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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision

Don MacIver


Last Updated: 11/14/2009

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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 51
Sign: Virgo

City: Victoria
State: British Columbia
Country: CA
Signup Date: 5/11/2007

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October 30, 2009 - Friday 

Current mood:  contemplative
Category: Writing and Poetry
You said you would never leave me
But now I have to let you go
Here for much more than a lifetime
Your eternal heart and soul flows

Memories through the ages shall pass
Long after all the sad goodbyes
The tears I shed in agony
All the sweet songs and lullabyes

Live this never-ending journey
Through life and through death evermore
Blessed by a kindly existence
Move forward as never before

Cherished each moment you gave me
The memories shall ever be clear
The love and gentle words spoken
All things that you ever endeared

For all who have passed before us
In our hearts you will always be
The song and the life and spirit
Essence of immortality


copyright 2009 Don MacIver;  All Rights Reserved
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Immortality (4 Tracks)
By Celine Dion
Release date: 2001-02-01
izumi
Izumi K

 

romantic and sad, life is full of many good byes, thats why we cherish each moment ;)  love it don!

xooox izzy

 
Posted by izumi on October 30, 2009 - Friday - 6:40 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Bless you Izumi. I said another goodbye yesterday...painful, but today fond memories are shining through.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 30, 2009 - Friday - 6:49 PM
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Jan

 
Don,

A very heartfelt and beautiful tribute for your loss.
I'm sorry to hear of your goodbye yesterday.

 
Posted by Jan on October 30, 2009 - Friday - 8:50 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Jan, thanks so much. This piece was inspired by the loss of one of our dear seniors here at the residential property that I manager. She was a gem and we'll miss her terribly.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 31, 2009 - Saturday - 12:59 AM
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† Τ Ō Ņ Υ †

 
wow man..thta was awesome...and how I have felt it too mnay times...your words speak Don...beautifully
 
Posted by † Τ Ō Ņ Υ † on October 30, 2009 - Friday - 10:29 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Tony, thanks so much for this. When you lose someone you feel close to the void left afterward is difficult to come to terms with sometimes. I hope this piece speaks to all those who we have lost.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 31, 2009 - Saturday - 1:01 AM
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Shelly

 
A beautiful write Don.

 
Posted by Shelly on October 31, 2009 - Saturday - 12:51 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Thank you so much Shelly. When the meaning behind a piece like this is so special the words come easy. Hugs.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on October 31, 2009 - Saturday - 1:03 AM
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Just Jo (Flexwriter)
Joanne Chiles

 
Beautifully written Don :)
I am sorry for your loss!
*hugs*    Jo



 
Posted by Just Jo (Flexwriter) on October 31, 2009 - Saturday - 7:13 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Jo, thank you so much...means a lot. Today I have celebrated Winn's life and her amazing personality.

 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 1, 2009 - Sunday - 5:50 AM
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]]]Hell and Back[[[

 
lovely write, Don....and wonderful finish.  to live forever ..... mostly i dream about being a classic, and having my words cherished like the years that will never return....

or course, would have to be GOOD first!  hehehehe......but right now, am working on taking my hell and back blog, and putting it to book form on a PDF file.  so far been using MS office onenote.....but thinking about downloading adobe acrobat trial version, problem being that to buy the software costs $300.  you can buy a brand new netbook for that, so not sure i want to tempt myself.....

 
Posted by ]]]Hell and Back[[[ on November 1, 2009 - Sunday - 7:36 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Thanks so much Eileen. I self-published my first book through Lulu.com back in '04. I did PDF conversions then but can't remember how I went about it...have to research that one again as I'm very close to completing the content on book #2 and editing, uploading, cover work etc.

 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 3, 2009 - Tuesday - 7:19 AM
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Lainey

 
This is so heartfelt Don, and I felt every word.
Beautiful people inspire beautiful words.

I think when you feel loss, writing is a wonderful way to share those thoughts
xoxo
Elaine
 
Posted by Lainey on November 3, 2009 - Tuesday - 7:43 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
And in our loss we find the depth of inspiration that begs our write. Hugs always Elaine.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 3, 2009 - Tuesday - 8:37 PM
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