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Gender: Male
Status: Single
Age: 42
Sign: Gemini

City: PRYOR
State: Oklahoma
Country: US
Signup Date: 11/14/2007
December 2, 2008 - Tuesday 

The Rain

The never ending rain that fills my soul,

So dark it could be made of coal.

There is a enormous black door,

It leads you to the very core.

Then one day I died,

Nobody cried.

Then I let out a siren of a scream,

Luckily for me it was only a dream.

Outside the rain was pourin,

Then I started worryin.

The dream I had when i died,

I realized that I committed suicide.

Then I remembered the dream,

That ended with a terrifing scream.

I cant remember the rest, but this was the second one I did and the original one is better.

 

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~Ladybug~
Diane Deaton-Burton

 
Very dark... You should try to find the original. But I like how you can get to your inner self and write about it.

 
Posted by ~Ladybug~ on March 3, 2009 - Tuesday - 6:49 PM
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UnspokenWispers
Unspoken Wispers

 
Interesting reading.. I liked it... Be well..........
 
Posted by UnspokenWispers on March 6, 2009 - Friday - 7:45 PM
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