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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 20
Sign: Gemini

State: Louisiana
Country: US
Signup Date: 9/12/2005

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Tuesday, June 23, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
Despondent to the things I once loved,
fascination eludes me

Once amorous of many; merriment was mine.

"Strip me of this fabricate partiality!
Remove from me this deception found in love!"

The superficial dissidence I made of it all.

Now, Plagued by doubt in disbelief,
Burdened by false conviction,

I falter
I seek convalescence

Still, I find myself subjugate to the depredations of life.

I stand alone in the solidarity of my decay
I waste away; a victim of this self imposed disdain.

"Remove from me this deception that I call love!"

Sob so heavily
Constituents fail
Currently listening:
Depths
By Oceano
Release date: 2009-04-07
Ryan
Ryan Cruse

 
Wow, man. You're an amazing writer
 
Posted by Ryan on Tuesday, August 04, 2009 - 9:55 PM
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Lily Emily

 
Love is not a deception unless you pull the wool over your eyes, and let the truth elude you like a common criminal. Kudos, nonetheless.

xoxo

 
Posted by Lily Emily on Tuesday, August 11, 2009 - 4:07 AM
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