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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 18
Sign: Leo

City: Demi's Heart™
State: California
Country: US
Signup Date: 7/2/2005

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Thursday, December 11, 2008 

Current mood:Released
Category: Life

Hey What's Up Ya'll! Alright, this poem right here just seemed to have just written itsself. I was in class one day, and I didn't say anything to anyone that entire day because I was just feeling...well I don't really know. But I have a lot that happens in my life but some things affect me differently, but this took an amazing toll on me so here it is.

 

Chains

So many chains linked so tight

In the day i'm lost, but i'm free at night.

My thoughts tend to haunt me, making my every move encaged,

It worsens,with every move you make I become so enraged.

Kiss me once, shame on you, kiss me twice shame on me.

I'm still living alone, someone tell me, why am I not free?

I'm locked in love, hate, fear, my aches, my pains.

Set me free and release me of your chains.

The hands of time begin to set back,

Deep inside lives so much pain, but for you I put on a great big act.

Her every breathe assembles my every heartbeat,

And without her love my time here is incomplete.

I am forced to walk alone.

The entire world, an empty space, becomes my home

Full of tears, and pains, i'm locking love, release me of your chains.

 

Alright that was it guys!  Tell me what you think...don't be afraid to be harsh!

 

 

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♥Danza{DC}♥
Danielle Cleary

 
That was amazing!! Seriously that was really good!! u should try & write more!! do u right poetry??
 
Posted by ♥Danza{DC}♥ on Thursday, December 11, 2008 - 2:32 AM
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iJonas™ twitter.com/iJonas18

 
Thanks For The Comment!
Yeah I write them but I don't let anyone read them
 
Posted by iJonas™ twitter.com/iJonas18 on Thursday, December 11, 2008 - 2:33 AM
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