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Status: Single
City: in my JEEP!!!!!
State: somewhere
Country: TG
Signup Date: 8/25/2005

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Monday, March 10, 2008 

Current mood:  bummed
Category: Pets and Animals

the stray dog i picked up didn't wanna be picked up

in all actuality

I chased the dog down

haggard and drunk as he was

he was the very cutest

 

full of leftovers

and smelling like trash

i thought if i washed him he would be a good new pet

but he didn't want bath

nor did he wish to be clean

he had become content roaming from place to place

not remembering many

sleeping with the foulest bitches

pissing on well manicured lawns

and piling shit in other peoples bushes

but he was the cutest dog

 

i fed the dog the sweetest treats

and everyday he bit me

harder

and harder

until I bled

 

i fed the dog the thickest meats

and everyday he bit me

harder

and harder

until I bled

 

and still bleeding from his bite

i write

and wonder………..  did i pick the wrong food?

 

Currently reading:
Uglies (Uglies Trilogy, Book 1)
By Scott Westerfeld
Release date: 08 February, 2005
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satanic amerikin infidel

 
Sometimes your poetry makes me very sad...
But it never, EVER makes me feel nothing.

And tonight, I just wonder how you're doing....
And if you needed to get back to basics...

I can't speak for Bill... But as a friend of his, I can say that you are loved... right now, by many.

especially here in Brevard.
Most specifically Central Brevard...
 
Posted by satanic amerikin infidel on Monday, March 10, 2008 - 11:28 AM
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Carrie

 
Damn babe, that was good!! I don't think you gave him the wrong food, he was just trying to endulge in your SWEET spirit!! BTW, didn't you learn not to go in search of wandering stray? As I remember it, last time you did that your got hissed at by a Possum!! LOLOL LUV U
 
Posted by Carrie on Monday, March 10, 2008 - 1:00 PM
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Beth Marshall~Fringe Cheerleader!!!
Beth Marshall

 
Great poem.
 
Posted by Beth Marshall~Fringe Cheerleader!!! on Monday, March 10, 2008 - 3:15 PM
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Dane
Dane Colbert

 
Nah, just sounds like you picked the wrong dog. Great writing though. Excellent metaphors. I really liked this one! Don't forget you rock!
 
Posted by Dane on Monday, March 10, 2008 - 3:16 PM
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BOOMPA RED

 
Hell, baby. I know you picked the wrong dog. Looking for a sugarbear, are ya? Hell, I will ' love you long time, GI.' Heh heh. I miss ya, K. Call me some time.

Redman
 
Posted by BOOMPA RED on Tuesday, March 11, 2008 - 1:38 PM
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BT

 
When I was but a stray I was picked up by the ARMY and now I want to bite them until they bleed as they have made me a not so cute line-dog!
Great writing Sav, hope you are doin well!
 
Posted by BT on Friday, March 14, 2008 - 3:03 PM
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Scooby
rob clark

 
Unfortunately You picked the wrong dog. Not everything wants to be saved and You can lead a horse to water but you can't make the horse drink it.
 
Posted by Scooby on Saturday, March 15, 2008 - 11:22 PM
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Aric (with an A)
Aric Stoots

 
Does this mean you're single now? ;-)
 
Posted by Aric (with an A) on Friday, March 21, 2008 - 5:48 PM
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Robert H. H.

 
you are Correct, you needed to fine something as tasty as you??

maybe Chicken?? LOL
 
Posted by Robert H. H. on Friday, June 13, 2008 - 1:10 AM
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