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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision

Don MacIver


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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 51
Sign: Virgo

City: Victoria
State: British Columbia
Country: CA
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November 27, 2009 - Friday 

Category: Writing and Poetry
Our lives a web of transparencies
Openworks of configurations
Flesh blanketing a skeletal frame
Beyond cells of propagated limbs
Extended courtesies, obliging
Kindly words of forgiveness spoken
The wounds of life's bitter offerings
Fester without bandage nor dressings
Eyes castigate in hasteful judgment
Lo reasonable considerations
Would now behest our swift attention
Save unintentional consequence
May substance flow in unrestricted
Chaste embellishment for adorning
....this mantel of our integrity

Neurons in a cacophanic transfer
Teeming familiarity to
Infinite networks interwoven
Electrified by outward senses
A mind in all its complexities
Disseminating alterations
Divergent streams of great distortions
Fabricated to unkindly end
The human condition challenges
By virtue of our imperfections
Blood coursing through constricted veins
Life force of variant energies
Whilst heart and soul in deliverance
Congeal in functional accordance
....the very essence of our being


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Release date: 2008-11-04
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Tarringo T. Vaughan [Flex] Writer
Tarringo Vaughan

 
just wow!
 
Posted by Tarringo T. Vaughan [Flex] Writer on November 28, 2009 - Saturday - 7:50 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Thank you friend. Kinda heady reading I suppose but every now and then I get in the mood. lol. Love the challenge of this type of write.

 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 29, 2009 - Sunday - 6:57 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
lol, thanks Eileen. Every once in a while I feel the urge come on to write something that takes a closer look. I have been inspired lately by some very talented people. Hugs.

 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 30, 2009 - Monday - 7:43 AM
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The String Poet
Ken Stuart

 
Beautiful words that describe our complicated, fragile shell of spirit!!!
 
Posted by The String Poet on November 29, 2009 - Sunday - 7:05 PM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Thanks so much Ken. Love the feedback always. This kind of write challenges me.

 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 30, 2009 - Monday - 7:44 AM
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Lainey

 
A complex life, and complex emotions....
Every road we travel, leads us to the path we ar on....
sometimes happy, sometimes not...
but it makes us who we are...
Deep poem Don.

xoxo
Elaine
 
Posted by Lainey on November 30, 2009 - Monday - 2:32 AM
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Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision
Don MacIver

 
Elaine, bless you for this. Our writing becomes such an examination, a journey to marvel. Hugs.

 
Posted by Don MacIver...Poetry; One Vision on November 30, 2009 - Monday - 7:46 AM
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