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Friday, April 03, 2009 
Your smile which is landing gently looks like the heat haze.
The dripping of moon started spilling to night which is not filled.

Love which even flew out till the tip of a finger was an overture.
It went through a crack to the night. And it made me blue.

From when had I started hiding my words without confusion?
I do not regret you who chose separating. I will never forget that small promise.

Ah How much time must I wait till I can sleep with the strength that I won't lose you?"
Ah This painful moon I'm looking up wraps my sigh.
I could've had found me inside of you. I'm enough only with it.

From when had I started hiding my words without confusion?
I do not regret you who chose separating. I will never forget that small promise.

Ah How much time must I wait till I can sleep with the strength that I won't lose you?"
Ah This painful moon I'm looking up wraps my sigh.
I could've had found me inside of you. I'm enough only with it.


The moon has shone on me and covered me gently by very the same radiance.
I wonder why the moon seen alone now look gentler than the moon seen by together in old times...
I just kept watching the moon that says nothing....


*commentary*
A guy was remembering and noticing something by watching moon. He used to watch moon with someone special. But now watching by alone. Moon taught him something important.

1st line : A character of this story is remembering an important person who is not with him any more. He can't clearly see moon which looks like her.(the heat haze)
2nd line : The moon that reflects to his eyes is dripping tears.
3rd line : Love that he had thought was not "Love". It was just a beginning.
4th line : He is getting into darkness.
5th line : He didn't want to recognize what had happened to him.
6th line : He had been trying to survive with little hope that she would come back.
7th line : He noticed something like he needs to move on and be stronger.
8th line : And he could notice this experience was good for him and something more important from moon which never changes.




月 (Japanese)

舞い降りる 貴女の笑顔が陽炎のよう
夜の雫が こぼれかけた満ち足りない夜に

指先まで 感じていた愛は overture
夜の隙間を抜けて ブルーな夢に過ぎてしまう

振り返ればいつからか 言葉隠した何の戸惑いもないままに
別れを選んだ貴方を 悔やまないで あの小さな約束も忘れないから

ああ どれだけの時が経てば 貴方を失わない強さを持って眠れるだろう
ああ これだけの月の切なさが ため息を包んでくれる 貴方の中に 自分を見つけられたから
それだけで良かった

振り返ればいつからか 言葉隠した何の戸惑いもないままに
別れを選んだ貴方を 悔やまないで あの小さな約束も忘れないから

ああ どれだけの時が経てば 貴方を失わない強さを持って眠れるだろう
ああ これだけの月の切なさが ため息を包んでくれる 貴方の中に 自分を見つけられたから
それだけで良かった





Maribel
Maribel Tlatelpa

 
Its so touching .... tomo



take care



night


 
Posted by Maribel on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 4:10 AM
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†Specimen#2452A† 愛

 
I love it. The moon is a really beautiful sight to see.

 
Posted by †Specimen#2452A† 愛 on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 4:11 AM
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Cara ☆ Ordinary Vanity

 
Really fantastic, Tomo ;_; <3
 
Posted by Cara ☆ Ordinary Vanity on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 4:18 AM
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♪陽子♪
陽子 Sunshine

 
Such powerful words...



Very beautiful, and very moving.




<3
 
Posted by ♪陽子♪ on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 4:25 AM
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♥Misticmuse♥

 
Very Nice! Hmmm...2 new writings....could this signal a forthcoming CD??? Don't have enough songs yet?....How about a 4 or 5 song CD, sing each song twice, once in English and once in Japanese? (kind of like a variation on the 2 CD set music & lyrics / instrumental) The last writing and this one will sound wonderful in both languages!
 
Posted by ♥Misticmuse♥ on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 4:25 AM
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AkumaKo 悪魔

 
^^ Love it ♥
 
Posted by AkumaKo 悪魔 on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 4:39 AM
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Aisuru Nippon
Reiko Himawari

 
T_T











That really touched me.












Hope to see you soon











~Reiko
 
Posted by Aisuru Nippon on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 4:39 AM
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BK201
Anthony Marko

 
Amazing.... hits a spot for most people, including myself, I am sure.

 
Posted by BK201 on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 4:40 AM
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♠Choo-Choo♠

 
Tomo... stop writing things that break my heart dear... T__T It's beautiful though, so I take back my words. As long as you can write so passionately, don't ever stop doing it.
^__^ ♥
 
Posted by ♠Choo-Choo♠ on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 4:42 AM
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♠Choo-Choo♠

 
Ahhh so he learned a lesson from the moon. That's really nice. Expressive too.

 
Posted by ♠Choo-Choo♠ on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 6:39 PM
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Sorceress

 
It's got a very wistful feel to it. It's easy to visualize sitting there looking at the moon and thinking about things of the past and wondering why it turned out the way it did. It's very well written and I'm really glad you shared it.
Thanks you :)


Sherri
 
Posted by Sorceress on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 4:46 AM
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Susanne
Susanne MCCLAIN

 
so beautiful, like the last one. i hope to hear those words in song one day.

 
Posted by Susanne on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 4:56 AM
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[ //Shuichi// ];;
Johnny Rayflo

 
Beautiful.


<3
 
Posted by [ //Shuichi// ];; on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 5:01 AM
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影 - Shadow - シャドウ [KHK] [SM]

 
Your poems are always so beautiful and touching, Tomo. This is another one that should become a song, I think.
<3
 
Posted by 影 - Shadow - シャドウ [KHK] [SM] on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 5:39 AM
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Princess Unicorn Bunny Kitten Angel

 
i think you have stolen all of the girl's hearts
 
Posted by Princess Unicorn Bunny Kitten Angel on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 6:00 AM
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AkumaKo 悪魔

 
^^ Beautiful! ♥
 
Posted by AkumaKo 悪魔 on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 6:14 AM
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Shinta シンタ
Shinta Shinta Shinta

 
that is so beautiful,,
 
Posted by Shinta シンタ on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 6:16 AM
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*~Onyx_Hikari~*

 
Really good. It's beautiful, and yet hauntingly sad in undertone. Thank you for sharing it with us.






ONYX
 
Posted by *~Onyx_Hikari~* on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 6:42 AM
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shinjukudream

 
Very moving and like moon which is constant, so is change a constant event in all lives.
Very beautiful lyrics!
 
Posted by shinjukudream on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 7:10 AM
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margerdei

 
The moon always makes me aware of how there is so much more in the universe than just me. I am always inspired by the moon.


Very nice poem about the moon *.
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Posted by margerdei on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 7:49 AM
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Quaff's #1 Fangirl!

 
Beautiful words! :D
 
Posted by Quaff's #1 Fangirl! on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 9:22 AM
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Lilith

 
ahhh just lovely <333333
 
Posted by Lilith on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 10:44 AM
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Model Wendy Michelle
Wendy Michelle

 
Beautiful. And I love that song.
^_^
 
Posted by Model Wendy Michelle on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 11:28 AM
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Susanne
Susanne MCCLAIN

 
looking at the lyrics, i knew it would be a great song. seeing the video and hearing it, i was proven right. that is a wonderful song. maybe you should do a cover of that, having ryoko's voice sing it. that would be amazing.

 
Posted by Susanne on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 11:29 AM
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[†Jeanni†]

 
oh, what a awsome pic! O___o

I think...I touch the moon intrinsically!!.... xDD

Daisuki....<3
 
Posted by [†Jeanni†] on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 12:08 PM
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Ashura

 
Is this the lyrics from that song or is this something new...?



Anyway, very nice.
I see you are writting a lot, I wonder if something happen to you lately?



PS: That pic looking at the sky is my favourite, I like to take pics of people like this! (Well I just have 1 for now...)
 
Posted by Ashura on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 12:41 PM
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Kristina
Kristina Abrams

 
"I added commentary on my latest blog so its more understandable I think ><"

Aww. It was very lovely Tomo.

I didnt really think you needed the commentary. It seems rather self explanatory.
^ ^
I think I've said it once and I'll say it again...
You are a very good writer. Keep up the good work.

I enjoy reading your blogs -especially ones like these...
Hope you have a wonderful day today, and hope to hear from you soon!~



 
Posted by Kristina on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 1:26 PM
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yuki
yuki yuki

 
touching
 
Posted by yuki on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 1:53 PM
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Peelander Sweet Strawberry ♥ o(≧∀≦)o
Bretlin McFarland

 
I LOVE that picture!!! Its SO pretty!
 
Posted by Peelander Sweet Strawberry ♥ o(≧∀≦)o on Friday, April 03, 2009 - 8:18 PM
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Tyrant

 
D: Tomooo

Damn home-slice.


This is...touching.


Sad..but also hopeful <3



Love Much!
 
Posted by Tyrant on Saturday, April 04, 2009 - 5:30 AM
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Seasun
Umi Tsuki

 
so many experience...which one has to go through and move forward w/ chin up...(head up)but enjoy those lovely moments that they had together..^___^ (no regrets...look forward to a new beginning )

 
Posted by Seasun on Saturday, April 04, 2009 - 5:13 PM
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tattered dirt and stacked rubbish

 
i know tha feeling.. sometimes i just sit there and look at the moon i wish the person i had on my mind was looking to so then i would feel closer to them maybe they were
 
Posted by tattered dirt and stacked rubbish on Saturday, April 04, 2009 - 11:36 PM
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Boh☆
Sakura Kozakura

 
I'd like to listen to this poem with melody. Which is original? English or Japanese. I think the Japanese must be so beautiful with the melody. And easier to count the beat, but I'm not sure. I had been played Japanese drums for over the 20 years from I was a little girl. So this poem feeling is so Japanese I think. I t must be beautiful number with the melody I'm sure.



 
Posted by Boh☆ on Sunday, April 05, 2009 - 4:07 AM
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Anshin

 
Nice Tomo....keep doing it!
 
Posted by Anshin on Monday, April 06, 2009 - 8:00 AM
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「 Cristal 」

 
*o*... oohh.. how touching.. I love it
 
Posted by 「 Cristal 」 on Tuesday, April 07, 2009 - 12:15 AM
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Toot
Screw U

 
nice
 
Posted by Toot on Wednesday, April 08, 2009 - 2:45 AM
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Nina

 
it's amazing!)
 
Posted by Nina on Saturday, April 11, 2009 - 4:11 PM
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...el

 
Nice.

 
Posted by ...el on Thursday, April 16, 2009 - 11:21 PM
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septembersin
Keiko Veronica

 
love it...=]

 
Posted by septembersin on Tuesday, May 26, 2009 - 3:46 PM
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∀ i k o ♥

 
Beautiful ♥
 
Posted by ∀ i k o ♥ on Thursday, June 11, 2009 - 12:02 AM
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Ch3rish
Cherish Vang

 
tomo-san...i wonder if u have someone by your side to hold you and cherish you....you've been through so much....i have always wonder if that person u talk about is you?....i answer that question myself because i hv a feeling that that person is you....

 
Posted by Ch3rish on Wednesday, July 15, 2009 - 6:36 AM
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