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August 2, 2009 - Sunday 

Category: Writing and Poetry
The Great Divide

Sometimes it is a blur,
that point in time
when arguments become
explosive confrontations.
Anger starts passing judgment
and in the surge of emotional torrents --
the moment of clarity is lost.
We create the great divide,
cemented by our foolish pride.

5:00 AM
 
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Rhymesoulnice

 
hey dod is that a baby pic of you ..

love your words here
have a good weekend

 
Posted by Rhymesoulnice on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 5:26 AM
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Houa Vaj Photography
Houa Vang

 
wow this is soo true...i like it thanks for sharing dodi
 
Posted by Houa Vaj Photography on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 5:27 AM
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D J MYKE & The Boombox

 
Outstanding message here, Dodinsky. So often, people cross the line, and are under the misconception it feels good doing so. In reality, they are only driving wedges, and a person intent on creating such obstacles is rarely a person that will take the necessary measures to repair the damage done.
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Really glad to see you post this one, Sir!
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Posted by D J MYKE & The Boombox on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 5:29 AM
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Amy

 
Greatly written!!!♥
 
Posted by Amy on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 5:35 AM
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N.Y.QUIL

 
THAT was on point my brother. Seriously.

Stay up. Oh and did you get that thing I sent??

Peace D

- Just another psycho but I don't need to tell you that do I lol

 
Posted by N.Y.QUIL on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 5:36 AM
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♥RATED "R" ♥
DatGirl Uluvtohate

 
i love it!!!!! it is so what im goin thru and feelin right now!!!!
 
Posted by ♥RATED "R" ♥ on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 6:05 AM
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Larry Kuechlin
Larry Kuechlin

 
Well said, my friend.  Keep up the good work!

Larry Kuechlin
 
Posted by Larry Kuechlin on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 6:24 AM
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~maleah~hi9xoxo~V~a.k.:)
a. y. klein

 
thanxx dodi, you're brilliant!

my Tribute to MJ

tears in heaven
when forgiveness
assumed forsaken
lips sullen
worn frolonged....

then only
upon death
perhaps mercy
subdued bondage
emancipation arise!

RIP....
 
-a.y.klein
((here's my impulse remosed...;)

 
Posted by ~maleah~hi9xoxo~V~a.k.:) on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 7:03 AM
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A
Just Me

 
Great & true words!
 
Posted by A on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 8:49 AM
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Lilly VanderLumen

 
I'm totally blogging this...

Have a lovely weekend.

 
Posted by Lilly VanderLumen on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 9:51 AM
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Debbie
Deborah Troupe

 
This touched and spoke to me at this point in my life. Thanks Dodi.
 
Posted by Debbie on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 12:18 PM
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*~ Sheila~*

 
This happens all too often. You've found a way to put it into words and it's a great piece.
Hope you have a peaceful weekend.

 
Posted by *~ Sheila~* on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 12:32 PM
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Tracy

 
Beautiful and true.  Has a bittersweet feel.

 
Posted by Tracy on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 12:49 PM
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ROY
ROY Sonnier

 
true that
 
Posted by ROY on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 1:02 PM
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Mistaken ♪♫♫•♪

 
Woe unto thee...


 
Posted by Mistaken ♪♫♫•♪ on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 1:07 PM
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ANNA

 
we must be ever vigilant not to cross that line.  words hurt...

as usual, beautiful write!!
 
Posted by ANNA on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 1:26 PM
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{ZeN and The Art of Love}™

 
Sounds like me :(
Awesome work, my friend.
<3

 
Posted by {ZeN and The Art of Love}™ on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 3:29 PM
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♥ Pet ♥

 
 You know, that hits it right on the button. You're a great poet,Dod. Just what I needed today.
Thanks.
 
Posted by ♥ Pet ♥ on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 3:32 PM
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*Mamalicious*
Joyce Wojnarowski

 
No words speak greater truth.  Great write, Dodinsky!
 
Posted by *Mamalicious* on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 3:48 PM
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timothy
timothy olinghouse

 
And most of the time , the next day you can't remember what you were aguing about , but words have been said
 
Posted by timothy on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 4:03 PM
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Diana

 
Hi Dodi, Changed my profile picture but it's still me.
Your analogy of pride being like cement holds more meaning than some may see or feel,
but it holds great meaning to me dear freind.

 
Posted by Diana on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 5:04 PM
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Pharaoh with the Vicious Tongue

 
Sounds like our world of politics. lol 

 
Posted by Pharaoh with the Vicious Tongue on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 5:28 PM
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Ed

 
How is it you always know how I am feeling? I like this one Dod
 
Posted by Ed on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 6:43 PM
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Ed

 
I tryed to give Kudos :( but it will not let me
 
Posted by Ed on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 6:45 PM
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Bob
Bob Terry

 
This poem, to me, really speaks to how prideful anger does indeed create guargantuan rifes in our emotional and spiritual presence.  This was so insightful of you...Thanks for the sharing of it...
 
Posted by Bob on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 8:20 PM
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Claudia
Claudia Vilt

 
This poem makes me think about my husband...

 
Posted by Claudia on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 8:44 PM
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Michelle

 
There are no fair fights.

 
Posted by Michelle on August 1, 2009 - Saturday - 9:28 PM
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Annie
Annie A

 
Great words Dodi. Pride and ego are such detriments to human relations. And yet...we are HUMAN. To overcome these inherent attributes is such a challenge!!

 
Posted by Annie on August 2, 2009 - Sunday - 1:46 AM
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Annie
Annie A

 
..and, how/where do you create your fabulous graphics to accompany your thoughts?? :)

 
Posted by Annie on August 2, 2009 - Sunday - 1:48 AM
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╰⊰⊹✿ Daisy-Head Maizey ✿⊹⊱╮

 
awwww dod!!!! i love it... well i love all of them but dangit do you know when to post a good one =)
Thanks, hope your weekend is grand!

 
Posted by ╰⊰⊹✿ Daisy-Head Maizey ✿⊹⊱╮ on August 2, 2009 - Sunday - 2:12 AM
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Luminous Musings

 
Nice succinct poem!  You truly capture the essence of anger.
 
Posted by Luminous Musings on August 2, 2009 - Sunday - 4:30 AM
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Here for Friends
Srividya R

 
True

 
Posted by Here for Friends on August 2, 2009 - Sunday - 4:46 PM
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Just Joan ♥

 
  Great write.  I love the poem you sent me as a comment today - you are so appreciate !  Hugs, Joan
 
Posted by Just Joan ♥ on August 2, 2009 - Sunday - 6:59 PM
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Lover Lovingston

 
pride is so foolish :(


 
Posted by Lover Lovingston on August 2, 2009 - Sunday - 7:53 PM
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Donna Kay
donna benson

 
That is amazing! I want to print it and make a huge poster to hang in my living room.  I have a constant struggle trying to teach my kids, lil brother and nephews to mind the way they speak to each other. It has been one of the hardest things to teach but I think they are finally beginning to understand. I am only sorry it took loosing the relationship with my lil brother. i raised him like one of my own children and i miss him so much. Once we have created the great divide it is hard to mend.
Thanks Dodinsky. You are always an inspiration to me

 
Posted by Donna Kay on August 3, 2009 - Monday - 1:33 PM
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Kendra

 
Hi Dodi! I am sorry it has been forever since I have made it this way! I have missed your words of wisdom! :)  I am finally starting to write again... been a while!  Wow, this one couldn't have hit any closer to home- it reminded me of the power struggle I had with my 8 year old last night, when he refused to go to bed (He wanted big brother to go to bed at the same time)- Over tired, stubborness- and pride- got in the way of a lot of things!  Great write!! Hugs ~K~

 
Posted by Kendra on August 4, 2009 - Tuesday - 2:29 PM
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ccdude14
Dylan Myers

 
Yet all of these things in and of themselves do not turn to war, nay for Anger itself subsides, it is a powerless thing unless it is fueled by Greed, Lust, Sloth and those other deadly sins. Yet we misunderstand them, we fail to understand that Anger in and of itself is not a true human trait.

If only we could learn to overcome our unnecessary greed, then perhaps there could be peace in this world and peace in our hearts.

 
Posted by ccdude14 on August 6, 2009 - Thursday - 10:09 PM
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Welcome to SOCAL, the REAL OC.
Ken Bbew

 
  -- goood stuff!!

 
Posted by Welcome to SOCAL, the REAL OC. on August 7, 2009 - Friday - 3:30 AM
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Benjamin
Benjamin Ashley

 
People deal with argument, frustration and anger in different ways. That moment where the reasoning inside beaks is when you've been pushed too far. At that point, it is best to turn away and and walk away just in time before you snap.

That moment of the breaking point is a good muse, as you've so amazingly, once again, described. You've got hat moment perfectly.

Thank you.

 
Posted by Benjamin on August 7, 2009 - Friday - 10:00 PM
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Dfracari

 
This is so true...thank you so much for another great one. You have so much talent!
Denise Fracari
 
Posted by Dfracari on August 15, 2009 - Saturday - 3:50 AM
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wendy

 
nice write
 
Posted by wendy on August 19, 2009 - Wednesday - 1:21 PM
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Steven

 
Very Nice!!
 
Posted by Steven on August 20, 2009 - Thursday - 12:59 AM
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Monalisa I pray for a door to open favouring love
Ramona Klasen

 
no truer word is spoken...that pride can turn your solid state humanity into particulate atoms and demoralize a herd of demons....god knows why we do it or let it happen to us....so much is lost when we open our mouth without consideration for the whole and/or the other....thank you for creating a stage for accountability with your poetry...love and peace...ramonalisa

 
Posted by Monalisa I pray for a door to open favouring love on August 22, 2009 - Saturday - 5:21 PM
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DatGirl Uluvtohate

 
i love it!!!!!!
 
Posted by ♥RATED "R" ♥ on August 27, 2009 - Thursday - 5:18 PM
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Here for Friends
Srividya R

 
Great Divide  - great words

 
Posted by Here for Friends on August 30, 2009 - Sunday - 4:40 AM
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Lola

 
Too often it happens just as you say here......in the heat of the moment everything is ruined....
 
Posted by Lola on September 4, 2009 - Friday - 4:25 AM
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Monkey's Gurl

 
ur words/writing/poetry crucify me...guilty

 
Posted by Monkey's Gurl on September 4, 2009 - Friday - 5:19 AM
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Nick A. (Poet)
Nick Ade'

 
This is so true...

Kudos!

 
Posted by Nick A. (Poet) on September 9, 2009 - Wednesday - 12:06 AM
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mary ska-Legacy Writer/NavWriter
Mary Young

 
tell them Dodi tell them

 
Posted by mary ska-Legacy Writer/NavWriter on September 11, 2009 - Friday - 11:20 PM
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"Killough"
Jacob Killough

 
Like alway's True and Deep,
 
Posted by "Killough" on September 16, 2009 - Wednesday - 4:53 AM
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