MySpace


RIV-KOOSH



Last Updated: 5/1/2009

Send Message
Instant Message
Email to a Friend
Subscribe

Gender: Female
Status: Single
Age: 21
Sign: Scorpio

City: WEST HEMPSTEAD
State: New York
Country: US
Signup Date: 10/12/2005

Who Gives Kudos:


Wednesday, June 21, 2006 

Category: Writing and Poetry
my body is a well decorated canvas
on which many artists have left their mark
i've been all different colors
from red to blue
i have circles and lines all over
but im not ashamed
i'm a work of art
i know this is true
no matter how battered and bruised
i've always been told
"you're beautiful"
			~ Rivka Naftalowitz
Abby

 

thats really moving. (cheesy, sorry)

 

i still say you should work with me for lyrics for songs.


 
Posted by Abby on Thursday, June 22, 2006 - 3:34 AM
[Reply to this
Jess♥ssica

 

aww rivkyy!

i didnt know u write!


 
Posted by Jess♥ssica on Thursday, June 22, 2006 - 5:09 PM
[Reply to this


 
~kwel kwel~
 
Posted by on Thursday, June 22, 2006 - 5:12 PM
[Reply to this
Radioactive Bagel
Daniel Ortner

 
I love it! I have one personal gripe, but I am a nitpicker.  the line " I have circles and lines all over" just  stands out as sounding awkward to my ear. It has been different colors but it does have circles and lines....I don't know...just seems awkward. But the poem overall is lovely, and I love the idea and imagery
 
Posted by Radioactive Bagel on Thursday, June 22, 2006 - 8:27 PM
[Reply to this
¤~*Keeping it UnKnOwN*~¤
Rachel Albert

 
i like!!!!
and yes, i did donate my hair
 
Posted by ¤~*Keeping it UnKnOwN*~¤ on Friday, June 23, 2006 - 8:52 PM
[Reply to this