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Nilsa V. Torres


Last Updated: 11/18/2009

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City: illadelph
State: Pennsylvania
Country: US

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October 2, 2009 - Friday 

Category: Writing and Poetry

Repost with vocals...
Thanks for listening :)




Glossy


Saturday nights spread thickly
like lip gloss
A sheer, pink shade that shimmers
beneath the lights
sending a violent heat wave
across the bar
when 
trouble walked in with
boots
knee-high
and full lashes

all 
eyes 
on...

her.

She
made us stop
and take notice
She
made me wish...

wish my breast could know the sun
the same way this girl
knows danger -
the way she plays with fire
Igniting flames in the snug parts of each man she passes
Inhaling the howls
and sipping on the heavy pants
sloppy
wet

glossy

I watch the
spectacle from a far
soaking in my own
mire of insecurities and
wondering

How much that kind of freedom would cost...

On any given rainy day,
how many pennies would I have to save
to buy that kind of power
with legs closed?



8/2009
Currently listening:
The Emancipation of Mimi
By Mariah Carey
Release date: 2005-04-12
Kevons Poetry
Kevon Crute

 
U already know what i think abt this, a million KUDOS, 
 
Posted by Kevons Poetry on August 6, 2009 - Thursday - 6:21 AM
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Poeta |NV Torres|
Nilsa V. Torres

 
I know. Thanks Kev :)
 
Posted by Poeta |NV Torres| on August 6, 2009 - Thursday - 6:25 AM
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Poet Society
Intelligent Indifferent

 
i always enjoy your writings of xxxpression....  love your pieces...
 
Posted by Poet Society on August 6, 2009 - Thursday - 6:43 AM
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Poeta |NV Torres|
Nilsa V. Torres

 
Thank you very much, Poet :) I appreciate you stopping by...
 
Posted by Poeta |NV Torres| on August 6, 2009 - Thursday - 6:50 AM
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Pharaoh with the Vicious Tongue

 
U must B a people watcher of sorts. Great write, I liked your analogies they jump out at me when I read. I liked how U mentioned your own power how U spoke of it I liked again it serves its purpose well 2 get my attention. Now of course I will say that U can have your power with closed legs take the journey and have fun. 

 
Posted by Pharaoh with the Vicious Tongue on August 6, 2009 - Thursday - 8:20 AM
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Pedro - CultVault Writer
Pedro M. Rosario Barbosa

 
You are simply a wonderful poet, my friend.

 
Posted by Pedro - CultVault Writer on August 6, 2009 - Thursday - 1:25 PM
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JoHee

 
very sexy poem . wonderful!

 
Posted by JoHee on August 6, 2009 - Thursday - 3:36 PM
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" Next Lifetime....."{B.W.S.}

 
Skanks seem to get all the attention along with crabs...lol. Like i was say, YOU GOT MAJOR SKILLS!!!

 
Posted by " Next Lifetime....."{B.W.S.} on August 6, 2009 - Thursday - 7:34 PM
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Christian

 
sssoooooooorrrrraaaaddddd!!!!!!! slayer!!
 
Posted by Christian on August 6, 2009 - Thursday - 11:07 PM
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Zulmara

 
Very interesting...great job...glad to see you back...

ADELANTE!!!

Zulmara
 
Posted by Zulmara on August 7, 2009 - Friday - 4:15 AM
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The Poetic Genius-2 Brain Flow
Poetic Genius Lyrical Assassin

 
damn you're good at placing the right words, at the right speed at the right time, and your subjects are powerful. This is incredible
 
Posted by The Poetic Genius-2 Brain Flow on August 7, 2009 - Friday - 6:40 AM
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Cameron
Cameron Lange

 
the last four lines are especially beautiful 
 
Posted by Cameron on August 10, 2009 - Monday - 9:38 PM
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♥ Introducing: SonnetLuVV ♥
Her Soul

 
Girl if you don't go on! You really need to get some published ish out there! Love Ur Words!
 
Posted by ♥ Introducing: SonnetLuVV ♥ on August 12, 2009 - Wednesday - 1:27 AM
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Broken Verse

 
What a DIVA!  and legs closed. I call Goddess...  Your poetry has a voice!  Me encanta
 
Posted by Broken Verse on August 20, 2009 - Thursday - 4:29 AM
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LYD

 
Amazing write.  Wow.
 
Posted by LYD on August 22, 2009 - Saturday - 1:06 AM
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Poetess Maria
Maria Gornell

 
Ohh powerful I love this.
 
Posted by Poetess Maria on September 1, 2009 - Tuesday - 4:47 PM
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Kevons Poetry
Kevon Crute

 
This just adds to perfection.
 
Posted by Kevons Poetry on October 2, 2009 - Friday - 6:28 AM
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nosajofthehillpeople

 
WOW I fn love this!!!great poem.....your reading was puuurrrrfect! you rock.

 
Posted by nosajofthehillpeople on October 3, 2009 - Saturday - 2:57 AM
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Mountain Womyn

 
Wish I could Kudo more, very good this.


 
Posted by Mountain Womyn on October 4, 2009 - Sunday - 4:37 PM
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MiDwAy MaUdE...RLM / Ky On Tap
Cindy Holbert

 
This is wonderful. Glad I stopped by. Im subscribed.
Cindy~x
 
Posted by MiDwAy MaUdE...RLM / Ky On Tap on October 4, 2009 - Sunday - 7:36 PM
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lil REID
Reid Thrower

 
Actally a lot of women have a lot more power by keeping heir legs closed.
I LIKED THIS 1 =]

 
Posted by lil REID on October 5, 2009 - Monday - 1:19 AM
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♥Juanita♥
Juanita Harris

 
Hot shit honey! I love it. Out of everyone I read on Myspace, you truley have the best selection of poetry on here. I'm never dissappointed when I come to your page.
 
Posted by ♥Juanita♥ on October 5, 2009 - Monday - 1:44 AM
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mikki ~FlexWriter~

 
damn, girl..

you KNOW how this one hit with just ink ~

YOU KNOW you do hold that kind of power ~ It's just waiting to explode, you megatalented soul!!

 
Posted by mikki ~FlexWriter~ on October 5, 2009 - Monday - 3:12 AM
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~*Psychological Mind*~

 
wow this is really good very well spoken of expressed emotions ms

 
Posted by ~*Psychological Mind*~ on October 5, 2009 - Monday - 4:48 AM
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Poetic~Soultress(FUS)

 
Beautiful ms lady!
 
Posted by Poetic~Soultress(FUS) on October 6, 2009 - Tuesday - 7:53 PM
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Dante's Inferno

 
Fantastic Nilsa--loved the reading! As a dude I kind of know this feeling-- when "THAT" guy walks in and the women, including the one I'm with, all stop breathing as he passes...excellent write!

Dante'
 
Posted by Dante's Inferno on October 11, 2009 - Sunday - 3:39 PM
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Luke The Drifter

 
i know this girl. she scorched my eyebrows and suntanned my eyeballs.
 
Posted by Luke The Drifter on October 13, 2009 - Tuesday - 4:19 PM
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