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City: Westside of Ldn or Whereva I lay my mic!
Country: UK
Signup Date: 11/3/2005

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Wednesday, August 29, 2007 

Current mood:  indescribable
Category: Writing and Poetry

NIGHTMARES

Looking in the mirror, I blink once and shiver,

The reflection in the shiny silver frame is a stranger.

Same features as me.. but his eyes unfamiliar..

Burning with a desire for murder, his stare heats my head like a fever..

I blink twice and its me again,

Dismiss the thought of the stranger, put it down to too much juice and gin,

Pull the sheets off the bed, slip in and tuck myself in..

Fade 2 black, Fade 2 sleep,

For like five minutes..then…a creak..

Fling myself out my sheets

Senses peaked!

I creep towards the corridor,

I reach for the baseball bat behind the chest of drawers..

Slowly enter the living room,

Hmm,

Empty, apart from the dull glow of the television.

Hmmm..wait!

I didn't leave this bloody thing on?!

dismiss the thought....

can't get caught up in this here

turn of the idiot box, then a voice bangs the drum in my ear..

"it took you long enough..been waiting for you to come down!"

I spin around,

facing a full length mirror now..

but the reflection is not quite me somehow..

the stranger returns,

his stare more burns,

with an intensity that threatens to put my soul in an urn

he calls me "worm"

says "weak you are!"

"you have had 20 something years and look at who you are?!"

"Mr nice guy aka everybody doormat,

I'm here to upgrade you..reset..replace your format!"

with that.... He reaches out from the reflection

next thing i know...

I am nothing BUT the reflection

He is free

He is Me

LORD SAVE US ALL....

THE END?..............

Currently reading:
Have Gun Will Travel
By Ronin Ro
Release date: 16 March, 1999
Terri Pietersen

 
Damn i love gettin those emails saying ' new blog subscription post from Versetti'!! ....dunno how to react to this one though....that's a deep piece of writing! I guess we've all been in those situations where we look in the mirror and don't recognise the person staring back out at us! And no this isn't the end....i for one want the sequel!! x
 
Posted by Terri Pietersen on Wednesday, August 29, 2007 - 2:02 PM
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Wh3r3 Th@ R3@l Nigg@'z @t!!!!!!
WHats good WAtkins

 
this is a nice poem i like it alot keep writing u have a really good talent.
 
Posted by Wh3r3 Th@ R3@l Nigg@'z @t!!!!!! on Saturday, March 01, 2008 - 9:19 PM
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