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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision

Don MacIver


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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 51
Sign: Virgo

City: Victoria
State: British Columbia
Country: CA
Signup Date: 5/11/2007

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October 25, 2009 - Sunday 

Current mood:  romantic
Category: Writing and Poetry


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Dreams' passage seemed an eternity
A landscape of your divine favour
Images traced in obscurity
An enchantment, archipelago

Passions meander as Merganser
Adrift on a channel of Venice
Abridging uncharted destinies
Confluence of two hearts enraptured

Our whispers of tender moments as
Lovers explore Piazza San Marco
Where mute swans pair in elegant dance
Upon sunbathed waters eternal

Stars flicker in moonlit seranade
Your heartsong romancing teardrop eyes
Night's gentle breeze soft and alluring
As distant strokes of a mandolin

For you are the chosen, I bequeath
To walk as though immortality
As angel's wings will carry us to
Still moments of resplendent grandeur

Disrobed of intention I forsake
As swift, the night shall come to pass
That I bid you any malcontent
Nor a vessel of seeming burden

Conjoined we partake of destiny
As one, as the chosen, willingly
O'er a bridge spanning moments flowing
In perpetual simplicity

Let our kiss forever emulate
Our affections lo our newfound love
Embraced for all it was meant to be
In our hearts, in our mind, in our soul


copyright 2009 Don MacIver;  All Rights Reserved

Shelly

 
Beautiful

 
Posted by Shelly on October 26, 2009 - Monday - 12:01 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Thanks so much Shelly. My second book of poetry "Touched By A Rose" is nearing completion and this piece will have its place in the new publication. Hugs.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 26, 2009 - Monday - 1:33 AM
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izumi
Izumi K

 
love the image .... very romantic and precious, it warmed my heart today, thank u for sharing!

hugs xooxox iz

 
Posted by izumi on October 26, 2009 - Monday - 12:21 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Izumi, bless you for this...and love the pic with the dog too! Hugs.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 26, 2009 - Monday - 1:34 AM
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~Kristine~

 
Mmmm.... Don, so soft and sensual..... mmmhmmm..... very nice! :)



 
Posted by ~Kristine~ on October 26, 2009 - Monday - 9:26 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Ah, thanks so much Kristine. It was a pleasure to write!
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 26, 2009 - Monday - 3:32 PM
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James
Jim O

 
I'd love to say it was "soft and sensual" too, but that doesn't sound like me. But you did  passionatley hit the nail right on the head, ever so gently.

 
Posted by James on October 26, 2009 - Monday - 9:22 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
lol! I guess when it comes to creative license even the guys can get soft and sensual now and then. heeheehee  Many thanks Jim.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 27, 2009 - Tuesday - 4:28 AM
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The String Poet
Ken Stuart

 
The eloquence of a master poet! Beautiful!!!
 
Posted by The String Poet on November 1, 2009 - Sunday - 5:45 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
OMG, thanks so much Ken.

 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 1, 2009 - Sunday - 5:52 AM
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