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July 6, 2008 - Sunday 

 
Nail.  That was his name, yep.
He was a little person.  He was mighty.  Everybody at The Chambers called him Nail.
 
Nail had talents.  He could play golf like that Tiger fellow only with more pizazz.  On the green, he was known to be quite fancy. 
He spoke 6 languages fluently and Josephine was quite sure that if you dropped him deep into any unknown  he'd be gathering stories in the native tongue in no time.
 
That was Nail.
 
The Pennybrides were quite taken with him.  Not your ordinary security guy but as safe as one should be.
He knew what to do and how to do it.  Nobody questioned him.
 
He liked one Pennybride in particular.  Her name was Candida. She was one of the fire heads, red and tall.  She was kind and loud.  She talked a streak that led all the way back to Nail every time.
She had a thing for him, too.
They'd talk late on the porch after they'd both bounced a full night of it.  They talked about everything and he even got the watermouth to listen every now and again.
It was sweet and odd just like all good relationships are.
 
Nail had some secrets.  Candida had none.  She noticed the way he held back but never pressed.  Odd for the talky miss.
He'd tell her one day..


 

Script Man

 
Well this is the final installment and I enjoyed reading them. These stories of Josephine are creative and visual, you just need to figure out organization that's if you desire to make this into a complete story. I hope I have encouraged you to continue with your talents...for my job is to be an encourager...even if I never make it as a writer, I will know that I helped inspire other writers.....If you want to turn this into something...you will need this software: FINAL DRAFT 7 it is natural and easy for all professional and creative Screenwriters.....http://finaldraft. com/products/final-draft/index. php?OVRAW=Final%20Draft%207&OVKEY=final%20draft%207&OVMTC=standard&OVADID=4447313011&OVKWID=14539639511.... Also here is a site where you can read movie scripts instantly for free and no download...just click on the movies from A-Z! This will give you a visual of what a polished script should look like and how it should be structured in industrial standards:....http://www. simplyscripts. com/movie. html.... If you consider turning your story into a script, or if you have any questions or comments hit me up and we can talk...you are in the IE so we can always chat to if you like.....-Moses
 
Posted by Script Man on January 15, 2009 - Thursday - 7:43 PM
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