vicious and human defect,   Posted by Escribas en la Noche on Tuesday, August 22, 2006 - 7:13 PM [Reply to this]

	KILLA B	Damn Jay..that song about grandma is fuckin' good!! It's a real tear jerker!! lol I like these lyrics...can't wait to hear them recorded. You guys all got some writtin' skills in you!! Now...what about MY song...you gonna use it or what? I'd really like for you to. Let me know. I'll see you at the Galaxy!! -Brian   Posted by KILLA B on Tuesday, August 22, 2006 - 11:30 PM [Reply to this]

	April	great songs...i cant wait to hear the finished work.. although just listening to you guys do nothing like me was incredible...just reading the lyrics makes me tear up again.....beautiful song that rings true to what i feel about my boy...love you guys...april   Posted by April on Wednesday, August 23, 2006 - 12:40 AM [Reply to this]

	CHEF Niko Suave	Breaking Me Down caught me off guard, but all your lyrics ROCK! I can't wait to download more! I love you guys!   Posted by CHEF Niko Suave on Wednesday, August 23, 2006 - 2:23 PM [Reply to this]

	Poison Ivy	The lyrics left me speechless. Strong, direct, just my type of writing. I can imagine what its going to sound like once the music is added and the tone adjoined... Breaking Me Down is going to be  great one, since it adds some mystic sensuality. Good Job guys.   Posted by Poison Ivy on Wednesday, August 23, 2006 - 7:55 PM [Reply to this]

	Jolly Roger	All your lyrics are excellent,but I like in my room more than the others    Posted by Jolly Roger on Wednesday, August 23, 2006 - 8:08 PM [Reply to this]

	Bones	I love them all! Great lyrics guys...being a paranormal investigator I really liked Vicious! Very nice   Posted by Bones on Wednesday, August 23, 2006 - 8:11 PM [Reply to this]

	Cintecele Diavolui Marco Alves	Hey, I really liked your lyrics.. My prefered are "Human Defect", In My Room" and "Don't Scream". That was the one's which I felt closer. I like the direct lyrics, without to much work on around. They're perfect for the type of music you sing. I just want to say that you should really sing the lyrics has they were made. Don't care if it's a girl singing and showing a man's point of view. What' the matter is the feeling that he/she wrote on the lyric and that the person who sings acknowlede and passes on to the audience that feelings. It doesn't matter if it's a man or a woman, because we all feell love, hate, like, dislike, excited and bored...   Posted by Cintecele Diavolui on Wednesday, August 23, 2006 - 8:59 PM [Reply to this]

	Child of Night Amanda Lyons	Love all of them but I have to say that "For Grandma" and "All that I Know" stand out for me as i've had some situations like that lately. Having lost my mother in law and having to accept the end of a very important relationship in my life.   Posted by Child of Night on Thursday, August 24, 2006 - 2:15 AM [Reply to this]

	♦Melinda♦ Melinda Frank	song about Grandma? Huh..Brian? Who has cancer?..ok so maybe these are made up well written but not mother approved Jay.Taylor does like the mention of King Kong in that one line..he's cool.It will be interesting to hear these with music   Posted by ♦Melinda♦ on Thursday, August 24, 2006 - 5:42 AM [Reply to this]

	Marjhani marjhani BellaMorte	I'm speechless. Can't for these to be released!   Posted by Marjhani on Thursday, August 24, 2006 - 6:56 AM [Reply to this]

	BigB Brandon Cole	Totally sweet lyrics.   Posted by BigB on Thursday, August 24, 2006 - 7:12 AM [Reply to this]

		ur lyrics r so REAL...i could relate to for grandma, and especially the 3rd verse in nothing like me...and mistakes is exactly what i've thought inside my head so many times in my life   Posted by on Thursday, August 24, 2006 - 3:12 PM [Reply to this]

	This Animal I Have Become	FUCK ya these are great cant weat to hear what yall do with em But i know yer goin to  great..ROCK ON!!!!!!!!   Posted by This Animal I Have Become on Thursday, August 24, 2006 - 8:53 PM [Reply to this]

	den NISI of hollywood Den Nisi	"Tell me you want me, take me on all fours"  - special!! my kind of wordz! den   Posted by den NISI of hollywood on Thursday, August 24, 2006 - 11:04 PM [Reply to this]

	Bree Bree	amazing lyrics, there all really godd, cant wait toher them!!!!!!!!!!   Posted by Bree Bree on Friday, August 25, 2006 - 2:02 AM [Reply to this]

	* $ah $tarr * Sah Starr	hey, i can't wait to hear these songs when they are out, the lyrics are stunning, now i want how well they shout the meanings with emotions with the melodies : ) xxx   Posted by * $ah $tarr * on Friday, August 25, 2006 - 1:26 PM [Reply to this]

	churro+darla	your words are so powerful!   i cant wait to hear them in a song     <33333   Posted by churro+darla on Friday, August 25, 2006 - 6:02 PM [Reply to this]

		You know they are all beautiful, but I have to hear them with music before I fall in love with them... Sometimes its not the words you say but how you say them.  I look forward to hearing new stuff though, I'm a giant fan!!!   Posted by on Saturday, August 26, 2006 - 5:46 AM [Reply to this]

	***Onyx***	"Phsychlone" i love the best sounds like its about a really cold hearted person whose like unreal a phsychlone un effected by emotion or has none i love the lyrics. The music has to be really fierce though very dark and fast since its kind of a short song :)   Posted by ***Onyx*** on Saturday, August 26, 2006 - 8:41 AM [Reply to this]

		beautiful lyrics.. solid meanings behind them all <33333   love them <3   Posted by on Saturday, August 26, 2006 - 12:28 PM [Reply to this]

		aahhh your textsÂsame excellent, as well as your music! It is a lot of sense, very beautifully, is very emotional!ÂTHANKÂALOT!!!   Posted by on Saturday, August 26, 2006 - 4:34 PM [Reply to this]

	-ººPuRpLë RøSê ºº-	WoW that LyricS arE amazing and WithiN   Posted by -ººPuRpLë RøSê ºº- on Saturday, August 26, 2006 - 10:58 PM [Reply to this]

	Starfire	I love them!!! I especially Love 'All that I know'!!! Cant wait to hear them on krush! ;)   Posted by Starfire on Sunday, August 27, 2006 - 3:00 AM [Reply to this]

	NEW MYSPACE PLEASE ADD!	Incredible ya'll are the best !!!   Posted by NEW MYSPACE PLEASE ADD! on Sunday, August 27, 2006 - 4:45 AM [Reply to this]

	Rambo Rambo DarkChylde	Very nice! Not only the lyrics are good but it was defintely worth just reading.   Posted by Rambo on Monday, August 28, 2006 - 11:17 PM [Reply to this]

		i loved everyhting good job guys! luv <3 ^_^   Posted by on Tuesday, August 29, 2006 - 9:42 PM [Reply to this]

	Peachy	Vicious in real life - there was no relief in sight Once a lover, then you turned foe Until karma took your soul That sick feeling is back - knowing that you'll attack I must be crazy in my mind Living in fear for all time   Wow...Powerpacked Awesome   Posted by Peachy on Thursday, August 31, 2006 - 7:03 PM [Reply to this]

	Jim Jim Doyle	These lyrics are absolutely fantastic!  I really, really look forward to hearing them set to your music!  Thanks for inviting me to take a look at them...I am way beyond impressed.    Posted by Jim on Friday, September 01, 2006 - 4:59 AM [Reply to this]

	xo@llyson™ [keeshy] "/	Amazing lyrics!!!! when those are out on cd im soo buying it!     Posted by xo@llyson™ [keeshy] "/ on Tuesday, September 05, 2006 - 1:17 PM [Reply to this]

		Great stuff. Alot of times it's really hard to write about common (albeit complex) emotions without coming off as sounding contrite or using cliche`s. You guys did a great job of being relatable but original. XOXO Charlotte   Posted by on Saturday, October 07, 2006 - 3:19 AM [Reply to this]

	Ryva (This Machine Kills Fascists)	i like it alot it has the perfect rhyme scheme give me your opinion on mine if you want to   Posted by Ryva (This Machine Kills Fascists) on Monday, October 09, 2006 - 4:24 AM [Reply to this]

	Kerri	feelin' alllllllllll those words.  i am in a place dealing with a psychotic ex, but i miss him... thanks for a theraputic release.    Posted by Kerri on Wednesday, October 18, 2006 - 4:02 PM [Reply to this]

	Illusionized Petrified Pandemonium.	I just love these ^_^ I think my favorites out of the bunch are "breaking me down" and "human defect".   Posted by Illusionized Petrified Pandemonium. on Friday, October 20, 2006 - 8:12 AM [Reply to this]

	GOD of AEDM	These are my favorie lyrics from the ones posted above.  Hmm, with these and the new ones you posted, you have enough material for at least 2 more new albums. Vivious      by Jay Breaking Me Down      by Jay Human Defect      by Drew In My Room      by Jay / Drew Psychlone     by Jay / Drew All That I Know      by Drew Nothing Like Me      by Jay   Posted by GOD of AEDM on Sunday, November 12, 2006 - 11:47 AM [Reply to this]