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	BlackWidow	Dark deep and powerful xo   Posted by BlackWidow on Friday, July 31, 2009 - 6:12 PM [Reply to this]

	Daniela Voicu( flavia felix) Daniela Voicu	I like this poem ..   Posted by Daniela Voicu( flavia felix) on Friday, July 31, 2009 - 6:17 PM [Reply to this]

	Rhymesoulnice	glad to see u post   Posted by Rhymesoulnice on Friday, July 31, 2009 - 6:18 PM [Reply to this]

	Kim❀Sue	Very nice... love it!   Posted by Kim❀Sue on Friday, July 31, 2009 - 6:37 PM [Reply to this]

	LAKEETA	..Love it!!....   Posted by LAKEETA on Friday, July 31, 2009 - 6:44 PM [Reply to this]

	Phil aka FIL	Thom, I admit to having barely a clue what this is about (my fault, not yours), but it's good to see you posting.   Posted by Phil aka FIL on Friday, July 31, 2009 - 7:47 PM [Reply to this]

	Pajama Poet	LOL -- no worries.  It is a piece about an individual who changes his life from that of a helpful soul to selfishness.   Posted by Pajama Poet on Friday, July 31, 2009 - 8:49 PM [Reply to this]

	Deanna	I didnt understand it that way...opps!! You're a mystery writer Thom. :-)   Posted by Deanna on Saturday, August 01, 2009 - 1:23 PM [Reply to this]

	TimmyTim Returns Timmy Sousa	The Black Before me.... This is amazing, and I believe to be my new favorite from you...   Posted by TimmyTim Returns on Friday, July 31, 2009 - 9:28 PM [Reply to this]

	I am that I am...Lydia.	you are so good with words.....   Posted by I am that I am...Lydia. on Saturday, August 01, 2009 - 2:27 AM [Reply to this]

	Linda	....Awesome write Thom. God Bless!!!....   Posted by Linda on Saturday, August 01, 2009 - 4:23 AM [Reply to this]

	The Mommy :o)	What can I say...I like it. I like the darkness of it and the spirit! M   Posted by The Mommy :o) on Saturday, August 01, 2009 - 6:36 AM [Reply to this]

	Deanna	This is a person who has given up.... :-(   Posted by Deanna on Saturday, August 01, 2009 - 1:22 PM [Reply to this]

	The Mommy :o)	GOod Morning Thom,  I re read your poem. I really has struck a chord in me. I do like it. As usual wwhen I re read things in a more rested state I soak up their meaning more. Your poem reminds me of my brother....he has give up...for now...but I truly believe he will turn around after he hits rock bottom. Just wanted to let you know that your poem realy has touched me in a personal way.   Posted by The Mommy :o) on Saturday, August 01, 2009 - 5:15 PM [Reply to this]

	~Evidence of Mercy~	Hmmm...sounds like someones leaning to the dark side! Well expressed!   Posted by ~Evidence of Mercy~ on Saturday, August 01, 2009 - 7:36 PM [Reply to this]

	~SS~	oooh I like " ..Exhausted from grinning". It describes perfectly all of the facets of evil the character is basking in - at least that's what i saw when i read it:) Sonja ..   Posted by ~SS~ on Sunday, August 02, 2009 - 6:21 AM [Reply to this]

	Valerie	Dark.....Valerie Marengo   Posted by Valerie on Sunday, August 02, 2009 - 3:35 PM [Reply to this]

	wind	respect!   Posted by wind on Sunday, August 02, 2009 - 8:26 PM [Reply to this]

	Craig	I needed that. I don't know exactly why, but I did. Thanks.   Posted by Craig on Tuesday, August 04, 2009 - 6:16 AM [Reply to this]

	tinhearts ♥ ♥ ♥	wow there's a power behind your punch! awesome one here! xxx xxx   Posted by tinhearts ♥ ♥ ♥ on Thursday, August 06, 2009 - 3:15 AM [Reply to this]

	Priceless- [sic]writer Another sic Individual	OMG SOO DEEP<<>> Great write!!   Posted by Priceless- [sic]writer on Monday, August 10, 2009 - 9:38 PM [Reply to this]

	♫ Sleepless n Chicago ♫	Good read ,dark powerful words  fore said   Posted by ♫ Sleepless n Chicago ♫ on Tuesday, August 11, 2009 - 4:09 PM [Reply to this]

	Kiwi Kiwi G.	..nice wordering, darling i miss reading other poets it's been a while you'll see me stop by leaving my love ..   Posted by Kiwi on Friday, August 21, 2009 - 12:36 AM [Reply to this]

	༺ĖṴṖḪȪƦȈǠ༻	Wow,..Sick symbolism,dark , and hope is not a good thing. If you are hoping for something that would mean that something has gone fraught. AS always, nicely done..... ....Live for the now : }....Jayney..   Posted by ༺ĖṴṖḪȪƦȈǠ༻ on Saturday, August 29, 2009 - 5:22 AM [Reply to this]

	A C	i missed you thom.   Posted by A C on Saturday, September 19, 2009 - 4:13 AM [Reply to this]