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David Martinelli


Last Updated: 5/20/2009

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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 25
Sign: Taurus

City: PLACERVILLE
State: California
Country: US
Signup Date: 10/7/2005

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Wednesday, February 28, 2007 

Current mood:I'm hungry
Category: Writing and Poetry
A short little diddy since I haven't posted anything in awhile ... It's not finished yet; I'm still working on it. That's why it doesn't make too much sense yet. ;)



Remember as children
When we painted together?
It didn't matter if we were good;
We just enjoyed it.

Now we don't try
Because we feel useless;
We forget what we felt
When we were children.

Let's hold our hands together,
Close our eyes and paint the sky.
Together, you and I.

We don't need to be artists
To say we love each other.
We can paint a picture in the air
Without using our hands.

Lay in the grass,
Close your eyes with me.
Let's paint the sky.
Together, you and I.
7:47 PM
 
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tempysmum

 
I love this.
admittedly, my roommate and i have been painting a lot recently... even though we suck. we also had a discussion about this very topic (although less sweet sounding).
 
Posted by tempysmum on Wednesday, February 28, 2007 - 8:21 PM
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julie
julie martinelli

 
Aw that's cute Dabid! Seriously though, I like it a lot. =)
 
Posted by julie on Wednesday, February 28, 2007 - 9:35 PM
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Charisa
Charisa Zachariou

 


woahh... score.
I really like this and cannot wait to see the finished project. :]]

keep it up.
you just might inspire someone. ;]




 
Posted by Charisa on Thursday, March 08, 2007 - 4:44 PM
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©onstantine
Sean Constantine

 
I don't think that anyone is capturing the many levels of depth being presented in this entry. You have escaped the complexity of modern and classic prose and conveyed a very mature theme with little effort.

This is crucial to communication.

Reading this makes me want to collaborate with you.
 
Posted by ©onstantine on Friday, May 25, 2007 - 11:15 PM
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julie
julie martinelli

 
heh heh heh... beer
 
Posted by julie on Saturday, June 16, 2007 - 4:59 AM
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Katie

 
I love this David!
 
Posted by Katie on Wednesday, June 27, 2007 - 1:49 AM
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