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April 12, 2009 - Sunday 

Current mood:  weird
Category: Writing and Poetry
In my dream I’m frozen
Your right there but I can't move
I reach for you but it’s over
I wake to reality in a bad mood

This is not what I want
But karma came a calln’
It was time to run
Or my world would have fallen

"When I was a child" rings true
But wasn’t part of my plan
Sometimes it’s not all about you
Sometimes you have to be a man

I put away childish things
Like always having my way
Sacrificed "all about me"
What more is there to say?

Miss the old ways, yes
But from death comes anew
Sometimes to be born again
You have to self sacrifice 


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Kicky Valentine tm KeebleInk2009

Rosie
Rosie Tavera

 
Papi, This spoke volumes to me. Growing up is hard - giving up is harder. It's time though isn't it. Your words touch me deeply.






Rosie
 
Posted by Rosie on April 20, 2009 - Monday - 2:16 AM
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Writer of Love
Poetry Writer Welsh

 
such hope and perseverance. loved it hun
 
 
Posted by Writer of Love on May 2, 2009 - Saturday - 2:29 PM
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Kicky Valentine tm...Read the Blogs Please

 
thank u, it is an honor to have u read me
 
 
Posted by Kicky Valentine tm...Read the Blogs Please on May 3, 2009 - Sunday - 3:38 AM
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....touching piece
 
 
Posted by THIS PAGE IS CLOSED PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE COMMENTS on May 3, 2009 - Sunday - 5:08 AM
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