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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision

Don MacIver


Last Updated: 11/14/2009

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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 51
Sign: Virgo

City: Victoria
State: British Columbia
Country: CA
Signup Date: 5/11/2007

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November 3, 2009 - Tuesday 

Current mood:  enlightened
Category: Writing and Poetry



Photo by giddybear21 at Photobucket.com

As tiered as in lyrical verse
Thoughts linger in layered repose
Recessed in memory shaped as
A Bonsai painstakingly pruned
Intrinsic limbs of solitude
Hang lazily in altered state
Buoyant transitions of stratum
Void of cognitive dissonance
Photographed images shaping
A lifetime of moments we shared
Eclipsed by a passing notion
Draped in a moonlight serenade
We gaze with longing wonderment
Through the eyes of a layered soul
Our destiny shadowed mirrors
Prophesy of things before us
Stepping stones pattern our journey
A heartsong forever embraced


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Release date: 1999-09-21
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izumi
Izumi K

 

beautiful love poem, and words flow like a song

bonsai picture is amazing, and goes well with ur reflective words ;)
hugs xoxoox iz

 
Posted by izumi on November 3, 2009 - Tuesday - 8:48 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Bless your heart Izumi. I read this back and find it a bit awkward, maybe needing an edit, but for now it conveys some nice emotions.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 3, 2009 - Tuesday - 8:50 PM
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Shelly

 
Beautifully written Don.

 
Posted by Shelly on November 4, 2009 - Wednesday - 1:32 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Shelly, thank you very much. I enjoyed writing this piece, one of the last entries in my second book of poetry to be published by Christmas (I hope). Hugs.

 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 4, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:35 AM
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E
Eileen Brinker

 
very beautiful, Don.....like infinity in a mirror.....

 
Posted by E on November 4, 2009 - Wednesday - 11:27 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Thanks very much Eileen. Ooooooooooh, what a spooky avatar you're sporting here!

 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 4, 2009 - Wednesday - 5:35 PM
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Lainey

 
That was beautifully done Don..
The Bonzai is a wonderful image to go with this poem...
sculpting moments is what life is all about
xoxo
Elaine
 
Posted by Lainey on November 4, 2009 - Wednesday - 6:30 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Thanks so much Elaine. This was an interesting piece to write. I'm not sure I'm done with this one but it's come out ok regardless. Hugs.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 5, 2009 - Thursday - 4:43 AM
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Tarringo Vaughan

 
beautiful desription Don
 
Posted by Tarringo T. Vaughan ~ FlexWriter on November 4, 2009 - Wednesday - 11:12 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Hey, thank you Tarringo. I felt a bit distracted while writing this piece, struggling to bring it together, but enjoyed writing it.
 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 5, 2009 - Thursday - 4:44 AM
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