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Gender: Female
Status: Single
Age: 26
Sign: Cancer

City: FABULOUS
State: London and South East
Country: UK
Signup Date: 11/8/2007

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Tuesday, October 28, 2008 

Current mood:  complacent
Category: Writing and Poetry
The Poem below is dedicate to my dad .
I wrote the poem @ School when i was just 14ys old , for my dad who had  died just a month or so before.
It was not planed it was something that just came over me and i put pen to paper.
My teacher said that i should enter it in to a poetry compatshion that was on in the UK,so i did ,i was the outright Winner out of thousands of entry's!
I was so happy and it made my mum so proud.
The prize was the poem published in Wendy Copes new book,she is a famous & well respected  writer.

Here is  is the Poem for you @ Myspace....Its called DOORS.

Doors
They're always opening and closing
Bringing a new life in
and an old life out
Don't get me wrong
I know this has to happen
One day
But it happened too fast for my Dad
His grand daughter
Just three months old
I think to myself
At least he'd got that memory to take with him
I wish he could have stayed
To see me finish school
I miss him, I love him, I wish he could have stayed
But it's to late
You can't ''wish'' and ''but'' and ''if''
But that's the way it is
Door's opening and closing.

Thank you for reading love Chelsea Darling x


sarah

 
babe thats sweet!!! its really good!!!
 
Posted by sarah on Sunday, November 02, 2008 - 10:20 PM
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The Best Fred
Fred jackson

 
A very lovely poem Chelsea, you expressed yourself very well for being 14 at the time.
Fred
 
Posted by The Best Fred on Tuesday, November 04, 2008 - 6:52 PM
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bof
bof ni

 
that is lovely babe i wish your dad the best in the next world
 
Posted by bof on Monday, December 22, 2008 - 4:42 PM
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Fearless
Fearless Fhallus

 
VERY 'WISE' FULL OF LOVE --- ITS WHAT POETRY WAS MADE FOR!
 
 
Posted by Fearless on Saturday, May 09, 2009 - 2:46 PM
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EnormityFootlickr'

 
Thank you for the friend add, Ms. Chelsea.  I like the imagery of doors opening and closing in your poem.  xx, Randy.
 


 
Posted by EnormityFootlickr' on Sunday, September 13, 2009 - 4:23 AM
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