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Last Updated: 1/30/2007

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Gender: Female
Status: Single
Age: 31
Sign: Cancer

City: CHERRY HILL
State: NEW JERSEY
Country: US
Signup Date: 8/19/2004

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August 20, 2004 - Friday 
It can be anything or anyone Involve sheer hard work and also fun Doesn't matter what it costs Without it, all life is lost It separates you from friends and kin It starts to mean everything It affects your diet and your health In this passion, you lose yourself The need to get your 'fix' increases The more alone you are, the need for more 'releases' A vicious circle this passion has become It has made you whole and your life undone.
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MrSteveG

 
Wow, total package: brains, beauty, and the soul of an artist! What more can one ask in a woman!!
 
Posted by MrSteveG on August 30, 2004 - Monday - 12:16 AM
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Winky Dykeman

 
The rhyme scheme is nice. It is not wholly bad in many ways. However the word choice is a bit pedantic (look it up) and the flow is a bit choppy. In the second stanza the whole feeling seems to change and veer off as if the second stanza could either be at the end or be the beginning of a whole other poem. Over all with a little editing and selective word choice, you might have something there.
 
Posted by Winky Dykeman on September 16, 2004 - Thursday - 12:51 PM
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shua

 
Who does this Michael guy think he is anyway? Edgar fucking Poe? I agree though - passion can both make a person and break them to bits. Keep writing!
 
Posted by shua on September 26, 2004 - Sunday - 1:50 PM
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Kainalu

 
Yeah ummm ... I didn't read your poem but yeah I agree with what they said. Just jokin' wish I could write poetry and lyrics. Hats off to you! Aloha, check you out later!@
 
Posted by Kainalu on October 4, 2004 - Monday - 12:55 PM
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Santa Claws

 
grrrrrah
 
Posted by Santa Claws on October 8, 2004 - Friday - 4:03 AM
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**PLANET ERICK**

 
Chewing gum is really gross, chewing gum I hate the most. See? Exactly the same.
 
Posted by **PLANET ERICK** on November 16, 2005 - Wednesday - 3:21 PM
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Joshua
Josh Baxter

 
love the poem,  passion is a funny thing, an incurable fire that we all love, and you get major brownie points for writing the poem 16 days after my birthday,  not really, I just think that brains are as hot as your pics,  alas thats why I prefer to remain mysterious and make girls earn the picture.  All bs aside, good poem.
 
Posted by Joshua on January 26, 2006 - Thursday - 1:14 AM
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PASSION
Everett Richardson

 

That was nice.....that's why I chose that stage name....it has so many meanings and is full of emotion....very well done.....


 
Posted by PASSION on March 7, 2006 - Tuesday - 6:15 PM
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I'm not sure everyone gets the essenc of what you're saying here..

Very deep.. very clear. Well said.

The thin line between addition and.. love.

 
Posted by on January 1, 2007 - Monday - 3:03 AM
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Winning isn’t everything but the will to win is
 
Posted by on January 13, 2007 - Saturday - 5:00 AM
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