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Zachary Manprin


Last Updated: 12/5/2009

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Gender: Male
Status: In a Relationship
Age: 36
Sign: Aries

City: SACRAMENTO
State: California
Country: US
Signup Date: 9/23/2005
Thursday, August 07, 2008 
I am trying to figure out the best way to phrase the sentiment -

    It doesn't really matter. The decision has been made. Words won't change what has already happened.



I have a few options, what do you think is best?


"There are a million things I want to talk about but nothing to say. "


"There is a lot I want to say but nothing left to talk about."


Is there a better way to word it? Do you think it loses something if it is read or if it is spoken?


And keep Echo and the Bunnymen in mind while you consider this.


Echo & the Bunnymen - Bring on the Dancing Horses





It's always nice to have feedback when writing dialogue.



Currently listening:
Echo & the Bunnymen: Dancing Horses
Release date: 2007-06-26
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