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the assignment was to write two letters about the same topic just with different tones, this is mine... ENJOY!
(the
italics didn't show up, and all the "aren't" are really suppose to be
ain't but idk if that's even a word in the dictionary so i changed it
so i don't get points marked off or something...)
Tone Exercises: My Almost Lover / You Cheating Bastard, It’s OVER!
To John, in all the years we have been together, I can’t believe that
you’d do that behind my back. I thought that I knew you but I don’t
know anymore, I don’t know if I can trust you again. When you told me
and apologized to me, I just couldn’t grasp a word to respond to you. I
don’t think that you telling me that you did that with another girl,
even if it was only for “one night”, would fix anything. When I looked
back at those times we had together, remembering your smile the day you
cheated on me; to me, it seems you hid your secrets behind your
gorgeous smile. And I fell for it; you knew I’d fall for it. Could
those times we spent strolling in the park, watching movies together
while I was in your boxers and your oversized white shirt, and the
times you laid your head on my lap as you fell ever so slowly to sleep,
could it had not drew a line, to know that I was yours and you were
mine? Remember your words you said to me when I was getting harassed by
my peers? When you saved me? You told me that I will always know that
you will always be the knight to protect me and come at any danger that
comes my way, to clear the fog so I can walk in clarity. You were lover
and now you are just another, another which has done the wrong, hoping
to receive forgiveness. Even if you said you were to sorry a million
times, those gorgeous lips cannot remove the scar from my heart.
Everyone begins with a flawless heart and you flawed my heart. Now I
say goodbye to you, goodbye my almost lover, goodbye my John.
Not only will the scar you gave me remain but also my love for you,
Kelly Banks
Okay, first of all, you think that that slut is better than ME?! I
DON’T THINK SO! Who you think you are homeboy, Player of the Month?!
NO, you’re just some country boy in the big city. Don’t think that
those blue eyes can fool me or anyone else. And you think telling me
that you cheated on me with some go-go dancer you met at the club is
gonna fix anything? PLEASE, if you do it once, you’re gonna be doing it
again. DUH, everyone knows that! That’s why you aren’t gonna being
having anymore of THIS. That’s right, all you’re gonna be getting is
that trash on the street. Don’t think that you can come back to me all
innocent even though I let you go out. I gave you trust, you know what
that is? It’s were you do what you want and I do what I what and both
of us know that we aren’t braking each of our rules. Remember, the
first rule we made together, “Thou shall not cheat.” And you think that
it was me that was bad in bed, please I did all the work, all you did
was just stand there and enjoy it. If you aren’t gonna put some hip
movements into it, I don’t think you’re gonna last that long with
anyone else. You think that that go-go dancer is gonna feed your butt?
No, no, no, I pay for the rent, both our cars, food, clothes,
everything we do while you just sit there acting like you’re gonna pose
on some magazine cover. I wonder what you do at the gym, workout and
that all? Please, my connections say that you aren’t just working out
those biceps, you working out even in the bathrooms. IT’S OVER, YOU AND
ME ARE OVER, HAND ME THOSE KEYS TO THE CAR AND TO THE HOUSE CAUSE YOU
AND ME ARE OVER!
PEACE OUT NEW EX,
The Lovely Brittany Jackson
NOTE:
really... it was suppose to be guy-on-guy BUT due to "unfavorable"
interest, it might not be appropriate to be turning in a guy-on-guy
assignment although i saw no problem with it... so i changed it to
girl-on-guy, though i had to say, guy-on-guy made it lots better...
I'MMA COPYRIGHT THIS SO DO YOU TRY PUBLISH IT WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!
XD
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