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Nilsa V. Torres


Last Updated: 11/18/2009

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City: illadelph
State: Pennsylvania
Country: US

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August 4, 2009 - Tuesday 

Category: Writing and Poetry

Quick and dirty poetry collab with 
Kevon...


Jack and Jill


Head over hills
Jack tumbling down
Being chased by Jill…
He never stays around
Love measured by its circumference 
Just to absorb its substance
She runs in circles


At the bottom of the hill
She places Jack's red face in her hands
and goes in for the kill
He never stays - never stands
Always on his back
Always eager to move along,
Well...

f*ck you, 
Jack.



N.V. Torres & 
Kevon Crute (http://www.myspace.com/KevonRicherdCrute)


2009
Kevons Poetry
Kevon Crute

 
Two great poems if i say so myself on biastly  ;)
 
Posted by Kevons Poetry on August 4, 2009 - Tuesday - 3:25 AM
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Poeta |NV Torres|
Nilsa V. Torres

 
Yes...thanx Kev! Can't wait fo the next one...I have to hit you up with something soon.
 
Posted by Poeta |NV Torres| on August 4, 2009 - Tuesday - 3:54 AM
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mikki ~FlexWriter~

 
I am giggling my you-know-what off..

perfect. just perfect, you two..

 
Posted by mikki ~FlexWriter~ on August 4, 2009 - Tuesday - 3:48 AM
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Poeta |NV Torres|
Nilsa V. Torres

 
Thank you, Mikki...Kev is a great writer!!! Working on getting him to share something over at the society one day...
 
Posted by Poeta |NV Torres| on August 4, 2009 - Tuesday - 3:56 AM
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Christian

 
Good collabo yall got here... always a plessure to read the work from two great poets :)
 
Posted by Christian on August 4, 2009 - Tuesday - 5:32 PM
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JoHee

 
haha this was funny. nice one.

 
Posted by JoHee on August 5, 2009 - Wednesday - 12:53 AM
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Tarringo T. Vaughan ~ FlexWriter
Tarringo Vaughan

 
yes i ejoyed this!
 
Posted by Tarringo T. Vaughan ~ FlexWriter on August 5, 2009 - Wednesday - 1:49 AM
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The Poetic Genius-2 Brain Flow
Poetic Genius Lyrical Assassin

 
haaaa, nice collab, nice i like that, different bold, funny, and well written, short and sweet. all around perfect
 
Posted by The Poetic Genius-2 Brain Flow on August 7, 2009 - Friday - 6:37 AM
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LYD

 
yeah quick and dirty indeed, love it.
 
Posted by LYD on August 22, 2009 - Saturday - 1:10 AM
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Poetic~Soultress(FUS)

 
Nice!
 
Posted by Poetic~Soultress(FUS) on October 6, 2009 - Tuesday - 7:54 PM
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