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Nate Mitten


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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 22
Sign: Libra

City: Lancaster
State: Pennsylvania
Country: US
Signup Date: 6/30/2005

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Wednesday, May 02, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry

A young American boy from a good ole' American town.
Over in europe is where he can now be found.
Apart of the army and apart of our souls.
He can't say how many times he's seen bullet holes.
He fights the Germans who have invaded other lands.
This makes him angry,on his rifle, he tightens his hands.
Its many days into the war and he's now at a side street.
He must cross it now and run with his feet.
He takes a moment in the rain to look up at the aged beautiful church.
Away in the distance he hears gun fire,a sniper high perched.
It is his turn to make a run and get across the road.
He sprints across,rifles fire,and down he goes.
Just down the road Germans have taken position.
A fellow American soldier makes an inquisition.
They are seen behind an old piano and behind a car.
But for the soldier on the ground life is getting far.
He lies on his back with a shot to the chest.
With raindrops falling on his eyes he takes his last breath.
Another fallen soldier, another lost friend.
Never had i thought this was how it would end.
With time passed,the Germans were cleared.
So i took a minute and my eyes filled with tears.
Now just another number,we pulled the dogtag from his neck.
I can't believe he made it this far, its been a long trek.
Through many firefights and battles he had made it.
When i think of it, i can't stand to say it.
I watched my friend die right in front of my eyes.
I watched him reach up gasping for air as his demise.
When i think back all those years its hard to believe that he died.
Its been almost 63 years,everytime i reminisce i cry.
And when i died last week,i couldn't wait to see him again.
He said,"its been so long, i'v been waiting my friend".

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This actually had me crying this morning it was that damn good. So freaking heartbreaking, but so very beautiful. Talent boy, I'll keep saying it again and again, you have a rare talent with writing. I'll see you when I get back, and hopefully I'll have more to read from you when I do return. You should copy or print your poems out so you never lose them, and also try submitting them to various e-zines, and magazines. Click on that Twisted Dreams link in my Friends list, it's for more darker poets but I was published in it last March. There might be a catagory you would like to submit something to. You're one of the better writers I have seen online, do not waste what god or life gave you.

Love Always,
Lady Aseret

P.S. Did I mention I loved this poem / story? I think I did. ;)
 
Posted by on Wednesday, May 02, 2007 - 12:09 PM
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This actually had me crying this morning it was that damn good. So freaking heartbreaking, but so very beautiful. Talent boy, I'll keep saying it again and again, you have a rare talent with writing. I'll see you when I get back, and hopefully I'll have more to read from you when I do return. You should copy or print your poems out so you never lose them, and also try submitting them to various e-zines, and magazines. Click on that Twisted Dreams link in my Friends list, it's for more darker poets but I was published in it last March. There might be a catagory you would like to submit something to. You're one of the better writers I have seen online, do not waste what god or life gave you.

Love Always,
Lady Aseret

P.S. Did I mention I loved this poem / story? I think I did. ;)
 
Posted by on Wednesday, May 02, 2007 - 12:23 PM
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Huckleberry
Daylin Hawkins

 
1. theres a soft spot in my heart for wwII 2. this is amazing 3. i shall now go read your other poems :)
 
Posted by Huckleberry on Thursday, May 03, 2007 - 4:05 AM
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NOT IN USE

 
I like it, its sad but rich in raw talent.
 
Posted by NOT IN USE on Sunday, May 06, 2007 - 9:16 AM
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Ambie<3
Amber Williams

 
You're too good at this. I have tears streaming down my face right now. Would you mind if I copied that for my grandpa? He fought in WWII. Your name will be on it of course.
 
Posted by Ambie<3 on Tuesday, July 31, 2007 - 1:13 AM
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