Well, for starters I absolutely have no idea if I spelled "hooray" right, but whatever. No one (except for dorks like me) really uses that word anymore as it is. So, here's my work for today, feedback welcome.

Morning Eyes

Startling. Yet subtle.
To enumerate the strands of green would be pointless.
I'd drown, slip, lose my breath.
Evocative and sultry, however askance almost unnerving.
As if with no reminiscence of the night before.
Passion-seeking, lust-driven anxiety all enigmatically entwined in a single blink.
A flick of innocence.
Flashed.
Then stolen.
A momentary locked glimpse.
I scream and shudder on the inside.
Ephemeral lapse of all previous consciousness.
It lures me in with bated breath
waiting for it all to crash.
Then I slowly drift back to sleep.