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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision

Don MacIver


Last Updated: 11/14/2009

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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 51
Sign: Virgo

City: Victoria
State: British Columbia
Country: CA
Signup Date: 5/11/2007

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October 13, 2009 - Tuesday 

Current mood:  anxious
Category: Writing and Poetry
Most of us have been touched in some way throughout our lives by the devastation wrought by a loved one who has survived or lost the battle to cancer. For one I call my rose this demon beast has surfaced. With early detection we remain unsure of its course, for now mere cells in relative isolation. Still, given its history in her family it is worriesome. We await results of further monitoring, testing...for now, the creature lays in sleep.
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Dark forces linger deep within
Cowering little intruders
Unwelcome intentions waiting
To pervade in systemic reach
As explosive atoms leaping
From a nucleus divided
Spreading as viral infection
Leaping, unrestricted frenzy
Pain cascading from limb to limb
A shower of insidious
Yet cumulative invasions
A lesion of unmarked destiny
Where tears burn deeper than acid
And words in prayer go unanswered
I cling to hope in desparation
Denial may conquer blindly
Save for a miracle I beg
Forgiveness, divine intervention
Would a picture serve as memory
Nor last kiss bidding you goodbye
Grace us uncounted tomorrows
Pray this night should never end


copyright 2009 Don MacIver; All Rights Reserved 
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wow Don this hit home for me...though I do not suffer cancer but having MS...it just touche dmne deeply man..I ahve so missed your words...and have missed you on my blogs as well..thank you my friend
 
Posted by † Τ Ō Ņ Υ † on October 13, 2009 - Tuesday - 4:19 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Thank you very much Tony. I hope all is well with you and it's so great to see you back. Rest assured you will see me at your blog every chance I can get.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 13, 2009 - Tuesday - 4:35 AM
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Lainey

 
Oh the fear of the unknown is enormous...
This poem hints of the path that lays ahead,  and the shadows that surround.
Very moving poem Don... I am so sorry for this news for you.

I wish for you some good news in the dawn.
xoox
Elaine
 
Posted by Lainey on October 13, 2009 - Tuesday - 5:41 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Bless your heart Elaine. At least we are seeing things detected early and that is usually a good start. I can only hope the odds are in Andrea's favour. Her family has seen their way through this several times before. My hopes are high and positive. Hugs.

 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 13, 2009 - Tuesday - 5:47 AM
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Marilyn M
Marilyn M Milner

 
Don, I'm so sorry to hear the news about your wife.  As you said though, since it was caught early, her chances of a quick & complete recovery are excellent.  I'll keep you both in my thoughts and prayers.
 
Posted by Marilyn M on October 13, 2009 - Tuesday - 12:22 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Marilyn, thank you so much. We'll keep good thoughts and hope things don't progress to a more serious level. Sending big hugs for this.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 5:18 AM
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Jan

 
Don,

A very fragile and heartfelt piece. Every word is felt.

When life challenges us with adversities and misfortunes, strength and love guide us. Sending both to you and Andrea.

Jan

 
Posted by Jan on October 13, 2009 - Tuesday - 5:56 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Jan, bless your heart for such kindness. Andrea has had her share of health issues over the years and I truly hope this will not intensify an already (often) unpleasant time for her. Thanks for the love...means a lot.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 5:20 AM
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Shelly

 
I'll keep your rose in my prayers Don.


 
Posted by Shelly on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 12:53 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Shelly, you just made my day! Hugs.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 5:20 AM
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The String Poet
Ken Stuart

 
My prayers are with you and your Rose!!! The early detection could be the blessing that makes a difference for those uncounted tomorrows!!! I believe the love within can cure anything and it sounds like you have plenty of that! Best wishes my friend!!!
 
Posted by The String Poet on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 2:50 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Thanks so much Ken. All the kindness expressed here is reassuring and helps so much.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 5:22 AM
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Piroska
Piroska B

 
I'm so sorry to hear the news.
In your poem, you mention clinging to hope.  Hope IS the one thing to hang on to--a beacon in what can be a dark, scary time.   Never underestimate the power of it.
I hold you and your rose in my thoughts...

 
Posted by Piroska on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:02 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Piroska!!!! Love ya for that. Hugs.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 5:22 AM
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James
Jim O

 
Good one my friend. Since I was diagnosed with chronic lymphoma three years ago I have spent a lot of time denying, being angry, regretting, and most of all hoping. So far so good.

 
Posted by James on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 11:02 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Thank you Jim. And you keep hanging on to those good, positive thoughts. Hope is a powerful value, a belief that you need to embrace with all that you possess within you. Cheers friend.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 5:52 AM
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Just Jo (Flexwriter)
Joanne Chiles

 
Don this is a very powerful and touching write!
You are both in my thoughts my friend and I am sending positive, healing energy to you :)
*Hugs*    Jo



 
Posted by Just Jo (Flexwriter) on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 11:02 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Well bless your heart for such caring thoughts Jo...so much appreciated. We take so much for granted and suddenly the picture changes and the possibilities are painful.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 5:53 AM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
hope that can get the threat taken care of.....

half the time, it's the worrying that's the worst....

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on October 14, 2009 - Wednesday - 8:46 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Absolutely Eileen. I have some anxiety issues that intensify the worry even more. Stress and anxiety surely do some harm. Hugs.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 15, 2009 - Thursday - 5:55 AM
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Eusthacia

 
oh my dear, you're both in my thoughts and prayers.  Sending words of peace. 

 
Posted by Eusthacia on October 16, 2009 - Friday - 7:06 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Thank you Anna...means so very much. We'll stay hopeful for a healthy future. Big hugs for you today.

 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 16, 2009 - Friday - 4:30 PM
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~Kristine~

 
Don,

My love goes to you and Andrea. I will pray for her my friend, and for you.

A wonderful write Don, you are a gem~
Kristine


 
Posted by ~Kristine~ on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 6:50 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Kristine, thank you so much for this. We're hoping for the best. Early detection has to be in Andrea's favour. Your kindness means everything. Love and hugs back at ya!
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 20, 2009 - Tuesday - 7:11 PM
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